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Chapter 2 -

Luffy was shouting at the tone dial while Nami was thinking of a way out

"Luffy give me the tone diall - Listen you! Where are the rest of the crew?" Nami shouted "They're somewhere in the house but you'll have to get out of here first" giggled Arashi "How can we? There is kurosaki everwhere!" Nami said frustrated.
"There is a key in this room .. find it and you'll be free."
"Yosh! All we have to do is find a key right?" said by Luffy just before he starts rampaging "No you idiot wait!" she said as she grabbed him by his rubber cheek. "We have to start slow.." tossing over the dial "All we have to do is find a key easy!"
"No, NOT easy you idiot! How the hell are we suppossed to find a key in this big room filled with furniture? He could have put it anywhere!"
"What if I look on this side and you look on the other?" Suggested Luffy. Nami nodded

A couple of hours past since then and they still couldn't find it

"Didn't find it yet?" gigled Arashi "Why the hell are you doing this?" shouted Luffy frustrated"
"I have my reasons .. Now don't get too mad .. If light is shining there still is hope"
"What is that supposed to mean? - He's not replying .."
"It must have some kind of meaning or else he wouldn't say it .."

Luffy just sat there staring at Nami while she was pacing back and forth thinking of what that meant eventually Nami notices and asks him why he keeps staring at her "I'm sorry I won't stare again .."
"Its okay but why do you have to keep staring?"
"No reason I just notice how pretty you are that's all .."
"Thank you Luffy .. " said by a shocked and shy Nami. "How I would love to tell him how I feel but nows not the time and -" her thoughts were cut off by her looking at the ceiling a notices a little shine from somewhere on the chandelier.
"Luffy the key! It's on the chandelier!"
"Yosh!" He streched his head a found the key, he grabbed it and brought it down with him"
"So that's what he meant" happily said by Nami as she hugged Luffy with joy. He hugged her back Noticing they're actions Nami quickly pushed herself away and said "we should get going and save the rest .."
"y-yeah.."

Nami grabbed the tone dial and ran out of the room with her captain

"Oh so you managed to get out? Not as dumb as I thought , but lets see you find your crew .."
"What's up your sleeve Arashi?" asked Nami "Oh, you'll see but now good luck finding your friends each one is in a seperate room lying down unconsious" he giggled "IF YOU HURT MY CREW I'LL KICK YOUR ASS" shouted Luffy No one replied ..

"It'll take us ages until we find each one of them .." said Nami "This place has like a hundered rooms .."

They checked each room they passes but found nothing

"What are we gonna do ? I feel like were running in circles!" shouted Luffy "What if we leave a mark on each door we passed" suggested Nami "Good idea" nodded Luffy

And so they did until they reached a big pink door they looked at each other then as Luffy opened the pink fluffy door he didn't believe what he saw ..

See what happens in the next chapter What lies behind the door!
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