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[TWO DAYS AFTER THE FULL MOON]
[Prof. Flitwick's Class: Charms]
Remus? You there?
Bluuh… what is it Siri?
… you okay?
No. I'm not okay, dammit. I feel like someone's inside my skull trying to break out with a pickaxe, my entire body is sore and bruised, and JAMES WILL NOT SHUT UP!
… O_O;;
*sigh* So. Before I crack, what is it?
Uh… well yesterday night before we all went to sleep you said we were going to plot—
—not here, Siri! He might see!
—Severus's demise…
[To Sirius, PrivateChat™ invite: Accept?]
[PrivateChat™ invite accepted by: Sirius Black]
Nice save back there.
Thanks, Moons. Bloody amazing idea to create the PrivateChat™ option, though.
Why thank you. Anyways. Continue.
*clears throat* Commence Conversation: Get-Rid-Of-James'-Plotting-and-Pranking-of-People-Including-the-Other-Marauders, or: G.R.O.J.P.O.P.O.P.I.T.O.M.!
… or you know, we can just call it "Jane". ;D Much less suspicious.
I knew there was a reason you were the smart one.
So. We know that James is trying to do this to impress Lily—
—which somehow makes sense in his twisted little mind—
—thank you Sirius for the obvious observation. Anyways, he's 'trying' to impress Lily. (key word, trying. ;D)
LOL Rems. XD
I have contact with the said redhead, so here's what I propose: We get her to talk/smack James in the face while shouting how he's so immature or other bull like that.
… no retaliation? No pranking?
Nope.
B-B-But…
NO, Pads.
*sigh* Fine.
Pranking later. ;D
YES! XD
[Remus Lupin has left PrivateChat™]
[Sirius Black has left PrivateChat™]
[PrivateChat™ terminated]
[Later that night: After Dinner: In the Hallways: Remus, Sirius, Lily]
Lily, Sirius, and Remus stood in the Entrance Hall with Lily next to the doors of the Great Hall. Lily stood in front of Sirius, with Remus standing to her left, closest to the door to the Great Hall. Sirius leaned against the wall, arms crossed. Lily broke the silence.
"So, what did you want to talk to me about?" asked Lily, arms crossed and looking at Sirius in a 'I can't believe I'm doing this' sort of way.
Sirius said casually, ignoring the look, "You know of James' anti—"
"JAMES POTTER! DETENTION!"
"—cs?" finished Sirius, too used to the shouts of "DETENTION!" from McGonagall to care anymore.
Remus and Lily too had grown an immunity.
"Of course I do!" said Lily in disgust. "The things he's done… despicable."
Remus and Sirius shared a smirk.
"Well we were hoping you'd say that," said Remus, smiling at Lily. Lily returned the smile.
"Oh?" she said, curious.
"You see," said Sirius, causing their attention to turn to him, "James is doing all of this for you."
"For me?" said Lily, rolling her eyes in false shock. "Oh what a surprise."
The three snickered.
"Ahem. Yes. Well," continued Remus. "We're asking you to help us stop it."
"Hmm?" said Lily.
"We need you to smack some sense into the man!" finished Sirius.
"Literally or figuratively. Your pick," said Remus, grinning.
Lily's face broke into a huge smile.
"I'm in. What do I have to do?"
[After Transfiguration]
"POTTER!" shouted Lily as James was about to leave the classroom.
James turned around and faced Lily with rising trepidation. What did he do wrong? ((A/N: as if you don't know… *eye roll*))
The two were the only ones left inside the classroom as Prof. McG'd already gone to lunch.
Her flaming hair flowed behind her making her look like a goddess of war. James got even more anxious.
"Potter, I am sick and tired of waking up every day and finding that our Gryffindor House Points have gone down to an even lower number even more no matter how hard we—the other Gryffindors—try to raise them! I swear to Merlin if you don't stop I'm going to have to take some drastic measures!" she snarled, jabbing a finger at his chest.
James smirked. "But Lily-Flower, all of this is for you!"
"I know!" she shrieked, eyes wild and flashing in anger. "That's what sickens me the most!"
"W-What?" said James, eyes widening behind his glasses.
"I can't believe that somewhere in that twisted and crazy little head of yours you'd think that I'd be even remotely attracted to such immaturity!" she said, throwing up her hands and crossing her arms as she glared at him again. "I am a Prefect, Mr. Potter, and it falls into my job category to stop such nonsense from ever happening in the hallowed halls of Hogwarts! But you constantly undermine my authority and Remus'! And yet you wonder why I don't like you?" she stopped to laugh humorlessly. "HA! As if I would ever subject myself to ever like someone like YOU!"
She glared at him, picked up her bag, and walked towards the door. Stopping at the doorway, she stopped, and turned around swiftly. James stayed standing where he was, not even looking behind him.
"I suggest you stop your childlike actions, Mr. Potter before you get suspended. Or worse: expelled," she spat, then turning quickly on her heel, stomped out the door way towards the Great Hall for lunch.
James Potter stood inside the Transfigurations classroom, thinking deeply. Her words had really shone a new light on him.
So it was, on a Tuesday in the year 1975, James Potter changed his ways.
CHAPTER… five? DONE! 8D
I thought about stopping here, but…
… two more years, aye? ;D
You know, this gives this story some PLOT. O___O
Anyways. This chapter is the one I am most proud of. *pats self on back* Good job, Revenge. Good Job. ;D
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-Revenge