WOO I got a chapter out the day I planned lol!
Ricwi – that's for the review! As for the bloodline limit that's probably my biggest up and coming dilemma for the story. I actually did originally plan for it to be a eye jutsu since they usually are pretty cool but yea I'd like it to be more unique than that. I know of what I want him to be able to with it since my plans for the first akatuski and jiraiya run in are going to depend on its abilities. Idk I might end up doing a eye technique but I honestly want to try to come up with something else without making it obnoxious and classy instead.
DISCLAIMER I don't own Naruto blah blah, anything that resembles anything else in this story is complete coincidence unless I admit it.
===Chapter 6===
Two days Later
"Shit I still don't know how to do it yet!" Screamed Naruto in his head getting frustrated that his time is up and he has yet to even come close at attempting demon form, or so he thinks.
"Well kit you're not in as bad a situation as you might think, you did complete the second phase in two days" Said Kyuubi.
"How the hell am I NOT in a bad situation!! Yes, I completed the second phase but my times up and I can't do demon form yet!" Shouted Naruto who was panicking immensely since he knew he was pretty much screwed in this situation.
"But it's not as b…" Kyuubi tried to explain before Naruto cut him off.
"Dammit! I don't have time for this!" said Naruto as he raced back towards town. "It's still morning, if they want to use these killings to throw the villagers deeper into despair then they will probably try to kill them around noon when the most people would be around"
"Heh, maybe it's better this way. He doesn't know it but he already learned most of what he needs to in order to go into demon form, he just needs a push. He doesn't even realize he still has his normal chakra suppressed and is only using his own demonic chakra right now. This should be interesting" Thought Kyuubi as Naruto continued racing towards town.
Once Naruto got back to town he immediately headed for Akiko's house, but upon arriving found out that no one was home.
"Come on where is she…" thought Naruto out loud.
A villager passing by heard Naruto. "She was taken by those ninja…" and he continued to walk along with a demoralized face.
"They took her!?" Naruto looked around from where he was. "Where are those bastards!" he then took off towards the center of the town.
"This is where they killed her parents… hmm I know!" Naruto got an idea to kill two birds with one stone. "Everyone listen! You need to evacuate the town center immediately! For your own safety against the sound ninja you must get away from here!"
The town center eventually cleared. "Well this is it, now that it's clear I won't have to worry about others getting involved. This should also of gotten the sound ninja's attention"
Sure enough…
"And who the fuck do you think you are kid?" asked one of the sound-nin as they both appeared with the fishermen and Akiko.
"It appears the boy thinks he's a ninja. I assume you believe you can stop us right brat?" asked the other sound-nin.
Naruto glared at them, "That's right bastards, for everything you have done to this town and its people, I will kill you!" shouted Naruto.
"Ha! In your dreams kid. Hey Masaru, watch over the sacrifices while I beat this little shit into the ground" Said the obnoxious sound-nin to Masaru, his partner.
"Just don't take too long…" Replied Masaru as his partner walked towards Naruto.
"Yea yea don't worry about that, this brat won't last a minute" he said as he stopped a few feet from Naruto.
Naruto only kept his glare on him.
"My, that's a pretty nasty look you got there brat. By the way my names Shouta, I thought you might want to know the name of the one who's going to end your life" said Shouta smirking.
Naruto raised his hands into his Kage Bunshin seal and created four clones.
"Oh, Kage Bunshin? Surprised a dipshit like you can do that" said Shouta.
Three clones charged Shouta while the last assisted Naruto in forming a Rasengan and charged as well.
Shouta quickly destroyed the three clones when he saw the last clone and the real Naruto right in front of him with the clone in front of the real Naruto.
Shouta was about to kick the clone when his eyes grew wide when it was destroyed before he moved for it seeing Naruto with a Rasengan about to make contact. "Fuck! He used that clone anticipating that I would make a move to destroy it putting me in a position in which I can't defend the real attack!"
Right as Naruto was about to connect with his Rasengan Shouta was able to quickly grab his wrist and force Naruto's jutsu into the ground creating a crater while Shouta jumped back.
"Hey Shouta, he almost got you there, you sure you can take him?" asked Masaru sarcastically.
"Fuck you Masaru! This kid's garbage!" said Shouta now looking back towards Naruto to find him charging at him once again.
"That's not going to work moron!" Shouted Shouta at Naruto but then that Naruto poofed.
"What th-" Shouta wasn't able to finish as he realized there were two Naruto's coming at him from both sides with Rasengan's.
Shouta quickly jumped up causing the two Naruto's to destroy each other.
