Yay! Reviews! And I know you all kinda said the same thing about how the guys were dissin' them. But don't worry, there's a reason. For very guy, you'll find out, and I want to reply to this review I got.
I love this story you portray them so well, but the guys I think were a little
off, like when Naruto called Hinata a weirdo like Naruto would ever be that mean
to Hinata and Shikamaru isn't that mean i mean he wouldn't turn down Ino for
no reason ( btw I'm a true temari/shikamaiu fan ) but everything else was
Excellent and very creative.
Well, yeah, they were a little off, but in the series Naruto called Hinata a "dark, timid, weirdo" So I just wanted to take those words. But, yeah, Shikamaru had a reason for being that way, everyone does. And I think his was the meanest XD But, remember, they have a reason, so bear with me here.
IMPORTANT NOTICE: at TenTen's part, she, well, says a lot of 'bad words' at the beginning. So if you're like, 10 please ignore everything in caps. Remember, I warned you
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WITH HINATA! OH YEAH!
When Hinata got to the Hyuuga estate, she ran right to her room. But before she still had a ways to go, When she was about to round the corner, Neji of all people comes around it. "Hinata?" Neji asked as Hinata came to a sudden stop before she ran into him. "Y-yes, Neji" Hinata looked down, still intimidated by her older cousin.
"What are you doing Hinata?" Neji asked looking down at Hinata. There was strength and authority in his voice as he spoke to Hinata, Which intimidated her even more
"Well, I, j-just…I'm sorry, but I must go now Neji!" Hinata quickly dashed past Neji and ran into her room and shut the door. And she left behind a dumbstruck Neji.
Hinata walked over to her WALK-IN CLOSET and opened the door. (A/n: Bet you wish you had one of those! LoL) She looked from one rack, to the other, but couldn't find anything worth trying on.
"I can't do this, I need professional help." Hinata said to herself. She walked out of the closet and picked up her Glittery purple phone that was on her night stand next to her bed. She sat down on her neatly made Lavender/violet bedspread. Hinata dialed Ino's number and waited for a reply.
Ring…Ring….Ring…
"Hello?"
"Hi Ino."
"Hi Hinata! What's up, don't tell me your thinking of canceling."
"Oh, no, it's just that I have nothing to wear and I was-"
"You need me to help you? Okay, come over to my house and I'll have you looking so good, KIBA won't even be able to tell who you are!"
"O-okay, thanks Ino. I-I'll come right over"
"Kay, bye!"
Hinata Hung up her phone and headed over to Ino's house. But little did our poor little Hinata know, Ino had something, well, EVIL in store for her. Poor, poor, Hinata.
WITH, TENTEN! YEAH! GO TENTEN!
"AAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! WHAT THE FRICKIN' HELL! DAMN YOU STUPID CLOSET! I HAVE NOTHING TO WEAR AND ITS YOUR BLOODY FRICKIN' FAULT! DAMN YOU!
A colorful rainbow filled meadow of curse words could be heard from a certain someone's apartment. Passerby's stopped and stared at TenTen's 2 story apartment. Then they heard
BAM!
CRASH!
SHATTER!
EXSPLOSION!
And then, it was quiet. Everyone who heard this continued about their own business, happy that they had nothing to do with the angered female. But, unfortunately, you and I aren't so lucky, so we must enter…The Void….
TenTen was in her room panting, laying on her Magenta/Dark blue bed. It looked like a tornado had hit. Her clothes were thrown everywhere, her weapons were all over the place, everything was exactly were it WASN'T supposed to be. And sooner, or later, she would have to fix it.
TenTen sighed as she got up, it was a futile mission. Why would a tomboy weapon mistress have party girl clothes? But then, it hit her, It hither like your little brother who just came into your room for no reason and pelted you with beanie babies of all sizes.
Anyway, she did have a parting outfit. Something that Ino and Sakura had bought for her when they dragged her to the mall. TenTen hoped of her bed and ran to her full body length mirror. Behind it hung the out fit; she hid it there so she wouldn't get tempted to wear it. But now was an emergency, she had to wear it whether she wanted to or not.
TenTen held it up to her; it was a Black Fishnet Crop-Top and Gloves with Black Buckled-Leg Pants and black Platform Boots with three Lavender stripes running down them. The outfit also had a Lavender belt and the buckle was a silver Dragon that hung off her waist.
With a sigh TenTen went to her bathroom and tried it on. When she came back out she had her hair down. It was long, layered and reached right under her shoulder blade; she had also dyed it black.
TenTen surveyed herself in front of her mirror. She looked really good, maybe on a gothic side, but good none the less. TenTen then looked at her room. It was still a complete mess, but, whatever. TenTen looked at the Violet Dragon clock adorning her night stand, the somehow, hadn't toppled over in TenTen's rampage. It said 6:24.
"OMG! Is it that late? I have to hurry!" She started to panic. The New Bar was practically on the other side of town.
