Hey guys,

I would like to say thank you to all of you who reviewed the last chapter and a HUGE thanks to those of you who reviewed the previous one =]

I would also like to say that I am very very disappointed in those of you reading this story. So many of you put me on alert yet no one has the decency to review and tell me what you thought of it? I'm disappointed in you all because I didn't even get 5 reviews for the last chapter. Yet so many of you tell me how much you love it?

So, Can you please review this time? I need you to, or else it proves that you are no longer reading this story.

Enjoy, x


"Oh God, poor girl. How old is she?" Denise asked as she felt her temperature.

"She's a Freshman" He admitted, feeling ashamed. She was only 14 maybe 15 years old and this had happened to her.

Denise looked at him in shock, before sighing. "Let's get her sorted ... "


"Shane, I've decided what needs to be done to make sure that this poor girl gets on the track to getting better again" Denise explained softly and she flicked through a nursing book and jotted some notes down on a piece of paper.

"Yeah?" Shane asked impatiently as he looked up from Mitchie to his mom, waiting for an answer.

"OK, first of all, we need to make sure that she's changed, then she needs another glass of water and a pain killer" Denise explained as she read through all of the notes that she wrote down earlier. "Once all of that's done, she just needs to sleep tonight"

Shane nodded before looking back down at Mitchie; the way she innocently lay there in pain was enough to make his heart flutter. Slipping his hand gently underneath her knees and holding the other around her shoulders he lifted her up and lay her against his chest. Her arms folded over her chest and her head resting gently on Shane's chest. It bought tears to his mothers eyes. She was glad that she had raised her son to be the gentleman that he was.

Shane nodded at her slowly before making his way over to the stairs and steadily making his way one by one, all the way to the top. Upon reaching the top he laughed slightly as Mitchie hiccuped, a sweet innocent hiccup, that also caused more pain, he noticed.

"Nearly there Mitchie, then you can go to sleep for a bit" He assured her and she nodded slightly before closing her eyes again.

As he reached the door that hid his bedroom from the outside world, he gulped, before taking a breath and kicking it open slightly, thankful that he had cleaned it, only the night before. Tredding softly over to his bed he gently lay Mitchie down, trying not to disturb her or put her in more pain than she already was. He went and closed the window, making sure that the now pounding rain, didn't reach inside his room and onto any of his furniture. Just as he locked the window shut Denise entered the room.

"Shane, I just had a call from your brothers and they're going to be home in about 10 minutes, I'd like it if you and Mitchie were both asleep, or atleast in bed, by that time" She insisted, handing him a glass of water and a pain killer. "Make sure that she takes them please, Shane, or she's not going to get any better". With that she left him sighing to himself as he walked over to the bed, perching himself gently on the side.


Pulling up onto the driveway to Alex's house, Nate turned and looked at Alex who had safely pulled her head back inside the window and had unclasped herself from the seat.

"Would you like us to take you inside?" Jason asked, looking back at her from the front view window.

"No, that would only make the situation worse. My parents aren't home so it doesn't matter to me. I'm going to go to bed, after disposing of any signs that I even went to a party. They'll never know" She assured them before opening the door and stepping both feet steadily on the floor outside.

"You're not going to tell them?" Nate asked.

"No, I never do. We aren't a close bunch, they probably wouldn't even care. Thank you" She concluded before giving him a disapproving look and walking to the front door. She let herself in with ease and slammed the door behind her, not even bothering to lock it.

Walking into the kitchen she flung open the fridge and grabbed a bottle of water, gulping it all down harshly in an attempt to forget the nights events. But just by sobering up, it didn't mean that they would go away.

Stumbling over to the stairs she chucked her heels at the bottom and on the way up she disposed of her clothes, leaving them on the stairs and down the corridor. Upon reaching the bathroom she slammed open the door, turned on the shower and jumped inside automatically.

"Go away, go away, go away" She muttered as the flashbacks played over and over in her head. She jumped, opening her eyes before feeling a sharp pain in the side of her head as it smashed against the bath tub below her. There, lying alone at night, was Alex, a girl who had passed out and was soon going to be engulfed under water.


"Mom, I can totally explain, please, I need to go inside, sit down and catch up on some sleep. Can I please explain it to you in the morning?" She asked in hope. Hope that they would say yes and leave her to think of whether or not she was going to tell them the truth. Nodding they grabbed either side of her and helped her inside, taking her up to her room where they left her alone to catch up on sleep.

