First off, I plan to try to get up to ch 4 by the end of the week, I really hope, so im gonna do my best since its my first story, so you lucked out since im so committed *laughs boastfully*…….anyways, I figured how to spell myobokuzan and this ch will be about the negotiations, and a preview of naruto's abilities in myobokuzan, though he might seem strong now hes not invincible, I mean its adventure hes gotta struggle a bit to make it seem good, well onwards *presses play on the remote*

I don't own naruto…………………..dont rub it in

'thought'

"speech"

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"Right now, well we just got here, we don't even know where were going, how were going to convince him, or if we need a plan B?" an exasperated kakashi stated. "don't worry, we have It all planned, youre going to the base of with fukusaku, from there, youll trek up to the summit,meet with naruto, and remind him of his bonds here in konoha, and show the regretfullness the village has towards his banishment." At the mention of his banishment, all of the rookie 9 cringed, after pein had been defeated, and the seal was reinforced again, naruto fought sasuke, and won, finally bringing him home instead of letting sasuke destroy it as he planned, 2 weeks later along with the rest of konoha he fought akatsuki, finally ending naruto's fears of capture and sasuke going back to konoha. Because of the state of konoha though, sasuke was welcomed back like a king as his genes could stop any thought of war fom Iwa or Mizu and no punishment was issued, though to naruto, this was only good news. It seemed Naruto's life was going back to normal. Unfortunately, with the release of the eight tailed kyuubi, everyone's irrational fear of the kyuubi came back full throttle meaning Danzo pushed for him to be banished, at first Tsunade fought him tooth-and-nail on the subject, and naruto thought it would pass, but as his fears died down, old ones resurfaced, the biggest being his friends ignoring him for sasuke, which came true, this along with the villagers, made naruto personally accept his banishment. After that, besides Iruka,Tsunade, the konohamaru corp, and the rookie 9 years later realizing their mistake, no one missed naruto, and the high morale made the village rebuilt quickly, but at a dire cost, Suna's alliance was cut, due to Gaara calling konoha "something that was put on this planet simply to reaffirm my old ideals on how humans should be treated." With Suna gone, konoha began to overwork it's ninja, pushing everyone to their limits, all the while not caring, as long as the kyuubi was gone. In time, stability returned, but Iwa had sent ninja to the border and completely decimated the patrol group, and left a message. "War's shadow looms on Konoha, our military has become the greatest." With this finally, came the realization that Naruto was needed

"Snap out of it, I don't care how you feel, you abandoned him and left him to rot, for that you deserve his hate, the least you can do is try to atone for past mistakes, understood." Barked Tsunade. The whole group bowed with a "hai" and left with fukusaku to the outside, where in a few seconds were poofed, miles away to myobokuzan. After getting their barrings, fukusaku lead them to the top, which he estimated to be around 30 min or so. After 20 minutes or so, Sakura came up to fukusaku and asked "does naruto talk about anyone from konoha at all anymore?" Fukusaku who never knew why humans lied until now, seeing the desperation in their eyes after she asked, though if he did lie it'd only hurt them more when they found out. "Yes, he does, but not in a positive way, his dreams are very violent with you, he sees himself overcoming the kyuubi, only to take out his rage on konoha with the kyuubi's power, this was one of the reasons I've continued his sage training, if he can become a true sage, hopefully that rage will die down, as of yet, I've seen no improvement from day one on his attitute towards you, so be very cautious when you speak to him." With that the whole of the group save kakashi, hinata, neji, and sasuke looked down with guilt ridden faces, but knew that if he came back, a chance at forgiveness was there, and that helped to continue on the path.

When they reached the summit, they were gifted with a beautiful view of the sage summit. Hundreds of stone toads, each meditating, a beautiful waterfall, long trees and plants. "Incredible, to think such a place existed, and within the fire countries border no doubt." Kakashi exclaimed, while the others looked around, fukusaku quickly retracted with "don't touch the statues, the waterfall, or the plants, the statues are actual sages, who failed to use sage chakra, the waterfall is oil that will turn you into a frog if one cannot control sage chakra, and the plants are vital to the ecosystem, knocking one down by accident could be disastrous." With the thought of becoming a toad in their heads, all sweatdropped back to the center with fukusaku, making sure no liquids were near them. With that, fukusaku yelled "NARUTO, GET DOWN FROM WHERE EVER YOU ARE, WE NEED TO TALK." All was quiet for a few minutes.

