Disclaimer: -Throws chocolate bar at reader and yells out incoherence's- FIRST CHAPTER DAMN IT D!
Many thanks to misaki34 for beta this story. She's so awesome XD! I always forget that it's 34 lol. Always getting it the wrong way
-The Black Chocobo: The Rewrite-
Zack yawned and snuggled closer to the wonderful warmth that surrounded him, not wanting to get up. He sighed softly. Around five minutes later of drifting in and out of sleep, Zack decided that he should get up.
Cracking open an eye, all Zack saw was the back of Cloud's head. Sudden images of their activates from the night before came rushing into his head. Their shared kisses, their clothes being removed, Cloud's nails scraping down his back, and the smell of each other. Zack opened both of his eyes before grinning. Cloud actually shared feelings with him … he hoped. Leaning his nose to Cloud's hair, he drew in a deep breath through his nose. Intoxicating. It was hard to describe the smell, it was like a mixture of forest with a hint of flowers. Zack suspected it was due to the blond sleeping in Aerith's church too much. 'The scent must be a part of him now, haha.' Zack thought, his grin widening.
Slowly removing his arm from Cloud to avoid waking him up, Zack got up and stretched before cracking his neck. Silently he opened the tent, crawled out of it and quickly and just as silently zipped it back up before too much cold entered to freeze the sleeping Cloud up.
Zack looked up to the sky. Blue without out a cloud in the sky with a cool breeze. A little too cold down below, Zack was thinking. Looking down, Zack's eyes widened and he quickly pulled himself back into his pants, as he cheeks burned up. He closed his eyes and inhaled then exhaled. How embarrassing.
Fixing his pants and quickly trying to discard that embarrassing moment that shall forever haunt him, walked over next to the dead campfire and sat down on the dirt ground. He had been through embarrassing moments in his life, but not that embarrassing. He had usually done embarrassing things to make others embarrassed, not him.
Shifting his pants to a more comfortable position, Zack turned around to look at the chocobos. Both Noodle and Flurry were up and grazing on the grass that were surrounding them. They occasionally warked at each other and sometimes Flurry would nip at Noodle, who ducked or dodged every time.
Chocobos were strange animals. Intelligent, but playful. Zack would know, he was one. Being one of them had changed Zack's feeling towards them. A long time ago, Zack also thought the birds were big, cuddly but stupid. Used for traveling or helping the army. Some had those obsessions with breeding them and Zack was thankful Bill wasn't one of them. Even though he did try to breed him, he wasn't watching on to see if they actually did it. Chocobo action with an old man watching wasn't a very good thing to do.
But now, after experiencing a bit of life as a chocobo, Zack took their style of life seriously. Their feelings were easily to read to Zack now. What they wanted, what they were feeling, and generally what was running through their heads. Sure he had lost the ability to understand the birds, but he was sure he could take a pretty good guess on what the birds were discussing. Noodle was probably making some comment on how 'beautiful' Flurry was, and was hoping to get her laid, but she probably responding to Noodle with something negative and took a few swipes at the male.
Some things in life are just meant to be cherished, no matter how annoying or sad. To Zack, the time of being a chocobo had been one of those times. Living in a body he was not used to was a gift, but Zack wouldn't want to be a chocobo again. As much fun as it was being a chocobo, shitting where you wanted or generally acting dumb to annoy people, Zack would rather be human. There was much more freedom being the dominant species on the planet.
Turning back around to look at the campfire, Zack saw Clouds head poking out of the small tent and grinned. Cloud quickly withdrew his head into the tent again. Zack heard some ruffling before the blond exited the tent. Cloud stood to his full height as he zipped up his top and walked towards Zack. He sat next to Zack and pulled the food bag closer. Zack had his eyes on him the whole time.
"Morning Cloud," Zack happily said toward the Blond who was opening up the bag.
"Hello Zack." Cloud opened the bag and sighed happily before turning towards Zack. He pointed towards the bag.