"We just want you to tell us whats happening in your life" Her mom whispered as she closed the door behind her and turned off the light. Caitlyn shot up and grabbed her phone off the night stand, dialling Mitchie's home number.

"Hello? Caitlyn, where the hell are you girls? We've been worried sick" Connie shouted down the phone at her daughter's best friend.

"Mrs. Torres, it's OK. Mitchie's decided to stay at Alex's house tonight. They're just going back there. Mitchie was so tired, she's probably already asleep. Please just wait until she comes home from school tomorrow to call her. Knowing her and Alex, they'll be gone for a jog in the morning" Caitlyn lied as she quietly whispered into the phone.

"Ok, thank you Caitlyn" Connie thanked before hanging up.


"Mitchie, darling before going to sleep you need to take this pill and drink this water, it'll help you sleep better and you'll feel so much better" He assured her, handing her the pill and glass of water. Nodding, Mitchie quickly took the pill, swallowing it down with ease, something so many people found it hard to do.

"Thanks" She whispered fiddling with the belt on her hot pants that were digging into her stomach. Lifting her hands away, Shane noticed the cut, in the outline of the sharp bowl, that obviously cut into her. He rolled his eyes. "Are you gonna learn?" He growled as he grabbed her wrists and moved them above her head, pulling off her crop top, leaving her in a deep red lacy bra. Her boobs were at least a size D cup and her exposed top half was making Shane hot. He sighed as he noticed something rising.

"Mom!" He shouted and within seconds she was in Shane's room, looking at the half naked girl lying on his bed.

"I'll do it. Grab one of your larger T-Shirts please baby" She smiled and walked over to Mitchie, she undid the belt, done up far to tightly, and slid her hot pants off, down Mitchie's long tanned legs. Shane gasped and chucked her the t-shirt, walking out of the room. He was a teenage boy after all.

Pulling the top over her small upper half and sitting her up she made her open her eyes.

"Mitchie, darling, I know that you're in a lot of pain right now but you need to take off your bra and go to the toilet. Once you've done that, Shane will take off your make up and then you can go to sleep OK?" She exclaimed and Mitchie nodded, sliding her hands up her shirt and round to her clips where she undid them with ease. It always amazes her how girls knew the knicker and the bra trick. Something guys would never understand.

Chucking her bra aside she slowly got off and stumbled into the toilet, letting out all of the drink that was being stored in her bladder. Shane entered his bedroom and Denise handed him a make up wipe. "Take it off and then go to sleep" She ordered. Nodding he took the make up wipe and sat on the bed, waiting.

"Shane, it's a school day tomorrow. She can't stay home sick because she isn't supposed to be here. She'll have to wear some of your jeans and top. She won't notice, she'll still be out of it tomorrow. Your going to have to look after her." Denise added and Shane stared at her.

"That's not going to work, why can't she stay here? I can't carry her around all day!" He shouted and she flinched.

"Stop shouting and just do it, you're both going in tomorrow. That's final"

With that she left the room leaving an annoyed and angry Shane sitting on his bed. Mitchie came in from the bathroom and walked straight over to Shane, wrapping her arms around him, she bought him back to the real world. He hugged her back and she giggled slightly as he tickled her sides.

"Sit down, I'll take your make up off and then you can finally go to sleep" He chuckled slightly and she smiled, closing her eyes. He took the make up wipe up to her cheeks and slowly ran over them in circles. She was so beautiful, she didn't need all of this make up. Turning the wipe over, he started removing the mascara from her eyes, watching as it all stuck to the wipe, leaving her looking innocent, young and tired. She opened her eyes slowly and looked up to him, their breaths catching in their throats.

"Thank you so much" She whispered reaching up and touching his cheek slowly. Closing his eyes he whispered back to her, "Your welcome", before pulling away. "Time for bed, I think"

She nodded, a sad look on her face before jumping into bed and curling up under the covers. Just before he joined her, he turned to see his brothers in the doorway.

"She's home" They told him before walking off, leaving him to get a worry-free night. Jumping under the covers he lay his arms on his chest, feeling the warmth of Mitchie only centimetres away from himself. One swift movement later and Mitchie was now nuzzled in his neck, breathing softly on the skin, as she snuggled up against his chest. Sighing in satisfaction he closed his eyes and fell into a deep slumber. Ready for a day that could only be trouble, the following day.


There you go :)

I hope that you liked it, I'm ill at the moment so it probably wasn't too good but, either way - Review and tell me what you think.=]

Loveyouu,

Eloise xx