Alright so, the next chapter may or may not be more detailed, I have someone willing to proof read the chapter ^^ I'm not sure if they will do this for ALL the chapters but fingers crossed they do. Also, regarding the next chapter, I have started it so I shouldn't be long now, it might dive deeper into Jake and Brees past, letting you all get a little insight into their lives before they got dragged into Furys plan ;) Just got to wait and see~
~~~~~KC