"I was afraid this morning, after I woke up, that since we left the food out here, that little animals or monsters might of taken it." Cloud laughed softly as he took out two red apples for Zack and himself. Zack took the apple, but he slowly lost his smile.
Cloud looked at Zack as he lost his smile. The older man looked lost in thought as he just looked at the red apple in his hand. The blond bit into his apple.
Zack just looked at the apple. Who thought a simple fruit like an apple could make him remember of the troubles of his past. Feelings and emotions that has long ago been gone, had suddenly been brought back by simply looking at an apple. Lying down so his back was against the dirt, Zack lifted the apple towards the sky. As if remember some sort of mission, Zack nodded in agreement and sat back up. Zack felt like his mission was to protect and make Cloud as happy as possible. He stop looking at the apple and took a bite out of it.
"So Cloud," Zack munched then swallowed, "Ever heard of a Dumbapple?"
Cloud swallowed his mouth full before answering. "Nope. Is it a comedian from a TV show or something?"
Zack tried to hold his laughter but it came out like as a snort before he let it all out. Cloud's answer was totally random! A comedian? Zack laughed harder and covered his face with his spare hand.
Cloud glared and slapped Zack on his belly, only making the older man laugh harder. What the hell was a Dumbapple? Cloud scold at Zack and prodded his gut in the side making Zack squirm a bit. Giving up, Cloud turned away from Zack and continued to finish his apple with a small pout.
After getting the giggles out of his system, Zack leaned back up and gripped onto Cloud's shoulder as he grinned and shook his head. He bit a chuck out of the apple, chewed then swallowed.
"No, a Dumbapple isn't a comedian, Cloud. If you don't know what a Dumbapple is, how are you meant to know anything?" Zack shared a short laugh at the confused look on Clouds face. He remember when Angeal told him something similar, he chased right after Angeal hoping for an answer if he kept nagging. The difference with Zack was that, he wasn't about to share he knowledge about the Banora White just to frustrate Cloud.
After eating their apples, both of them packed the tent up before getting the chocobos ready for the trip ahead of them.
It was about midday until both men and chocobos reached Kalm. Zack had talked most of the way. Mostly of his experiences of his SOLDIER life, when he had to carry Cloud vegetable mind and body around the planet, for which Cloud blushed at some parts, and of life in the Lifestream. Zack purposely left out parts with Sephiroth in it, for fear of Cloud's reactions. The blond fought so hard to keep the man away for the Lifestream that it was kind of a failure to say he was now apart of it, for the better.
Cloud also shared his memories and experiences since Zack died. Even though Zack already knew, he wasn't going to tell the man. Zack just enjoyed Clouds voice.
Noodle and Flurry took the trip without any rush or hassle. Zack was quite proud of Noodle for lasting this long. For a breeding chocobo, Noodle was a lot healthier than what Zack had expected. He looked over at Cloud then down at the female chocobo. Zack didn't feel anything for Flurry. He still disliked her. 'A petty dislike, but that's how I like it,' Zack smirked at his inner thought. Well that's what she got from calling him dumb back when he was a chocobo.
Nearing the gate, Cloud dashed to the side of the town, taking cover by the wall. Zack raised an eyebrow and nudged Noodle to follow them.
Cloud hopped off Flurry and patted her neck as he looked around. Zack followed suit and got off Noodle. The bird lowered his head and nudged his head against Zacks and said man scratched his neck.
"What are ya doing Cloud? Why did you run over here for?" Zack asked Cloud as he scratched Noodles head.
"Umm, well, you know Melinda right?" Zack nodded, "Well I don't know how, but when I came here for deliveries, she was here. She knew where I was staying, so that's why I needed to go to the farm." Cloud whispered to him while still looking around, paranoid man.
Noodle warked softly towards Flurry, who warked back. Zack huffed and let go of Noodle, who let out a sad wark, and walked towards Cloud. He smiled and wrapped an arm around the Blond's shoulder.
