I have written about 6 more chapters but I wont put them up unless people tell me they like it. So you have been warned XD
Chapter 2Naruto
"The nerve of that guy"
He mumbled but then he bumped into this girl with intense brown eyes and long straight black hair. She had bangs like Itachi's. She had a small body but with a big butt. She was wearing all black under her uniform, with a spiked collar. She looked like a punk. They both fell on there asses.
"Oh gomen-nasi, and allow me to introduce myself, my name is Amiratsu Melissa. I'm sorry, I wasn't paying attention to were I was going."
A book fell from the sky and hit Naruto on the head and it was an advanced chemistry book have you seen how big they are!
"OUCH, no it's alright, I hope I didn't bump into you to hard. My name is Uzumaki Naruto. And if you don't mind me saying Amiratsu Melissa is an interesting name. Where are you from?"
"Oh that, I just moved here. I'm from the Star village"
He rubs his head sheepishly for embarrassment of being hit on the head with the book. She chuckles a little bit.
(Naruto's mind: finally someone friendly)
"Um can you show me were the Hokage's office is? I'm new here."
"Oh yes you go straight on this first hall, take a right, and there you will see big doors and that's her office"
"Arigato Melissa-Chan I'll see you around"
"Bye Naruto-kun good luck"
And he was off to his Hokage
Naruto's story:
Uzumaki Naruto was originally from Konoha but his parents were assigned to a mission and were given permission to bring the newborn child. But when the Uzumaki's came back, they saw flames covering the entrance of the village when they got around it the village was in the middle of battle with the Kyuubi fox everyone was trying there best to hold back the fox. Baby Naruto was on his mother's back startled and began to cry. Naruto's mother put Naruto next to the father that was helping people who were a trapped in the fire. Naruto's mother was the first to die when she tried to hold off the fox with the third Hokage by her side. Soon the screams of agony caught the attention of Naruto's father and the sight that he saw was the most horrific he had ever seen. His true love was burned to ashes in front of his eyes. The decision he made next made his heart break in a million pieces. But it had to be done or the village would parish with his son and the decision would keep his son alive. He grabbed his son's fragile body and got right in front of the Kyuubi fox and formed a number of seals. The third knew what those seals meant and his eyes became glassy. Naruto's dad felt it and said it was ok. He was done with the seals and screamed out the name of the jutsu and sealed the Kyuubi in to baby Naruto's body. Jiraiya was at his side and told him to take care of his little boy. Everyone that was close saw the heart breaking scene and everyone wept for Konoha's greatest heroes. Jiraiya picked up his old student and Naruto in his arms everyone that could not see the tragedy were screaming hurray the Kyuubi is dead. Once Jiriya was walking everyone stepped aside and bowed their heads to show respect. Jiraiya was crying for the very first time. When the funeral came for both Naruto's parents the sky was pitch black with rain that wanted to pour. Everyone was there people from other villages to because one way or another Naruto's parents helped them out.
When the ceremony was over everyone went home, except two people, Jiraiya and Naruto. Then a person in the shadows came and talked to Jiriya, he handed Naruto the person. The person was the third Hokage and he said he would take care of Naruto. The people of Konoha wanted to blame someone for the death of their hero. Most people didn't see the part were Naruto's dad did the hand seals. And the elder and children of that time knew that Naruto had the Kyuubi sealed in side of him. So the only person left to blame was Naruto. So rumors started to spread that Naruto was the demon, that he was not human. Whenever they saw the baby they sneered and called it names and shout terrible things. The third called a meeting to all of Konoha, and that everyone must attend. A new law was made. It states that from now on no one must speak of the child Naruto and tell no one that the Kyuubi is sealed inside of him; if any of you dare break this law they will face the death penalty. Everyone was silenced. From that day on, no one spoke of it. That didn't stop them from giving Naruto dirty looks. The elder separated their children from playing with Naruto.
When Naruto was 6, the third put Naruto in the ninja academy he did poorly but passed. When Naruto was 12 he went to live on his own because he didn't want to be a burden to the third. The third loved Naruto like a son but could never spend time with him because he had the responsibility of being Hokage. So he moved around with his sensei Jiraiya they traveled the world. All around the world Jiraiya found out that everyone knows about the Kyuubi being sealed in Naruto and hated the boy. When Naruto went to ninja academies in different countries they treated Naruto the same, with hate. The worst part of the trips was when Jiraiya was waiting for Naruto but he never showed up and so decided to find him. On his way find Naruto, he got distracted when something caught his eye. It was orange. He found Naruto in an empty ally. Naruto was beaten and stabbed. Jiraiya was relieved that the wounds were already healing. He carried him back to the hotel room. That was the last time he'd let Naruto walk home by himself. When Naruto gained consciousness Jiraiya told Naruto that he had the Kyuubi sealed inside of him but told nothing more. When all that passed they headed back to Konoha when Naruto turned 15 to start high school as a Chunnin.
The way I see it is that ninja students are in elementary school, genin are middle school, Chunnin are high school, jonin are college, anbu are graduated, and Hokage is I guess president, emperor, ect.
Jiraiya left Naruto a VERY large sum of money to start a new life in Konoha. The first thing on his things to do was to find an apartment. He chose a one bedroom that was really small. He chose it in a very poor neighborhood because most people wouldn't accept him. They just laughed and through stuff at him. After that he went job hunting which was really hard because people wouldn't let a monster work for them so he worked outside of Konoha and worked at a little training ground, after that he bought all the necessary things for his rundown apartment. Hey he was a teenager so he then bought a really cool car. He lived on his own from the day he was born, sure there was the third and Jiraiya but they were always to busy so he did everything on his own.
(Back to story)
Naruto went to the Hokage's office, but didn't see the third. What he saw was a light blonde haired lady with long pigtails. She had the most humongous breast he had ever seen. Naruto was this close to yelling so he said this in the sweetest way his voice would allow.
"Um hi I'm new here. My name is Uzumaki Naruto. Um may I ask WHY YOUR IN THE THIRD HOKAGE'S CHAIR OLD HAG?"
He really did try to suppress his anger but it came out louder than intended. He could see her left eye twitching uncontrollably. She stood up as calmly as possible, but as soon as she was standing up straight she slammed her fist into the desk as hard as could and the desk broke into a million pieces.
"WHO THE HELL YOU TALKING TO BRAT!"
"WHO DO YOU THINK OLD HAG? IT THERE SOMEONE ELSE IN THE ROOM THAT I DON'T KNOW ABOUT?"
Then suddenly a lady with short black hair with a pig in her hands came in.
"Is there something wrong Tsunade-sama?"
She took a deep breath and said…
"No everything is alright Shizune. So Mr. Uzumaki what gave you the right to barge into my office and YELL AT ME?"
Naruto took a breath and looked at this so-called Tsunade-sama.
"I have the right because you're not the HOKAGE!"
"Please Uzumaki-kun listen, my name is Shizune and this is Tsunade-sama the fifth Hokage"
Shizune sighed as Naruto calmed down
"So what happened to the third?"
"We will inform you of that once school is over come to this office and we will tell you alright?"
"Hai"
"Well as you already know I am the fifth Hokage and yes I am aware that you were with Jiraiya-sensei these past few years, welcome to Konoha high school. I have your schedule ready. Here's a map of the school. I expect to see great things from you Naruto. DISSMISSED!"
I had this serious face on and then grabbed his schedule, then saluted and said…
"HAI!"
He then left.
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