"Ha you idio-" Shouta was about to insult Naruto again until he saw yet another Naruto above him with a Rasengan. "SHIT!"
Finally this one connected sending Shouta hurling towards the ground. Naruto landed a few feet from him panting.
"Shouta are you done now?" taunted Masaru again.
"I told you to shut up!" Replied Shouta slowly getting back onto his feet. "Fucking kid, that hurt like hell!"
Naruto looked up seeing Shouta get up after being hit head on by his Rasengan. "Dammit, how can he still get up after that!" thought Naruto getting frustrated.
"You're taking too long Shouta, I've had enough" said Masaru as he appeared behind Naruto and knocked him out…
45 minutes later
Naruto was coming around as he slowly opened his eyes, widening them once he saw where he was and what was before him.
He was in the town center but the frightened people returned, but what shocked him was what was in front of him. There was the town fishermen and Akiko on their knees in front of everyone. He then noticed that he too was on his knees facing them with his hands tied and ankles tied.
"Alright now listen the fuck up people! This town belongs to lord Orochimaru!" Shouted Shouta.
"No! No it doesn't you bastard, it belongs to the innocent people who live here!"
"And to make sure you understand that, we will be executing the people before you to make you realize that no matter what you do, that since lord Orochimaru owns this town, that also means he owns those apart of this town!"
"No! That bastard doesn't own them!"
"Now watch as your fellow villagers here perish!" Shouted Shouta again as he raised his kunai in the air above the first fishermen.
"NO!!" Screamed Naruto as he fell forward in a miserable attempt to move. Then he heard the crowd gasp. When he looked up he was frozen, there was the fishermen dead on the ground with Shouta holding a bloody kunai above him.
"STOP IT!!!" Screamed Naruto again as yet a second fishermen was executed.
"WHY! WHY! WHY CAN'T I DO ANYTHING?!"
The last fishermen was executed by being beheaded. Naruto continued to watch as Shouta kicked the head of the man into the crowd laughing.
"THIS CAN'T BE! IT'S NOT RIGHT! I CAN'T DO ANYTHING!"
Then Shouta approached Akiko.
"NO!! NOT HER!! SHE DIDN'T DO ANYTHING!!" screamed Naruto flailing about on the ground in desperation.
Shouta looked down at Naruto. "This is life brat, it is cruel, deal with it" and with those words Shouta slit Akiko's throat.
"N-Naru-" Akiko tried to say but fell dead before she could finish.
The life from Naruto disappeared, he was in complete frozen shock.
Shouta looked over at Naruto. "Well well well, looks like we finally shut that crybaby up!"
The emptiness Naruto felt at that moment soon slowly turned into anger and complete hatred for the two sound-ninja in front of him.
He started to grind his teeth and clenched his hands as red chakra started to glow around him. Beneath his incredible anger Naruto felt like his blood was on fire as he started growl. Claws slowly formed on his hands as did his fangs.
The burn in his blood became too great for him to take, "ARGHAHHHHHHH!" screamed Naruto as his hair grew down to his lower back before turning to the color black all the while still glowing from the red chakra.
"Hey Masaru! What the fuck is this kid doing!?" asked Shouta starting to panic slightly. The rest of the villagers started to flee.
"I have no idea…" replied Masaru watching Naruto's form intently.
Soon a black furred fox like tail emerged from Naruto, then finally his eyes slanted slightly and turned yellow with a slit pupil.
The pain started to fade as he ripped the rope that bound him.
Naruto was still looking down, "I'll never forgive you for what you have done here" he said in a deeper and slightly more animalistic voice. He slowly stood up, "However, rest assure, I will kill you!" he said quickly raising his head glaring and sending off as much killer intent he could muster towards the sound duo.
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Next Update: April 24, 2009 (will be around this time +/- 1 day. I already have it written)
So I have the basic plot and where I want to go with this story in my head and on paper a bit however when I get into specific situations such as this chapter and in terms of how stuff specifically happens, I come up with it on the spot as I'm writing which I assume most writers do anyway. Now I'm not sure if I went too overboard with this chapter but Naruto is going to end up being slightly more mature than he usually is and to get him to that point it requires some shocks to his world. Besides I think a story is too corny when Naruto can save every single person and wins at everything, just like I had Shouta say, "this is life" and I think a story MUST follow this to some degree or the characters are too godlike in which the story becomes too childish. But I am trying to satisfy my readers so if you think that was too much then let me know. I'm not going to change my mind by one or two people or if I do you would have to have a very convincing reply lol.
Any who, thank you to all my readers so far and keep those reviews coming!