A/N I'M SORRY FOR SUBMITTING THIS AS A CHAPTER BUT SOMEONE REVIEWED MY STORY LAST NIGHT AND I THOUGHT I JUST HAD TO GET MY POINT ACROSS AS IT ANNOYED ME QUITE ALOT!

HERES THE REVIEW:

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Story:Now You're Gone
Chapter: 2. Chapter 2

From: YouDon'tNeedToKnow ()

Victoria as a mother? OOC (out of character)

Victoria as BELLA'S mother? Just... no. Just no.

Victoria calling Bella sweetie? Gross.

Bella calling Victoria "mummy" and agreeing to be her daughter, and to be
changed by her without even the slightest thought that Victoria could be
tricking her and KILL HER?

Stephanie Meyer would be ashamed.

I DONT HAVE AN ISSUSE WITH BEING CRITISED I'M NOT PERFECT AT ALL. HOWEVER, PLEASE CORRECT ME IF I AM WRONG BUT I THOUGHT THAT THE IDEA OF FAN FICS WAS THAT ANYONE CAN TAKE A STORY AND IN SMALL WAY MAKE IT THEIR OWN IN THE SENSE THAT IT HAS IT'S OWN STORY LINE. THEREFORE I CANNOT SEE HOW ME CHANGING VICTORIA'S CHARACTER COULD IGNITE SUCH A RESPONCE FROM ANYONE WHO ACTUALLY WAS OPEN MINDED ENOUGH TO BE ABLE TO WANT TO READ A FAN FIC, IF THE PERSON WHO WROTE THIS REVIEW WANTED A STORY WHERE IT WAS JUST AS STEPHENIE MEYER WANTED THEN SHE SHOULD HAVE READ TWILIGHT. NOW YOU'RE GONE IS MY STORY, THE PLOT IS AND THE PERSONALITIES AND CHARACTERS THAT I HAVE ADDED ARE ALSO. VICTORIA DIDNT JUST MAGICALLY CHANGE SHE CHANGED BECAUSE OF ALICE'S AND EDWARD'S BETRAYAL.

SO I AM OHH SOOOO SORRY BUT IF YOU DONT LIKE STORIES WHERE THE CHARACTERS AREN'T THE SAME AS THE BOOKS THEN GO READ THE BOOK AND DONT BE SUCH A NARROW MINDED SNOBBISH COW AND LEARN TO SPELL THE AUTHORS NAME RIGHT ITS STEPHENIE NOT STEPHANIE.

AND CLEARLY THE PERSON WHO WROTE THIS HAS NEVER BEEN CHEATED ON BY SOMEONE THEY ACTUALLY LOVED YOU DONT CARE IF YOU LIVE OR DIE SOMETIMES.

NOW THAT I'VE HAD MY LITTLE RANT AND CALMED DOWN I'D JUST LIKE TO SAY I JUST NEED TO TYPE UP CHAPTER 8 IT IS ALREADY WRITTEN SO I WILL UPDATE SHORTLY.

I HOPE I DIDNT OFFENED ANYONE OTHER THAN THE IDIOT THAT WROTE THIS REVIEW BUT IF I DID I'M SORRY.

AND IF THE PERSON WHO WROTE THIS REVIEW IS READING THIS THEN I'D RATHER YOU DIDNT READ MY STORIES ANYMORE, THEY ARE NOT MEANT TO BE READ BY PEOPLE WHO CAN'T SEE BEYOND THE REALMS OF WHAT ONE PERSON HAS WRITTEN, THEY ARE MEANT TO BE READ BY PEOPLE CREATIVE ENOUGH TO READ ONE STORY, SEE THE OTHER POSSIBLITIES AND WANT TO EXPLORE THE THOSE POSSIBITLIES. AGAIN SORRY IF I OFFEND ANYONE :l

STEPHENIE MEYER OWNS TWILIGHT AND CHARATERS, I OWN THE PLOT.

THANK YOU FOR READING MY STORIES THOSE OF YOU WHO ARENT LIKE THIS ARSEHOLE THAT POSTED THAT REVIEW I REALLY DO APPRICIATE IT (Y)

PLEASE FEEL FREE TO CRITISIE ME BUT FOR ACTUAL FAULTS IN MY WORK NOT FOR PETTY THINGS YOU DONT AGREE WITH.

THANKS AGAIN

ELLI :)

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