more fail on my part, sorry. Uhm , Ill get to rewritting this as soon as i finish my sonic story. *re writing it that is*
Im not going to change anything like everything they say will stay the same, but ill just...
like..
learn to write better.
xD
cause right now this story FAILS.
soooo bad.
Uhmmm Ill write a tiny chapter here and... it'll fail... but just to prove to you guys that i am alive, and that Im getting somewhere.
Killer in the mall Four
The gang ran to the mall, failing to notice the lack of people around it, as it was usually a hustling and bustling place.
The main doors were broke and shattered but they didnt take notice of it because they figure the elevator girls probably did it.
Walking in the place was eerily quiet. No one was in the mall. Not a soul. From what they could tell anyway.
After deciding to get to work and reluctantly they went to their respective places of employment. Caitlin dusted the lemons, Jen counted inventory, Nikki unfolded shirts, Jude was alseep, Wyatt was turning on the stove, and Jonsey was looking for the place at which he worked.
Nikki was sitting behind the cash when she started to hear some strange noises. Ones that reminded her of a knife on glass... not that she knew what that sounded like or anything...
It was creepy and it made the hair on the back of her neck stand on edge. Which was rare even for her.