"akamaru, can you smell him at all?" kiba asked. Akamaru, though couldn't sense much, and whined at his master. "Kuso, akamaru's got nothing, is he gone, did he know we were coming?" "Yes, I did." And with that Naruto sprang from the trees above and landed perfectly on his two feet. In front of them was not the hyper-active looking ninja they knew, but instead a completely foreign looking naruto, sporting hair longer then the girls though manly looking sporting the spikes like he had as a child at the end of his hair, eyes bluer then the ocean, and the seal fully visible for all to see now, along with his new height of 6ft 2 in, and a muscled body that made him seem like a bodybuilder(AN:just picture arnold scwarzennege from terminator 2). "What the hell do you pathetic ninja want, im busy, say it quick and leave." With that harsh tone, even sasuke backed off from naruto, afraid the bond he'd try to sever for years had truly died, and all aspects of pity within naruto had died. "Naruto, its us don't you remember?" sakura hastily asked. "Of course I know who you are, idiot, what am I, stupid, I just don't care why you're here, get lost, im banished remember?" with that insult flung at sakura so quickly everyone was afriad now, for if naruto of all people insulted sakura, he truly didn't want to see them, nonetheless, they had something to say, and they were going to say it. "naruto, we've come to ask for you to come back to konoha, and help us reunite Suna, and help win the war against Iwa, Mizu, and Oto." As kakashi explained this, naruto's hand found it's way to kakashi's throat. "Why would I help you idiots, remember im banished?" Naruto sneered. With kakashi incapacitated, fukusaku quickly beat his student. "Calm down, now!" and with a quick swipe of his fan, Naruto reluctantly let go. "now were going to go to the house, wait for Ma to cook up some grub, and were going to talk like adults, understand naruto?" Naruto nodded and left for the house, but not before saying "should we set up more chairs for those guys?" as he pointed to the trees, 5 oto nin came out, while one of them, the smallest around 5ft5in clapped his hands.

"Well done, naruto-sama, were known for hiding our chakra well, but you knew immediately we were here, you truly live up to your reputation." "OTO NIN, fall back!" kakashi quickly yelled. "no no we did'nt come to fight, truth be told, we wish to talk as well to naruto-sama about the war and what he can do for oto, Iwa, and Mizu." As both parties stared each other down naruto quickly said "Oto guy, speak up quickly while my interest is peeked!" "very well naruto-sama, allow me to tell you the propostion my master has made for you, in exchange for being the general of all three countries militaries throughout the war against Suna, Kumo, and Konoha, our master guarantees sanctuary to myobokuzan, as well as any other village or area you wish, as well as whatever drink, food, or woman you desire whenever you desire it." He said. Naruto seemed to ponder this thought and seemed to smile as he kept thinking, much to the konoha nin's displeasure.

"Well then that's pretty generous, hey konoha, what'ch offering me to counter such a luscious package huh?" the group was shocked to say the least, to think the angelic naruto they knew, willing to kill hundreds on the flesh of women, booze, and food, the naruto they knew had truly died. "we….we don't have anything to offer, our economy is back to normal, but we cant promise anything except the sanctuary thing they did, we thought that you would come back to us if you knew how sorry we were." Sakura cried, afraid that her life along with everyone's in konoha might die to naruto's hands. "JEEZ, that's it, come on now, im gonna at least need something, uh, maybe banish some nin that beat me up as a kid, let me beat the crap out of the villagers, luxorious hotel room, not my shabby apartment, come on at least try to get me, im prime nin meat, a trump card!" naruto laughed. "hey you oto nin, you like sake, I buy some in a village not too far from here, lets talk about this "general" position, I like it." As naruto started to walk away from them, sakura yelled "PLEASE NARUTO, THIS WAR HAS LEFT SO MANY ORPHANED CHILDREN, PLEASE HELP STOP THEIR PAIN." With that yell Naruto stopped in his tracks completely and turned around. "you mean on both sides or just your sides casualtied children?" She quickly tried to compose herself knowing this could bring him back. "we take in all orphaned children, we don't discriminate, theres so many, the only up side is our children don't hate them, they look happy even without parents, but as many bcome adopted, more come in, please this war is horror for them, you can stop it, please bring peace to this land!" Naruto thought, and quickly turned to the oto nin. "please leave, I wont kill you, but if I see you on the battlefield I will kill you, go now, I have a job, my hell in childhood will not be brought to anyone else, not even if it means going to konoha, it's a hell I wouldn't wish on anyone."

