Fang's Surprise
Disclaimer: We do not own Maxium Ride.
A/N: This is my first fan fiction story so here it goes. Honest opinions are welcome. Please no cursing, so here's my story. Orange wrote most of it.
Fang Pov
This is it I'm going to surprise her. She is going to pass out over this. Now you're probably waiting in suspense. Like what is it, what is it, well I'm not going to tell you. You are going to have to find out yourselves.
Angel Pov
Mmmm, this is going to be good. Oops, Fang told me to get out of his head.
Max Pov
I'm SO EXCITED so, now your all probably thinking… the great maxium ride is squealing like little girl. WelI am squealing because I am super excited. Fang has planned a picnic for the whole flock. I hope there are tons of chocolate chip cookies. Well Nudge is torturing me to get dressed.
1 hour later
Nudge Pov
Ohh… I can't wait for the picnic. I know Max is dressed up all nice. You know why because I used my style senses to make her look gorgeous. I can't wait to see the look on Max's face at the picnic when she sees all those... oops I almost spilled it. Looks like I have to go Dr. Martinez said that I should really quit my rambling on and on and on and on…
Dr. Martinez Pov
Oh my little Maxi she'll be so happy at the picnic, before I go any further I'm sorry for nudges rambling. Well I better get going.
I'm a line break! I LOVE MY FANG PLUSHIES!
A/N: I love my fang plushie is someone's else name so, the credit goes to him/her
Max Pov
I have to admit the girl made me look good. Anyway Fang said we have to go now.
5 minutes later
Max Pov
I cannot take the tension. He's leading me or should I say flying me to some place. Yay we are finally here. Oh my Feathers! Look at all those YUMMY CHOCOLATE CHIP COOKIES!
10 minutes later
Fangs Pov
I know she would like. Now all I have to do is ask those 4 simple words or should say hard.
Max Pov
I am really going to have to do some flying to burn these cookies off. I think this is my 5th batch. Wait, what's Fang doing? He's walking quite nervously towards me. I hope something not wrong.
Fang starts to say something "I loved you all my life even in those stinking cages. Will you marry me?"
I was frozen in shock then I heard myself saying "Yes, yes, yes!" A/N: I hope you enjoyed! And thanks to the user I love my Fang plushie.