Just watched the first episode of season seven and can't wait for next weeks now! Anyway Iwanna say thanks to CM-Obsessed, TinaraRose97Xx, journey4eva, and crazyobsession101 for reviewing! You all made me feel really good about myself and my writing! Tips, criticism and compliments are welcome ;)
As soon as they got to the Las Vegas police department JJ set up in their usual office, because they had been there before she knew her way around.
The team gathered in the office when there was only 4 hours left.
*Beep*
"What was that? Reid?"
"Sorry that was my phone, I got a text"
"Haven't you ever heard of an interesting ringtone? Who's it from anyway?"
"I don't know, it just says unknown number, wait I'll read it…oh no"
"Reid? What's it say?"
"It says 'one of your friends will die soon' what am I gonna do?"
"Text back"
"Ok…but I doubt he'll tell me who he is…"
2 minutes later *beep*.
"He texted back…oh my God. He says 'I'm the one you call the UN-SUB, one of your friends will die if you don't find the girls. You have 4 hours left.' Guy's why is he texting me? Why not any of you?"
"Morgan, call Garcia tell her to try and track the text messages, JJ and Rossi you go talk to Laurens friend Chantelle, she was the last one to talk to Lauren, Reid and Prentiss, you stay here and do geographical profiling, Morgan you come with me we'll check out the letter left at where Georgia was taken. And be careful, if this is our guy one of us could be in danger."
Everyone but Prentiss and Reid left the room, and Prentiss had a few questions to ask. "Hey Reid, why were you late this morning anyway?"
"That's not important right now. What's important is we find these girls before anything else happens. Seriously. One of you might be in trouble and I don't know why, so let's get this done." There was an unusual seriousness in his voice. He wasn't ready to lose one of his only friends in the next 4 hours.
JJ knocked on the door of the Benson household and almost instantly an 11 year old boy answered the door.
"Hi, is Chantelle here?"
"Who are you?"
"We're the FBI and we need to talk to your sister. Where is she?" Rossi and JJ both flashed their credentials at the young boy.
"CHANTELLE! THE FBI IS HERE TO TALK TO YOU!"
An older 14 year old girl then came to the door. "Hi, I'm Chantelle; sorry about Brodie he's a bit annoying. What did you want?"
She was smiling. JJ thought to herself that this wasn't the face of someone who's just lost her best friend and might forever.
"Hi, I'm Jennifer Jereau my friends call me JJ and this is David Rossi. We wanted to talk to you about Lauren."
Chantelles face dropped. "Oh, I had put that out of my mind but alright, come in"
The living room was a bit messy but to be fair there was 4 kids in the house. JJ and Rossi sat on the sofa which sunk down a little like it had been worn out and was tired of people sitting on it.
"We want to know, did you see anything strange about the way Lauren acted over the last couple of weeks?"
"Well, no she just seemed normal."
"Did she talk to you about anything, like if she felt like she was being watched or something strange that you wouldn't normally talk about?"
"No, it was just like normal, nothing strange to talk about, no weird behaviour."
"How about visitors" Rossi suddenly thought "Were there any constant visitors to the house?"
"Actually, the electrician did go round a lot. He even had to have a key in case they were out and it was an emergency."
"I'll call Hotch"
"Was that a bad thing that he went round a lot? Is he the one that took them?"
"We don't know just yet but when we find them we'll let you know, and if you remember anything that could help us, here's my number" JJ handed her a small card and followed Rossi out the front door.
Morgan and Hotch were just about to get out of the Black SUV to look at the crime scene at The Nolan House were Georgia was taken, when JJ called.
"Hello…yes we're outside right now…really…ok talk to you as soon as we know something…bye"
"What did JJ want?"
"Laurens friend Chantelle says that their electrician went round their almost every day and had a key in case of emergencies. I said we'd report back as soon as we know anything."
"Right, let's have a look at this scene then."
The Nolan's house was pristine from the front. A nice neat gravel path, lined with beautiful red roses lead up to the snowy, white door. They walked through the hall and into the kitchen where the blood and the note was found.
"So this guy probably has keys to all his victims' homes. He gets them to think he's their friend, and then when they leave the house he goes in…" Morgan acted like the UN-SUB to make sure Hotch under stood everything. "…Walks down the hall, hides behind the door leading into the kitchen and waits. As soon as the kid is alone, he makes his move"
"He will have had to watch them for a couple of weeks to get used to their routine. So he knows when they will be alone in the house."
"We've got to report back as quickly as possible"
"Agent Morgan, Agent Hotchner?"
"What is it chief?"
"The forensic scientists say that Laurens is not the only blood that is on that note. They recon the UN-SUB screwed up and we have a blood sample"
"So who is the guy?"
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