The oto nin quickly composed himself, whispered something to his 4 subordinates, and took out a kunai, as the others took out their giant maces, all scaled to their large frame. "im sorry, but I must insist we discuss further, while I do feel for those children, orphans are nothing but the casualties of war" .With that, one of the oto nin's throat was slashed, with claws that came out of his nails, along with red eyes and canines. "THEY NEVER ASKED TO BE A CASUALTY OF WAR, THEY WERE MADE CASUALTIES, AND ANYONE WHO THINKS OTHERWISE ILL KILL AND PERSONALLY SEND TO HELL!" With that said all of the rookie 9 looked both happy and scared at naruto's change of heart, and his ferocious attitude. "We've been trained to deal with youre chakra and abilities, that one's death was sheer luck, I assure you." As he said that however, something made his and his subordinates lose control of their movement as they saw a large barred room with a quickly amassing orange chakra form a kitsune, as each stared at it, it soon roared, pulsating power and chakra throughout the whole room. Back in the real world, each save for the smallest one had lost consciousness. As naruto slit each one's throat so they wouldn't interfere, the small man got up and said "impress…ive never…..before would I have thought the kyuubi could be tamed like a pet, truly you bring the name of sage to its highest honor, even more of a shame you must die!" as he began to weave signs, naruto simply stood his ground and waited. With the last seal the man shouted "Fuuton: Renuukdan." As the air bullets came towards him naruto simply scratched himself on the neck complaining of a rash he was getting from the mosquitoes. Soon though everyone became worried and shouted "naruto, you idiot dodge it!" sasuke yelled but just as he yelled that, the bullets simply hit him, opening up cuts all over naruto's body.

As naruto was done scratching his neck he went to serious mode and said " you insult fuuton users this is how you use the wind element." As he said that, he put one hand to the side and put his fingers to form a ball, and used the other hand to form a fist which he pointed to the man. " one hand, s'all I need to win, well the other hand's got something to do as well." And with that he rushed forward and punched the man only for it to be blocked. " give me credit naruto-sama, a straight forward punch, a genin could stop that!" but as he finshed that sentence the hand squeezed his fist and kept the nin in place while the other simply began to absorb chakra, to form the Fuuton:Rasengan. "THIS IS HOW ONE USES THE WIND AAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH" and with that the mans face was dragged to the rasengans core, his one hand dragging the man forward, the other hand moving the rasengan forward, but as he did the man shunshinned away appearing in the air. Taking out shuriken he yelled "Kage shuriken no jutsu" ,as the shuriken moved forward, naruto simply stood there and said " jeez, I said I was gonna show you the wind, I didn't say immediately, now then, let me finish this again………EAT WIND DUMBASS" immediately a shadow clone appeared behind the man, and dug his wind rasengan through the man's chest. As he tried to figure out when the clone was made, a large shuriken was heading towards him, but upon closer inspection and his hearing, he saw it was a shuriken made of chakra. "dammit, when did he learn to throw it, the report said kakuzu died by a head on strike uhhhhhh, cant breathe, DAMMIT" and as soon as he uttered his last word, the sky was shredded to bits, and a mist of blood sprayed the sky. Naruto coldly replied "just a casualty of war, right, dumbass?" . As he looked on to the other 3 he saw one start to breathe raspily. "good, I hoped one lived, I need to find something out."

Naruto quickly went to the man and asked who his master is now and where he is, but the only reply was "hahahahahahaha, baka, if we don't come back by tomorrow, our master is to assume you denied both sides, and as such will burn myobokuzan to the ground, with no village that will accept you, you will slowly become insane and kill whoever crosses your path, well lose soldiers just as much as konoha, but we have the resources to lose them, konoha doesn't in the end, our master will just wait till you kill everyone in your path and tame you to be a obedient pet,hahahahahahahahahaHAHAHAHAHAHaHAHAH…uhhhhhhhh!" and with that the man's throat and head was slashed to shreds. After solemly looking at myobokuzan, he said "if I join you guys, will they still burn myobokuzan?" "No, if you clearly fight for us, they'll concentrate on us, and think you gave up myobokuzan to fight for konoha, they'll be to worried about you actually concentrating on fighting them to care about burning myobokuzan." With that naruto stood up, went to the house and came back with a shirt on. "im guessing its still necesarry to wear a shirt and pants not just pants in konoha still?" Everyone smiled "Yeah." With those smiles though naruto frowned and said "DON'T YOU DARE SMILE AT ME, WHAT YOU DID TO ME WILL NEVER BE FORGIVEN, THE ONLY REASON IM DOING THIS IS TO PROTECT MY TRUE HOME, MYOBOKUZAN AND THOSE KIDS, GOT IT!" the whole of them stood back and frowned. "if it werent for those orphans and this place, you'd be burning by my hand personally right now, got it?" As they backed up and solemly nodded naruto finally said "lets go then, im ready to go back to hell."

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Wow, that was a lot to type, well im gonna answer some thoughts ive gotten on the story so far, the narusaku lemon I might do, maybe, like I said naruto does have limits, but for now, hes pretty much badass for the next few ch's. the fight scene sucked im sorry, the fights in the later ch's will definetely be better I promise, and if you want narusaku, ch 3 will give, but I gotta limit your dosage, junkies lol