I'm going straight to chapter 1, and i'd reeeeeealy appreciate reviews... Please?
The BAU team were in the office when JJ walked in with her usually neat files and hand outs for everyone. She pressed the usual button on the remote and pictures of three 11 to 13 year old girls came on the screen. "3 girls aged 11, 12, and 13 were taken from their homes with no trace but a small pool of blood from each of them. 5 days later they were found in their back gardens dead with major burns to the face. They were each taken 2 weeks apart. 3 days ago Lauren Mackaskill 14 was taken from her home just like the others. If this is the same guy we have a maximum of 2 days to find her."
"We'll need to get there a.s.a.p if we have any chance of finding her." Hotch was worried. They only had 2 days left.
"Wait. So this guy's abducting and killing people in age order?" Morgan suddenly pitched in.
"Yes, I've got the plane standing by sir" JJ was as usual determined.
Reid burst in no one realising that he wasn't there until now. He cast JJ a worried look and she knew what it meant but now wasn't the time to talk.
"Reid, get your stuff we have to go now" Hotch walked out of the office in the stern way he always does with the usual expression that says 'I'm not amused'.
On the plane everyone was unusually quiet. Then Reid came back from the bathroom and sat opposite JJ.
JJ leaned over and handed Prentiss a radio and said "I think this'll be more fun with these" and she smiled childishly.
Suddenly Garcia's voice came from the closed laptop "Hey guys, u wanna open up?"
"Sorry baby girl, what u got for us?" Morgan opened the laptop.
"Listen guys, this just in from the police over there, another girl, Georgia, was taken this morning same as the others except she is 11 and there was a note left by the UN-SUB. It said to the BAU team on the front."
"So he knows we're coming." Reid interjected.
Garcia continued "It reads 'I have them both, Lauren and Georgia. You have approximately 5 hours to find them. If you do I'll give myself up, if you don't you will have bad news for the parents. Your time starts when the clock strikes 3:00pm. You'll never find me.' And there's just one more thing." It looked like it pained her to say it.
"What is it, baby girl?"
"It's written in Laurens blood" her expression was now horrified.
"That's all we need sweetness, talk to you later"
"Garcia out." The picture faded and the laptop was closed.
"So we know he's killing people in age order and dumping them in their back gardens"
"But Georgia was 11 not 15."
"So he's devolving"
"We're arriving in Las Vegas in 15 minutes" Rossi came out from talking to the pilot.
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