Suntalon: My previous chapters were good in my opinion, but I need yours, so review! And enjoy this chapter and the other to come! *bang* Spottedleaf what was that? Spottedleaf? Hellloooo?
Chapter 3
Dovepaw ran and ran; she found her paws carrying her towards the Shadowclan border. How come she had to be the one to save everybody? She wasn't even a warrior for Starclan's sake! Dovepaw was snapped from her thoughts when she heard a twig snap she angled her ears to find Leafpool hunting a vole. Dovepaw wondered if she why everyone in the clan seemed to be against her and Squirrelflight, she new that they had lied, but that was over with why couldn't they move on, then she heard Squirrelflight pad over and congratulate Leafpool on her catch, then an Idea struck her if she befriended Leafpool and Squirrelflight maybe Jayfeather and Lionblaze would leave her alone for a little bit.
So, with that she padded out from her hiding place and went over to Leafpool and Meowed "I was wondering if I could hunt with you guys, since Lionblaze has no training for me planned." The sisters exchanged a glance, and then Leafpool replied "sure" and with that they set off towards the sky oak.
By the time that they had finished hunting Squirrelflight had caught a mouse, a vole, and a sparrow. Leafpool had caught two mice and a vole. Dovepaw had done the best and had caught two mice, a blackbird, a vole, and a sparrow. They padded back to camp their jaws full of prey, they dropped their fresh kill off, and Leafpool grabbed a mouse, Squirrelflight grabbed a vole, and Dovepaw grabbed a sparrow, then they went to below the highrock and ate their food in silence.
The silence was broken when Leafpool asked "Dovepaw what made you want to come hunt with us?" Dovepaw hesitated then mewed "well, I guess truthfully, I think every one is being unfair to you guys, you did what was best for the clan, so I think that it is time that you felt more welcomed." The two sisters stared at her in awe then Squirrelflight said "Thank you Dovepaw, you have been kind to us, but something's can never be changed." Then, she glanced at Brambleclaw who was sending out another patrol. The glance was so swift that Dovepaw thought she had imagined it, but that was changed when she saw the sorrow in Squirrrelflight's eyes. Not being able to bear it any longer Dovepaw excused her self and padded off to the apprentice den and there she saw Ivypaw stretching, and Dovepaw rushed over before Ivypaw could walk away and she mewed "there's something I have to tell you..."
Suntalon: Hey, pretty intense chapter what does Dovepaw tell Ivypaw? Does she tell them her secret? You'll have to find out in the next chapter… when I write it that is.
Spottedleaf: hey um... Suntalon I invited all of the clans to come over to your den tomorrow…
Suntalon: WHAT! (Spottedleaf runs) Come back here!
Suntalon: Ohh, please review. Hey drop that!