Heres the new chapter guys. Please review. I m not sure should I continue or not. Please say it if it's that bad I will stop writing this.
Anonymous- I know mermaids are suppose to stay under water but Elizabeth is special. You will know about it in later chapters. :-)
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Heres the story
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Chapter-3
KPOV
He was walking through the corridor. Every girl was watching him with wide eyes. Most of the eyes were filled with lust, few with love. And the boys stared at him with jealousy clear in their eye.
He had jet black hair. His eyes were emerald green. He was very pale. Paler than me (if it was possible). He was tall may be around 6.2ft. He walked so flawlessly like he was floating from one cloud to other. I just should there watching him like he was the most fascinating person I did ever see. When he came closer I could see him clearer, I thought he might notice me now, and I would give him my best smile. But he just walked without even glancing towards me. Behind him came Erin, she walked towards him wrapped her arms around him, as if she was his girl friend.
"Were you looking around for me Dave?" Erin asked
He freed himself from her and said something so fast. I am not sure if he said anything because I dint hear anything. I was close enough that I could hear what they were talking. But I saw him moving his lips. I was seeing his lips because they were so red as if they were painted, and so tempting. Probably I was just imagining.
"Yes I was looking for you. I have something to give you" he said, pulling me out of my inner rambling. His voice was like melody to my ear. I could listen to it for 24 hours for the rest of my life.
Erin turned around looked at me and said "let's go somewhere private David. People here don't have the manners to give others privacy, they can get so shameless that they openly eavesdrop."
I glared at Erin. How dare she say that? I was about to say something. But my eyes fell on him again. He was looking at me this time. His eyes played an emotion that I couldn't put my finger on. He looked away as soon as I saw him.
"Just come." He said pulling Erin away with him to have there so called private talk.
Wait a sec. Am I jealous? No I am not. Why would I be jealous for some stranger? Yes he is a stranger for me, I assured myself and he probably belongs to other half of the guys that belongs to Erin as per Annie. I chuckled to myself thinking what Annie told me few minutes back. Just den our English teacher walked in. I forgot completely that I was standing by the door and chuckling to myself like an idiot.
"Anything funny Ms Jones?"Asked Mrs. Brown our English teacher.
"N-no-no no Mrs. Brown. I am sorry." I said stammering coming out of my inner thoughts.
"Then why don't you get back to your seat. Or have you decided to punish yourself today by standing outside the class."
I dint reply anything just sat on my desk silently because I was already embarrassed of what I just did. What might he be thinking about me? I was thinking about him again. GOD! What was wrong with me today? From when did I start caring about what anybody thought about me. I sat thinking about him. The whole class went in a blur. I dint listen to a word of what she said.
DPOV
As I entered the school building every girl started checking me out. And the boys were as usual glaring and whishing that I just vanish away. I was used to this reaction. Where ever I went every human behaved as is they saw a god. Well some even thought I was god come to earth to have a check on my children. Silly humans! Yes I can listen to their thought. I am a vampire. Yes all the supernatural being like vampires, mermaids, werewolves, wizards etc you have been reading about do exist. I am a living example. I have been walking on earth for about more than 3 centuries now. I stopped counting my age after she died. My love Elizabeth died about 115 years 11monthes 3 weeks and I day before. She was a mermaid. Vampires and mermaids are always against each other. And actually werewolves and vampires have a good relation. She promised me she would come back to me. I have been waiting since then for her.
After I took my requirements from the office I decided to meet Erin. She was a vampire too just like me. My dad asked me to give her a package as soon as I reach the school. Personally I don't like her at all. She sure was very beautiful. But she was a bitch n very mean. As I was walking down the corridor I could smell her my Ellie. Suddenly I saw her come out of a door of a classroom. She looked just the way she did before. As soon as she saw me she just kept staring at me like I was a ghost. I was so eager to know what she was thinking but just like before I couldn't read her.
Even she felt something as soon as she saw me I knew it. But I couldn't stay there and look at her beautiful face. Because if anybody else came to know she was my Ellie they would kill her again. I won't let this happen again. I will protect her with my life this time.
As I passed her Erin came to me and took me into a hug. She called me Dave. How dare she call me that? I said her in vampiric speed not to call me that only Ellie could call me that. Ellie observed it and she was thinking about it. She looked confused. Her expression was so cute. Before she came to know anything more I had to take Erin away. So I freed myself from her and asked Erin to follow me. But before she came she said to Ellie stuffs that I did not like. I wanted to snap her head off then and there. But I had to control myself. Ellie was about to say something to her but she turned toward me and dint say anything. For about a second I almost gave my feelings away. But then I looked away from her.
I know she felt bad. But I couldn't do anything for her at the moment.
After I took Erin to a safe area where were not audible for other humans I gave her the parcel. I just kept thinking 1 thing Erin or anybody else shouldn't come to know about Ellie.
"I know what you are thinking. You are thinking about her right? I know the truth Dave." Erin said.
I stood there shocked.
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