"Don't worry Cloud, if we stick to the alleyways and keep a good eye out, I'm sure we can dodge her 'Evil Stare' haha! I'm sure she can't be that bad." Cloud scoffed in disbelieve and shrugged Zacks arm off. He rolled his eyes before giving him a leveled stare.
"I know you Zack, being a SOLDIER first class and all that back in the day, but none of them are scary has her! I remember the experiences we had running away from your fans back when I was a cadet, Zack, and trust me, and they are not, I repeat, NOT as mentally horrifying as her. Now I need to go get Fenrir before anything happens to her," Cloud looked at the big birds, "But first off, we need to deal with the chocobos."
Zack nodded, then looked towards the chocobos. Flurry looked like she was glaring at Noodle. The other chocobo looked … flirtatious. There was no other was to describe it. Then Noodle blinked. Zack knew it. That damn chocobo just flirted with Flurry. Zack quickly turned to Cloud.
"Cloud, quickly hold on to Flurry's reins. She's about to have a spaz." Zack said and Cloud held onto Flurry's reins. Not a second to late, because Flurry let out something akin to a battle cry and tried to charge Noodle.
Noodle enjoyed getting scratches, he really did. The scratches always hit the right spot too. So heavenly. And his rider got them perfectly. He didn't even misplay a feather and scratched underneath them.
His rider, who he had come to known, was named Zack. Why he was name exactly like Noodles chocobo friend, he wasn't sure why, but he was. He even smelt like him. Zack, the human, lightly tapped Noodles neck before moving towards Cloud.
"Hmm, I must say, that was a most wondrous pet I have gotten in quite some time, wouldn't you think so, Flurry," Noodle spoke to Flurry as he looked towards her.
"Damn, yo' think I wanna know? I don't wanna know yo' life story with scratches, you idiot." Flurry snorted and looked away, not very interested.
"Oh I'm sorry, my dearly. Do you want me to scratch you?" Flurry whipped her head towards Noodle and glared with all her might. What she got in return was a wink.
"That's it! Yo' going to get it know, ya idiot!" Flurry screamed and tried to head butt Noodle, but was held back by the reins. Flurry growled and swore.
"Just yo' wait, Noodle. I'm gonna get yo' soon, ya foo'!" Flurry growled and stood up straight while still glaring at Noodle.
"Oh darling, I can't wait for you to get me." Flurry growled louder and her glare intensified.
As soon as Flurry backed up a bit and allowed Cloud to unstrap some equipment off her, Zack let out a sigh and turned to Noodle to do the same. Noodle turned to him.
"Tsk, Noodle, why did you have to say something to her. You and I both know she's dangerous." Noodle looked right into Zacks eyes. Zack lightly tapped his beak away.
"What are you looking at?" Zack softy laughed, "It's me, Zack, if you're wondering."
Noodle narrowed his eyes a little at Zack. The man Grinned and pulled the chocobos head down so it's ear was next to Zack mouth.
"You know, your pen mate. The one that didn't like Bill to look at his penis." Noodles eyes widened as he pulled his head back to looks at Zack again in amazement. Zack quickly pulled Noodles head back down and spoke again in haste.
"You know the Lifestream yeah?" Noodle nodded, "Well, it brought me back alive, but as a chocobo. When I came too, Bill found me and took me to the farm. And that's where I stayed till I escaped. Just, don't tell anyone okay?" Zack told Noodle and Noodle just nodded, "Alright lets get this gear offa ya."
Even though Noodle had no idea what the 'LifeStream' was, it was always a good idea to hear something new and interesting. Maybe Azure knew something, if that blue bird was back yet from his trip with his rider.
After all the equipment was removed, they both let the chocobos run back to the farm. Noodle stopped and looked back at Zack. He just waved and Noodle Kwed before dashing off.
