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STAR WARS The Rise of Grimmur Prologue
Iridonia: 2000 ABY
Dust, dust was all the remained of the once great city of Mel'kathor amongst the smoldering ruins and scorched ground stood a young Zabrak Warrior looking upon the ruins with a burning hatred inside of him. As he continued walking through the burning remains of the city he comes upon the now destroyed royal palace. As he looked upon the once magnificent palace that is now nothing more than a crumbling ruin a single tear falls from his eyes. As his crimson cape wraps around his battle armor in the wind he walks closer to the palace and enters what is left of the front entrance. He surveys the inside of the palace signs of battle are everywhere bodies lay strewn all across the floor. Continuing through the palace he comes upon the throne room he hesitates to open the door afraid of what he might find behind it. He takes a deep breath and pushes the large double doors open. As he stepped through the door the smell of charred flesh seared his nose and the sight of burning bodies sickened him. As he continued to walk towards the throne he could see the remains of a young girl curled up in the fetal position burnt to a crisp. As he reaches the throne he sees the remains of the king with a sword through his gut he was nothing but charred remains now. He approaches the throne and stumbles over his own feet falling onto the throne. He sits back and weeps at the sight before him his family killed and burned. As he stares at the charred remains of his family his chief lieutenant bursts through the door only to stop abruptly and stare at the sight before him. The lieutenant regains his composure and rushes over to the throne.
"Sir we have to get you out of here now!" shouts the lieutenant
"Why must you disturbed me in this time of great sorrow" responded the young warrior
"Sir you are the last remaining heir to the throne we must get you to safety!" the lieutenant persists
"Fine prepare the men we leave in ten minutes" replied the young warrior
"Yes sir" the lieutenant said before rushing out of the throne room
The young warrior takes one last look around the room swearing to avenge the deaths of his family before exiting the room…
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