I have decided to start from scratch on this story because i have noticed that it is choppy and I also have to go back and I have to look back on some of the characters personalities.
I am sorry if I have confused the my readers and for the choppiness I planned for everything to have the domino effect. One after the other but it hasn't and all I gave you guys was the WTF effect.
So I am going to rewrite the story and try not to be so choppy and I also had the little girl, ebony, and Garth tied in differently.
So once again I am saying that im going to rewrite the story and hopefully you guys like it