Thank you everyone those who have read my stories and reviewed it. Guys I have written another story 'Dark fantasy'. It's a vampire fanfic too. It's about a girl Cassandra who was a vampire obsessed teenage girl. If even you have this crazy desire to become a vampire you should read her story. Anyway coming back to the life of Katherine, nobody said anything about having a problem with the zenorians language. So I take it, it's not confusing. I am going to continue it in that way. If you have a problem further then you know what to do. And thank you to all of them who have helped me giving their new characters. I will be adding them somewhere in the story.
But guys I want few more vampires. And even few mermaids so if you want to be a part of my story then fill in with these details.
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Killer-kelly420 - thank you for the character. But I am missing your reviews. Tori will come in this chapter.
Name: Victoria (Tori) Lorain Vandrake
Sex: F
Hair: jet black with natural blue highlights.
Eyes: ice blue or purple when she's not wearing contacts.
c.a.s.1404 – I am glad you liked it. And even am very excited about that part. But you got to have to wait for that. And thank you for Iris. She will soon come in the story.
Idk – thank you for reviewing. I thought of a different way to represent Serena. But I think your way will also do. So I am going to put her your way. And keep reviewing.
Name: Serena
Eye colour: light brown
Hair colour: Jet black
Height: 5.5
If I make a mistake then do let me know. Critics are also appreciated. But please don't be harsh.
Here's the chapter
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Chapter – 6
He was very happy and gifted the man a box of gold coins. The man left.
Samuel then called on the guards.
"Rajkumari Serena ke ekhuni deke dao" (send someone to call Princess Serena right now)
The guards left their king and queen to rejoice among them. They were happy as well. As their princess was found and they can break 'the curse'.
Deep inside the palace inside a room stood a very beautiful girl. She paced in front of her bed restlessly. Her bed looked like a huge pearl shell. But the pearl was missing. Because she was the pearl. She was pale with jet black hair that was cut short in the front. (A/N: don't ask me how do they cut their hair in Zenora, trust me I have no clue about it.) As she paced her hair fell on her big light brown eyes.
She wore a jama (it is a type of shirt kind of a thing, that's been worn only in Zenora) It was made of some shells and skin of some marine animals. There were two big shells that held her breast. The skin of the marine animal was covering her tiny waist. It hugged her perfectly. It almost looked like a tube top which people were nowadays. Below she wore a shaya (it is a type of a long skirt till the ankle, that the Zenorians were to cover their lower half) it almost looked like she wore a deep blue coloured off shoulder gown. She is Serena, Elizabeth's younger sister. (A/N: she is Ellie's sister not Katherine's.)
SPOV:
Why? Why? Why?
Why did sister have to die that night? Only if I was faster. Only if….
Mother and father always loved her more than me. I had no problem with it. She was always the sensible one, the good daughter who always did what she was told. The only thing she ever did wrong was fall in love with that vampire. None of this would have ever happened if she wouldn't have gone that night to meet that leech. For that god dammed ritual you need her blood and directly from her body because of "the secret" that both of us hold. Why can't I give my blood for the damn ritual and rescue us from 'the curse'. Why?
O wait I know the answer for this.
The answer is I am not Elizabeth.
She did this to every zenorians. Yet they praise her. Why did they still love her? Why?
I still loved her. No matter how hard I try I can never hate her. Nobody can ever hate her. She came back because she made a promise to that leech she would come back. She even promised me when I was little that she would never leave me. She would always be there by my side when I did something wrong. I have done many things sister, please come back for me.
I have so many questions for you. Only you can answer it for me.
I sat beside my bed crying again. This is what happens every day. I ask myself questions about why did sister leave. I try to hate her for that, but I end up hating myself. I can speak and understand English as very often I go on the land preparing myself for the day when sister would reborn.
I heard someone swim toward my room. I quickly got up and stood like nothing happened. The guards came in.
Meanwhile in California:
DPOV:
"Do you know any good place to eat around nearby" I asked her.
"Yes there's mc Donald's nearby"
"Would you like to come with me for a lunch?"
"I would like it" she said. I knew she was excited. But I did not let her know. She looks cute when she gets impatient. I knew she wanted me to ask her but I kept dragging it. We reached the car. The mc Donald's was near. Just five minutes and we were there. All along the way she wanted to tell something but she couldn't. It wasn't that hard to understand because she kept opening her mouth and kept closing them back. As I got down, someone turned me around by my shoulder. I smelt that familiar smell of my sister Tori. She was my half sister from my father's side. She wore a black jeans and a t-shirt. She had jet black hair just like mine but with natural blue highlights that matched with her icy blue eyes. She was short though just 5.4ft. I hugged her back.
As we hugged
"Is it her? It's her right? She looks just the same" she whispered in my ear in vampric speed.
"Yes"
She left me and met Katherine. She had a funny expression on her face.
"Why are you roaming around with my boyfriend?" suddenly Tori asked her.
Kat was shocked. So was I? I looked at Tori, she just winked at me. I understood she was playing with her. She loves playing pranks. And I love her. She is the only one I love besides Ellie. And she is the only one who knew Elizabeth by her face. The others vampires who knew her were dead along with the ones who killed her. You see I couldn't risk it if someone recognised her in this birth. So I killed all of them.
"So-soo-sorry. I dint knew—"
As she was speaking Tori started to laugh. And I laughed as well.
"What is so funny?" she asked us.
"He hahahaha is hehehe m-my hahaha br-br hehehehe brother" Tori said in between her laugh.
"What?" Katherine asked unable to understand.
"Katherine this is my sister Tori"
Katherine understood then smiled. When Tori was fine to talk she extended her hand to meet Katherine's
"I am sorry for that. I am Victoria Lorain Vandrake. I am David's half sister. You can call me Tori."
"It's alright. Are you joining the school too?"
"Yeah. Let's talk inside. I am starving." We went inside.
Kingdom in Zenora:
SPOV:
The guards just came in they told me they found sister. I don't know what to do. I am so happy. I can finally have my answers, come out of 'the curse', and most importantly meet her.
As I meet father I hugged him, and then went to mother she was crying again.
"Tumi ekhono keno kado" (why are you still crying?)
"Tor didi ke khuje pawa gache" (they found your sister)
"Tale? Tomar khushi taka uchit" (so? You should be happy)
"Ami jani. Kintu tor baba bole tui oke ante jabi. Ami ekta meir jonno amr ar ekta meke harate chaina" (I know. But your father wants to send you to get your sister back. I don't want to lose my one daughter for another daughter).
"Tai naki? Ki khecho shokale?" (Really? What did you eat this morning?)
"Keu orom kotha bole nijer ma er sathe?" (Is that the way you talk to your mother)
"Ki korte bolo amake tale? Sau bochor dhore amake shudu kotha sunieche je ami didi er moto hote parini ar ajge bole amake harate chaina. Shudu bolo amake kobe jete hobe" (what do you want me to do them? For the past hundred years she has only been telling I am not like sister. And now all of a sudden she cares. Just tell me when am I suppose no leave)
"Ekhon" (now)
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So what do you think? And I am an animal lover too. Serena wears animal skin. You can sue her if you want it's not my fault. I dint ask her to wear it. Guys if you like my story then please review. Any suggestion can be given. And can anybody help me how to put pictures. Then it might even easier for you if you know how they look.