I just viewed my reviews, and again, I will make small chapter, but numerous ones. Ajedi32, I loved your review! Lord Kelvin, not so much. I want creative criticism, not the stuff you posted. Why do you go on fan fiction, as you hate it so much. Please do not 'review' again. For those that can, Enjoy the story.
Cupcakes body was lowed to the ground. Bluestars powerful voice seemed to shake the forest. "Rise, all three of you!" The three young cats rose. Bluestar addressed Greypaw first, "I was wondering how you would deal with multiple intruders. You did amazingly well!" She then addressed Rusty and Cupcake. "Kittypets, what are your names?" Rusty stammered. " I'mmm, ummmm Rr-Rusty annnnd uhh… this is …" "Cupcake." Cupcake interrupted. Bluestar evaluated the two ginger cats. " You both fought well and your cooperation was superb." The powerful she-cat evaluated Rusty and Cupcake. "How would you both like to join the clan?"
There was no way this couldn't have happened. BTW sorry about the italic think last chapter. Tanks to Loststream and Leafpool407, loyal R&Rers!