Zack turned around and picked up the equipment. Since they were both enhanced, they divided the gear in half and picked it up. When all was comfy in their arms, Cloud motioned his head to a big garbage disposal located next to the town's gate.
After dumping it all in, Cloud quickly dashed behind Zack for cover. The older man let out a laugh before ruffling Clouds hair. The blond slapped the hand away in annoyance before fixing his hair.
Zack walked into Kalm, noticing Cloud didn't follow he dashed out and grabbed the Blond. Well, more of a push then anything. As soon as they both got in the town, Cloud ran off into an alley. Zack grinned and shook his head, but jogged to where Cloud was. Silly Cloud! Why did he have to run off? Melinda probably was already gone. Zack had the urge to shake his head again.
"What are you doing Cloud? Why the alleyways?" Zack covered his nose with a hand, "It smells here."
Cloud walked forwards like a paranoid man, eyes wide and skittish. "She is probably around. I'm not risking it Zack."
"Fine, fine, whatever. Let's do it your way then." Zack accepted.
Walking through many alleys was not the problem. Oh not at all. The problem was that every single alley way smelt awful! It smelt like, gosh how could Zack put it … like pee drying in the hot sun mixed with rotten egg. Zack heaved a few times. There was rotting garbage, stains on the walls and overflowing bins. Zack once passed a bin and something had caught his eye. Next to it was a half rotting corpse of a rat! The man almost vomited. The alleys of Kalm were like the slums of Midgar.
The paranoid Cloud had said earlier that they were close to the mechanics. A few more alleys and they were there. Zack was beyond happy to exit the disgusting place. As he took his first step out, Cloud quickly pulled him right back in. Zack yelped as Cloud dragged both of them behind two bins. Zack was about to complain why Cloud had done that before Cloud quickly covered Zacks mouth with his hand. The older man didn't say anything, but blink.
"Stay quiet," Cloud said as he removed his hand from Zacks mouth. Zack opened his mouth to ask what Cloud was doing, but the blond was quick to hush him.
"I saw her." That was all he said. Zack knew immediately whom he was talking about. Melinda. Zack nodded, understanding Cloud's silent plea. It was Zack-being-a-hero time. But first a plan was needed, and he needed to know what she looked like. Zack asked and Cloud looked over the bin and pointed. Zack slowly stood and spotted her. She was … Melinda was … the most outrageous girl he had ever laid his eyes on. He leaned on the wall with one hand as he tried to stifle his laughter with the other.
'Oh my GODDESS! This is Clouds infamous stalker? Haha! She sure looks like one! Look at her head! Haha! Wait … is beaded PLATS in her hair? Haha! Look at her glasses too way too big for her head! I can't believe she stuck pictures of little clouds on them! Hahaha! I can't over this!' Zack thought as his eyes became teary in stifled laughter. Cloud just gave him a disapproving look.
Catching his breath, Zack sat down on the dirty ground before closing his eyes. He needed a laugh like that. He hadn't had one in so long.
"Okay, since I think you are against going out there, we have to think of a plan to get your motorbike back."
Zack started to create a plan in his head. Oh yes, one that would work, one that was wonderful and one that would keep that clown of a girl away from Cloud. Then it came to him! So easy!
"Hey Cloud?" Cloud looked towards Zack at full attention, waiting to here what he had to say.
"Would you kindly call the mechanics up and tell them that 'A guy with Black, spiky hair' is going to pick your bike up?" Cloud lips twitched up into a small smile. He was getting the hint of it.
Zack continued, "I'll go grab 'Fenrir' and take her out of the town. While I do that, it will hopefully distract Melinda and that gives you a change to run your cute little ass through these smelly alleyways and out the town gate, and that is where I'll meet you. Got it?" Cloud nodded and took out his phone. He quickly dialed the mechanics while Zack just watched on.
"Hello, Kalm's Motors and repairs, how may we help you?" A man answered.
