My first (and only) Poem-fic about Spot. It's from his POV, talking about a dead loved one. I wrote it about his only true love, but it could also fit a little sibling or mother. Yeah, it's sappy, but I worked really hard on it! So please leave a review!


You took it with you

That old tarnished key

But how could you know

What it opened for me

You rightfully owned it

You did from the start

You have the key

To my metal heart

When I think about you

My heart starts to ache

I never thought that it was

A 'give and take'

You thought it was easy

You perfected the art

Of opening wide

My metal heart

Emotions don't own me

I'm perfectly free

But I'd give it all up

To have you here with me

Forgiven and forgotten

As sweet changed to tart

Because you hold the key

To my metal heart

I try to remember

Your warm smiling face

I think that I'm losing

My short selfish race

As it is in the stories

When young lovers part

There's a kiss and they key

To my metal heart

When I am older

And my hair fades to gray

I'll pray that you were

Still with me today

You said 'I love you'

And I gave a start

Having locked up forever

My metal heart

Now I'm feeling lonely

And I'm feeling lost

I guess I wasn't worth it

Since your life was the cost

You rightfully owned it

You did from the start

You died with the key

To my metal heart