Somehow, through all that mess, TenTen managed to find her black and Lavender boxy purse. She grabbed it and dashed out of her house locking the door. (A/n: She has her keys) She ran to the bar, getting glances from everyone, especially the boys.
Unfortunately, TenTen was the first to arrive, so she sat quietly on one of the benches outside of the bar. But soon, she saw a very dressed up Sakura approaching her.
EARLIER WITH SAKURA! GO PINKY!
Sakura walked calmly walked into her house as not to startle her mom. She walked past the kitchen and gave her mother and father a friendly hello. Then she headed up to her room and threw open the closet door. An evil grin worthy of the Grinch himself plastered itself on Sakura's face.
23 minutes later….
Sakura was also admiring herself in her full body length mirror. It had taken 19 out of the 23 minutes deciding what to wear. But, she came to a conclusion. She had on a long black skirt with dark brown high heeled boots, with a white Oxford Shirt and a black vest. Sakura also had crimson disc earrings, her hair was curly, wavy, and had white long streaks through her black hair (she dyed it that). She modeled for herself one more time before she grabbed her red and black purse and headed out the door. She walked casually to the bar and saw TenTen sitting on the bench. Sakura went up to TenTen and greeted her.
"Hi TenTen, how are you?"
"Just fine Sakura. You look really nice, is that a new outfit?"
"Oh, this, no, it's just a dress that I haven't tried on in a while."
"Okay. Are the others with you?"
"No not yet. I guess I'll wait with you."
Sakura and TenTen waited for a few minutes, and at 7:00 sharp, they saw Ino and Hinata walking towards them.
EARLIER WITH HINATA AND INO! SHY AND LOUD CLASH!
Hinata slowly walked up to Ino's house. When she stepped up on the porch she rang the doorbell once. A few seconds later she heard……
BAM!...
SLAM!...
"I'M GETTING THE DOOR! HOLD ON FOR GOODNESS SAKE!"…….
THROW!...
DODGE!...
SMACK!...
At all of this Hinata sweat dropped. Then, Ino opened the door and greeted Hinata with a warm smile.
"Hi Hinata, how are you, come in."
"Umm…A-am I-interrupting s-something?"
"No not at all."
Ino led Hinata up the stairs and into her room. Ino's room was twice the size of Hinata's. It was Purple, Pink, and Sky blue. With a huge King size bed with a Blue curtain covering all sides of it with a small opening on one side for Ino to get into her bed with. Ino's closet had two doors that were mirrors themselves. When she opened them Hinata's jaw dropped to the floor. Ino's closet wasn't a walk-in closet, more like a DRIVE-IN closet.
It was so big, if you moved all the racks and clothes, you could throw a party for everyone in England's, and America's Congress put together! Ino ran inside and started filing through different racks, and started picking out dresses. Hinata took a few steps inside, but was still shocked about the hugeness of the place.
"Well don't just stand there, try these on." Ino put a mountain of clothes into Hinata's arms.
"O-okay, Ino" Hinata turned a corner and went down a few isles. Then, she saw a dressing room.
Hinata looked like this: O.O 'Ino has a dressing room in her closet, and there's an attendant!'
It's true, there was a girl behind a desk on the computer, and she greeted Hinata. From that moment until she left, Hinata's eye couldn't stop twitching.
In the end, Hinata wore a long pitch black skirt with a cropped black sweater and a sky blue shirt underneath. She also had on black thick high-heeled shoes with dark blue straps. But of course her hair had to be done; Ino would simply not allow her hair to not be done. So In the end Hinata's hair was dyed black with electric blue stripes throughout it, with a short razor-cut hair style.
Ino was wearing a Cotton Candy Pink Off-the-Shoulder Crop-Top. And a low rise medium blue colored pants with a light pink sash serving as a belt, and white tennis shoes. She also had on pink dangle earrings with a butterfly design. Ino's hair was dyed light pink with black streaks running through it.
Ino and Hinata left the house and met up with Sakura and TenTen outside the bar at 7:00 sharp.
"Wow, were're here right on time." Sakura said while looking at her wristwatch.
"Exactly on time. Creepy" TenTen stated.
"But, WHO CARES! WE'RE HERE, WE LOOK GOOD, AND WE ARE GONNA ROCK!" Ino said, er, yelled throwing her fist in the air. The other girls sweat dropped.
But, they all went in, and were lead to their table. The place was buzzing with people, and others were getting on and off the stage singing. Most we're pretty good, and some, well, we won't get into detail about how many people went deaf that night. But the girls had a really good view of the stage so they could see anything and anyone who went up on the stage.
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Well, I know that practically nothing important happened in this chapter XD. But in the next one, the girls will start to sing, promise! And you guys can send me suggestions for songs if you like. Actually, PLEASE DO THAT! XD.
And remember, Click that blue button. Its kinda small, square-ish. There's a rectangular one right next to it. CLICK IT NOW BEFORE I SMACK YOU! Umm, yeah, did I say that out loud… -looks around nervously-