"Hello, this is Cloud Strife calling in the matter of my bike." Cloud put on his 'important' voice on.
"Ah yes, Mr. Strife. Your bike is all ready, you can come pick it up now."
"Thank you for fixing up my bike. Anyway a friend of mine is going to pick it up for me. He should be arriving soon."
"Okay, can I have his or hers details so we know." The sounds of a pen and paper being taken out could be heard over the other line.
"Yes, he's tall, has blue eyes and black spiky hair. He is also wearing dirty clothing." Cloud described Zack as he looked at him. The man winked at the blond.
"Okay, when he gets in, we have to get his signature so he can sign the bike off, is that okay with you?"
"Yes it is."
"Alright, thanks. Is that all?"
"Yes that's all."
"Alright then, bye."
"Goodbye." And the hanged up on each other.
Cloud looked up at Zack and gave a slight smile. Zack just grinned and gave him a thumbs up, before turning around to head towards the mechanics.
"Wait, Zack!" The man turned around. Cloud motioned his hand for him to come closer. When Zack was close enough, Cloud handed him his keys. Zack grinned and Cloud small smile. The blond soon pushed Zack lightly away, as the man placed the keys in his pocket.
Taking a few steps forward, Zack turned his head around to see Cloud already dashing out of the alleyway. He smiled.
Happily stepping out the horrible, smelling alleyway, Zack headed towards the office of the 'Kalm's Motors and Repairs' to sign off Fenrir. Looking from the corner of his eye, he saw that Melinda was slightly arguing with one of the mechanics, who was currently working on a car. The unknown man was acting like she was a pesky fly.
'Activating combat mode' Zack thought.
Picking up his pace, Zack walked right through the glass-plated front door. Looking around he noticed some people who worked there wandering around. Ignoring them, he walked right up to the receptionist. She looked up from her computer and smiled up at Zack. He just put on a grin too. She then looked down at his scruffy and dirty clothing, giving a look of distain, before looking right back up at his face. Zack saw her looking at the clothing and he didn't really care, being that the clothing was Chocobo Bill's old clothing.
"Hello, and welcome to Kalm's Motors and Repairs, how can I help you today?" She said.
"I'm here to pick up a Cloud strife's bike." Zack spoke. She just gave him a blank stare.
"I'm sorry but you're –" A small man dashed out of an office and banged his fists on the front desk. He gave a good look at the man, grinning that the descript Cloud gave, fit.
"Yes, he is aloud. Mr. Strife said that he is the one to pick it up." The man grinned and held out his hand. Zack gave a toothy gin back and he shook the man's hand.
"Welcome, welcome. Let me just grab some paperwork from my office and I'll show you to the bike." And the man quickly dashed off into his office to grab said paper work. Zack was quick to follow. Just as he was about to enter, the small man walked out and almost bumped into him. Zack was quick to avoid, preventing an accident happening. The man motioned Zack to follow him out a door to the garage. The man turned back to Zack and attempted small talk.
"Good thing you came here, there has been this girl asking about the bike. We've told our staff not to tell the girl that's Cloud Strife's bike. He said on the phone that she will keep up annoyances to our members. Also the Toe truck driver said that 'We'll never see the end of it.' I think we have all taken those works to heart now, haha." The man smiled before pulling a dirty covered sheet away, reveling Fenrir. He turned to Zack and held out the paper work.
"Alright, I need you to print your name here, and sign there." The man pointed to the spot. Zack nodded and to the pen the man held out an wrote his name, then signed it. He handed the papers back.
"Thanks uhh," he looked at the papers and his eyes widened "Zack … Fair …" The little man lifted his head with wide eyes to look at Zack. Zack quickly remembered that everyone thought he was dead. Think Zack, think!
"Umm, when I was younger, I was a big fan of SOLDIER first Zack Fair, and when I heard that he died, I guess I was so upset that I changed my name to his." Zack quickly thought up a tall tale, hoping that it would work. Thankfully it did. The small man let out a sigh and Zack also let out one inwardly.
