Yah the chapter 3ish 4 i have a lot of veiws but no reviws soooo please reviw. now i know im off on a lot of spelling but the way i see it is if you can understand what i mean then were all good :D sooooooooo as ive said befor this chapter is kinda sad or i think it is sad but please reviw and let me know who you think should be next i might start looking for oc's sooooo be looking out for me :D
Chapter 4 and maybe Chapter 5 :lets have some fun!...or not
as the team enterd the house they saw 7 doors. Above each door sat a flat screen tv. Feed back was heard over the intercom. "When you see you name on the screen above the asignd door. when ever your read you may begin" the intercom then whent dead as the names apperd on the tv screens. the team got up and whent to there asigned doors. "well" Robin said looking at the others "see you on the other side." he took hold of the door nob and opend the door.
(ROBINS P.O.V.)
Once i steped into the room the door closed behind me with a click. -locked- i thought as i turned my attention to the other side of the room. a light appered on another door labled exit. I heard the intercom came back on and Miss E voice ecoed in the room "ok Robin the idea of the game is to get to the other side when i say go you may start". i laghed "peace of cake" spounding a bit cocky if i do say so my self. Miss E's vocie was back with a loud GO! i started to run towred the door when more lights came up. i whent to a dead stop when i saw i was on a platform like one youd find in a circes. I looked across the way at the other door and saw it was on a platform just like the one im standing on. I look around and shout "What is this". the voice was back " if you get across you win your life you may begin."
I began to panic but i didnt show it. why show feer, feer means weakness and if i show feer i show im weak. "Please begin Mr. Grayson" i looked up at the sound of my real name. how did they she know who i am. Music bagan to play circes music and anotehr vocie was heard but not seen this time it was a mans " And now! the youngest Flying Grayson will make his way across the tapies...with out a net". gasps. once i get out of this room shes going down! i walked to the edge and sighed "here go's nothing. i grabed the bar and jumped. The blood was pounding in my ears my hands griping the bar so tight they started turning white. i saw the next bar ahaid and jumped for it. my hands are so close.
i missed
i began falling i grab for the grapaling hook in my belt and shoot to the celeing.
it never makes it
im falling and would continue falling. eventualy i will hit the ground and i will die.
tata mama sa fiu din nou cu tine (mom dad... ill be with you soon)
I am so, so sorry Zee
(normal P.O.V.)
the music shut off and the lights began to dim the intercom came one
"you lost"
awwwww! :'( i didnt add Zee into it because i couldnt think of how i would end her i might add her in the end when we bring back roy but not sure sooooooooo yea!