Here's chapter 5, hope it'll do for ya.
The team had gathered outside the wood where JJ's phone last had signal and just as they had expected there was traces of blood on the pavement and her smashed cell phone about a metre away.
"WHERE THE HELL ARE THEY?" Spencer was enraged.
"Spencer, calm down man" Morgan tried to reassure him "We'll find them soon, I know we will"
"Right, we need every cop we can get searching every inch of this wood, if you see anyone in there bring them back here and question them. Get going"
They all set off immediately when Prentiss had a brain wave.
"The radios…"
"What?"
"JJ gave me a radio so we could talk in different rooms without you lot knowing. She's probably still got it" She reached for her radio, turned it on and checked on every channel. "There's someone on channel 7. Let's hope its JJ" She pressed a button and started to speak "JJ? Can you hear me? Is anyone there?"
JJ and Georgia where still sat in the corner, Georgia hugging up. Richard had gone out for supplies and JJ was trying to comfort Georgia. It was only moments ago when Richard hauled Laurens lifeless body out to dump it in her family's back garden after he added the details of half a burnt face. JJ and Georgia couldn't bear to look.
"It's alright, I'm not gonna let him do that to you. It'll be alright, I promise" But in her own mind she knew if the team didn't find them…She was stopped by a voice.
"JJ? Can you hear me? Is anyone there?"
"Prentiss? That's Prentiss. Quick get my radio out of my back pocket" Georgia quickly got it and pressed the button. "Prentiss? Is that you?"
"JJ! You're alright!"
"Just about, I think my jaw is fractured."
"That's not good…"
"Prentiss, he killed Lauren, he has an electric chair and the guy he was with was just hired help. He's gone now. You gotta find us soon"
"Don't worry, we will. Do you know where you are?"
"It looks like we're underground. The walls are all muddy and the door is on the roof"
"Can you tell us anything else? Where's Richard?"
"He went out for supplies. He could be back any minute"
"Listen, hang in there, we'll get there as…"
Richard walked through the door. "I'm ba- WHAT DO YOU THINK YOUR DOING?"
He walked over to JJ and snatched the radio.
"Hello. You've just earned your friend hell until either you find us or she dies. Oh, and you have 1 hour until the smallest one dies" He left the radio on so they could hear as he grabbed JJ by the hair and into the next room. Pain soared through JJ and she cried out.
"JJ, NO, DON'T LEAVE ME, PLEASE!" The door slammed and Georgia was left alone, terrified.
"Georgia? Are you there?" The radio was left behind.
"Hello? Please help me, he took her into the other room and I think he took a bat or something"
"Oh no, thanks Georgia, We will get to you in time. I promise"
"We have to get there now"
"Its 5 acres we need everyone to help. Come on"
Richard dropped JJ in the middle of the floor. When she tried to fight back the bat met her stomach with maximum force. She keeled over and fell to the floor then, feeling the release, he started to hit her in the back, until she was so weak she couldn't get up. There was her blood running down her face and she was stinging all over. He then picked her up and sat her on a chair and tied her to it, then brought Georgia into the room and sat her in the corner. She wondered what he had in mind as he got out his phone and started writing something on paper.
"What's Spencer's number" He was strict and demanding.
"Why?"
"Give me the number" He took out a gun and pointed it at Georgia and she winced. He was getting impatient, JJ could tell.
"Give me the phone" he passed over the phone, she put in the number and gave it back.
"Now, I'm gonna video you saying this and send it to Spencer. If you don't she will die. It's gonna break him" He gave her the script while he was smiling to himself; she read it and started crying.
"Oh no, please…" She knew she had to even though it would break her as well.
He dialled the number and it started Ringing.
Reid, Prentiss, Rossi and Morgan were all about 5 metres apart with torches searching the floor and they were all shouting "JJ!" And "GEORGIA!" Reid's phone suddenly rang and he jumped. He frantically searched for it and when the caller ID said 'Jennifer' he answered immediately "JJ?"
"No, but close" Richard answered.
"GUYS, IT'S HIM, what do you want?" The team gathered round to listen as Reid put the phone on speaker.
"Just calling to say hi and JJ has something to say to you" He hung up.
"What was that about? What did he mean?"
4 minutes later Reid's phone buzzed with a video link. He clicked the link and everyone watched as a blood soaked JJ came on screen crying and begging him not to make her say this.
"Oh no" Then she started to speak.
"Spence, I'm so sorry…" She began to read from the paper. "This is your entire fault, you did this to us. These scars will be a constant reminder of your guilt and that all those years ago you made a decision, and that decision has made this hell for me. If I get through this you should always feel guilty. I'm so, so sorry…"
She finished and Richard picked up the bat and untied her. "Hold this" he gave the phone to Georgia then turned his attention back to the fallen agent. "Stand up" JJ tried but she couldn't "STAND UP!" it took a lot of effort but she got up and Richard hit her hard in the side with the bat. She collapsed and blacked out once again. Richard snatched the camera from the crying girl and turned it around to reveal his half burned face.
"This is your fault Spencer. Feeling guilty yet?" The picture went black and Reid felt a tear escape from the corner of his eye.
"Reid, are you okay?"
"Yeah, I'm gonna send this to Garcia to see if she can trace it." Morgan called Garcia and she answered almost immediately.
"Have you found them yet? Are they alright? What do you need? TALK TO ME MORGAN!"
"Calm down baby doll, we need you to try and track this video message sent to Reid, and you might not wanna watch it, okay?"
"I'm on it, stay on the line this will only take a few seconds" She had never typed so fast in her life but she wondered what was on that video that made Morgan tell her not to watch it. It can't do any harm just to look… she thought as she clicked the link.
"Rossi, call Hotch and tell him we might have where they are"
"Oh my little girl…" Garcia started to cry when one of her monitors bleeped "got it, Morgan. I'll guide you through, this is gonna be tricky, ready?"
"Yeah babe, hurry because we only got…" Morgan checked his watch "…15 minutes to find them"
Garcia's directions were precise and lead them to a small clearing in the middle of the wood. Hotch and the other officers joined them.
"JJ said they are probably underground so start stomping"
Again thanks for reading!
lolyncut: Sorry I know i'm asking too much, it's my first fanfic and i'm a bit too eager to know what people think. If you have any tips they'd help a lot, you're an amazing writer.
Lil'MissTomParkerTW: Thanks babe ;) I'm so sorry about my grammer! It's the one thing I can't stand to get wrong! ;) :L