"Haha, I was freaking out too. Big, bad SOLDIER coming back to haunt us, eh? I heard he was good, and then he went AWOL or something like that. I think the mako gets to their brains and mucks it up. Never did like Shinra anyway." The man talked as he was writing down some things, trying to finish the paperwork. Zack frowned at those words. It wasn't his fault that he went AWOL, Shinra just had a freaking mad scientist experimenting on them. He did not speak his words out loud.
Zack lightly shook his head and took out the keys from his pocket. Cloud's keys weren't much to look at. There were keys to open doors and Fenrir's key. There was also a little drawn picture dangling from it. It looked like some kids drew it. Also there was a metal beer-opening shark on it. Its mouth was shaped to open beers. 'Drinking much Cloud?' Zack thought.
The man looked up from the work and smiled, giving Zack a piece of paper.
"Alright, on this paper shows you the details on what has been changed and how much Mr. Strife owes us. Just give that to him when you see him." Zack folded the piece of paper and slipped it in his pocket.
"Anything else?" Zack asked.
"Nope, you're ready to head out." The small man said.
Zack grinned and took hold of Fenrir's handles before pushing the bike out. It was heavier than he thought, but he could manage it. Once he was out on the street, he heard a gasp. Turning to the sound, Zacks eyes widen and was about to yelp. Melinda was right up at his face with a scowl look on her face.
"And what are you doing with my beloveds bike?" She snared at him. Zack smirked his 'Sephiroth smirk' and answered her. She placed her hand on Fenrir and leaned in closer to Zack. Even though she has never touched the bike before, she was not going to squeal and hug it. The man in hobo clothing was stealing Cloud's bike!
"What are you talking about, dear? I ain't you 'beloved' and I'll never will be, and this bike is mine." Zack smirked all through saying this. He almost let out a laugh as her glare intensified. Zack took a deep breath in and spoke.
"I would like you to take your hands off my bike now so I can drive off." Zack said as he pushed Fenrir away. Zack was a bit surprised that She didn't follow him. Instead she huffed and walked off.
Zack smile, and put the keys in the ignition and started her up. Zack drove off through the city and out the gates. He was a bit rusty after not driving since … god knows how long, but at least he didn't crash. That's what counted.
Fenrir felt so powerful underneath him. It was like the Hardy Daytona, only more powerful. It was only like Mako enhance people could drive it. If someone with out Mako took a shot at it, Fenrir would probably eat them up and use them a fuel.
Out the gate, Zack saw Cloud waiting. The blond ran up to him and smiled.
"Any problems?" Cloud asked as he inspected his Bike. No a single scratch but she could go with a good wash, because there were fingerprints everywhere. Some looked like grease marks.
Zack nodded. "Only when Melinda confronted me," Cloud head shot up, "Don't worry, she only confronted me and ask why I have her 'beloveds' bike. Seriously, Cloud, I'm starting to think that she is an ex-girlfriend of yours." Zack laughed as Cloud glared at him.
Cloud got up and slapped the back of his head, before motioning to tell Zack to get off the bike. Zack shook his head negatively.
"Nope not today Cloud. I'm driving." Zack gave the blond a charming smile as he tapped behind him. Cloud frowned.
"Why? It's my bike."
"Because, Cloud, I need to get use to driving again, so hop on." Seeing that he wasn't gonna get the older man off, Cloud hopped on and wrapped his arms comfortably around Zacks hips and held on. Zack zoomed off in the direction of Edge.
Gahh! How could she be wrong! That beautiful bike looked just like Cloud's wonderful Fenrir! Who was that man with black hair? Melinda fumed.
After stalking into down the road, she accidentally wondered to the gate where she heard Fenrir's growling engine. Getting suspicious, Melinda walked up to the gate and peeked around the corner. She gasped and smiled. There was her beloved talking to that icky black haired man! Oh how she wanted to throw something at that man! How come that hobo of a man got to talk to Cloud and she couldn't? What was wrong with her? She was beautiful and charming!
