What is up people? I got more reviews this time! I didn't reply to them though because I wanted to type up my new chapter.
Max's POV
Fire, fire all throughout my body, burning pain shot up and down me.
The thing that did this to me whispered, "Soon you will be my mate. I will be back in three days when the transformation is complete."
The pain continued and I couldn't say anything or make a sound, the pain was so intense, but if I could have I would have totally said something sassy or insulting right then.
My attacker ran away faster than humanly possible.
Later I finally let out a shriek then I went silent again with agony.
Edward's POV
We were all sitting around the TV set, watching the news, when we heard a cry of pain from about a mile away.
After deciding to check it out, we left the house to search for the source. We went to where the noise had come from and ended up seeing Max in what looked like tremendous pain. It hurt me to see this, I couldn't stand it.
"A vampire bite," exclaimed Alice, "She's turning into a vampire!"
I gave a look of horror.
"Let's take her to the house," Carlisle suggested.
We all agreed, so he picked her up and we ran back home.
Max's POV
Hours after the Cullens brought me to their home the pain subsided. I got up and walked down the stairs where I saw all the Cullens going about various activities.
"Max," Alice exclaimed.
All the Cullens' heads whipped around to look at me.
"Impossible," the one they called Carlisle (I could hear them while I was in all the pain and they where talking downstairs) whispered, "It has only been eight hours since we heard her scream."
"What are you? I know you are not normal," I asked.
Edward's POV
I could tell Max was confused and I cold understand that. She didn't know what we were, or even what she was, but we know she is not normal either, she moves to fast and graceful and she hears too well, even before she was a vampire.
"We could ask you the same thing," Emmet replied.
"Sit down Max we need to discuss things."
It took a little longer than expected to get this up, but I am lazy. It would have taken it longer, but your reviews inspired me to type it up, so more reviews please.
I will try to update again soon.