Hey guys! Doing this chapter was hard... I couldn't think of what I could write for gold, so I wrote a poem instead. I'm not really good at poems, but this was the only way I could have used to describe gold.
Thank you so much for the wonderful reviews I got for the last chapter! Thank you to Arya Evenstar, TheLunyOne, and Pwettygurl for reviewing so far, and a great many thanks to SimplySupreme, InkWeaverabc, and NormalityIsNonexistant for reviewing every chapter! You all rock!
I have decided to do Greenie after all...
Review!
Gold
Every dawn and every dusk
At the horizon, so far away
Lies a glorious colour
The colour of gold
In the sun and sky
Gold
Glittering, Sparkling
Like the scales of Glaedr
Deep inside the tunnel of dwarves
Gilded upon a Rider's sword
Is a metal
A metal called gold
Gold
Precious, rare
Like the scales of Glaedr
Looking into the eyes of love
Into those eyes as green as gems
So deep and wise and full of time
Are flecks of gold
Gold
Radiant, entrancing
Like the scales of Glaedr
High on a tree and low on the earth
Perch animals wearing satin-like fur
And intelligent black eyes
Golden fur, golden squirrels
So nimble and quick
Gold
Warm, soft
Like the scales of Glaedr
This chapter's AN is as long as the chapter itself... oops =)
Please review and feel free to point out any problems:)
By the way, this is sort of Eragon's point of view, which is why "the eyes of love" are green, which are actually Arya's eyes.