Seeing that Cloud hopped on the back of the bike instead of driving it, she glared. Who was this man? First taking Fenrir from the mechanics, then talking to her Cloud, and now driving it when Cloud was meant to be? She could believe it!
She was needed back at Edge. Her Cloud needed to be protected from this fiend of evil. For now, she needed to wait for the bus.
Seeing the ruins of Midgar in the background, Zack smiled happily. Last time he saw the city was when he was escaping Shinra, then finally shot down. Cloud had loosened a hand and pointed to a cliff. Zack looked and remember what cliff it was. It was the one where he was killed on.
"Zack, we need to go there. Someone is up there that we need to grab before we head into Midgar." Zack nodded and drove Fenrir around and up the cliff. Zack gasped in surprise.
Sitting in the ground was the Buster Sword.
Driving closer, Zacks look of surprise soon turned to horror. It was rusted! It had wear, tear, and rust on it! Angeal was going to KILL him! Zack stopped Fenrir and got off. He didn't put down the stand and Cloud let out a yelp as he almost toppled over with Fenrir. Cloud put his foot the side and steadied himself and Fenrir. He kicked the stand down and glared at the back of Zacks head. The other man was slowly advancing toward the sword with his arms and hands wide.
When Zack got to the sword, he took in a deep breath and let it out in a painful scream.
"NO~! ANGEAL IS GOING TO KILL ME!"
-The Black Chocobo: The Rewrite-
A/N: Gahh! Over 5000 words? I always try to make it at least 4000, or around that number, but over 5000? Crazy I tell you. What's even more crazy is that there was meant to be more in this chapter, but I was like (In a heavy Australian Accent) 'Nope! I ain't writing any more! I forbid my self!'
Motivation is a wonderful thing isn't it? I have to thank Ziggy Pasta for making me an emote on Deviantart, and also Sephiroth for holding Masamune up at my neck. Loves to them! I also have to thank you people who added me to your watch on Deviantart. Yes, I need to catch up on there, but I'm getting lazy on doing it haha! But I will do it! I'm just a lazy person.
Want to know something? You know Cloud's beer-opening shark? I actually have a beer-opening shark on my keys. My dad made it and I snatched it off him cause I thought it was pretty awesome.
Since I hate having 'important notices' as a whole chapter, I deleted it and copied and pasted it here. And this is what I said:
IT IS VEEEEEEEEERY IMPORTANT AND YOU MUST READ IT!
Apparently there is this bot like thing going around that deletes fanfictions for all sorts of thing. I just come to inform you guys that it is a high possibility that I'll get deleled, because of what I write. I will still be uploaded stories on here but I've also started to upload my stories on my Deviantart (You are able to find the link on my page). I go under the same name there as I do here.
In my honest opinion in what I believe right now, this site will lose some of its popularity because of this bot. I've heard that this bot detects things like bad grammar, script text and adult content (A.K.A sex). There might be more, but I'm not sure, but I do know that it follows the ToS. It's kinda sad to see that this bot possibly might delete our favorite stories that we love to read and re-read again and again.
I personally like to say that I rather use this site then the adult fanfiction due to its popularity and the great stories I've read on here. If I do get deleted, you will know why. I've read that the bot is currently in its testing stages and is going to go live. I personally am scared because I love using this site, but if my favorite stories are deleted, that is it.
I'm still thinking though, isn't bots against the ToS anyway? I hope that the admins/mods and clean this matter up, if they hear about it. I heard they're quite lazy.
This is a heads up to all those people out there that write such stories. Spread the word.
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P.S: For those that read this story, don't be scared. Like I said, I'll be uploading my stories on DA and I haven't stopped writing this story … I getting there, very slowly due to school.
See! Very important.
Hope to see you guys in the next chapter.
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