After giving it careful thought, I have decided to put this fanfiction on hiatus/discontinue it because it's objectively not good. I'm not looking for sympathy when I say this but this is a bad fic. I know myself well enough to know that I can do better than this and I don't want to pump out low quality work when I know can do better.
So, will this fanfiction come back? Yes (as a rewrite). When? I don't know but it has to come back when it's good and ready.