ON THE NIGHT OF THE DANCE
Zak's parents gave him a tuxe with a hidden camra on it so they could moniter everything that's happening without zak knowing. They droped him off at the dance and then said goodbye and drove away. when they were out of site they turnrd the camra on and stared waching. Zak walkedd into the room and saw autumn standing there. She was wearing a blue dress with black leging and her hair was put up and she was wereing a butefull neckless wich autumn did not know that argost hade put a camra in her nackless.
"You look great" Zak told her. "Thanks you to" So they talked for awile and then a song came on and just as they were about to dance argost jumped in and the saturdays. "What are you doing here" The saturdays said and doyle was with them. "Well what are you doing here" Argost yelled. So they got into a big fight and argost tolk out some wepen but when he fired it he missed and it hit the building and the building fell to the grould. When the spoke cleared argost was gone and so was autumn. "You gays what are you doing" Zak yelled at them. "Zak we didn't want to tell you but she the chiled of argost" They tolded him.
It was morning now Zak was sitting on a rock at the top of a hill by the school waching his parent's build the school walked up to him then said "Well some crazy dance" Zak said nothing. "Ya i fighered you would not want to talked to me now that you know how my dad is" Then she stared to walk away but zak grabed her hand and said "We never got to dance" Then they stared dancing right there even though no music was playing.
what do you think the end is pretty romantic well please review