Okay here I am with chapter 1. I never intended to finish this chapter on the same day as the prologue but I guess it's a good thing right?
"Speech"
'Thoughts'
"Summon/Kyuubi speech, Jutsu and Jinchuuriki speech"
'Summon/Kyuubi thoughts'
Chapter 1:
Konohagakure, October 10th, five years later
Naruto's fifth birthday, any child's favorite day. In Naruto's case however it's a bit different, because his birthday was the same day of the Kyuubi attack. Naruto was never really like throughout the Leaf Village, one of the reasons he like to play pranks. Bad attention is better than no attention, right?
Today however the villagers seemed to hate him more than normal. That's why Naruto was running through the streets. He was running from a mob.
"GET BACK HERE, YOU DEMON"
"STOP RUNNING, YOU BRAT! YOU'VE CAUSED ENOUGH SUFFERING!"
These were among the shouts of said mob. The grief of the fifth anniversary of their loved one's deaths became too heavy. They wanted to punish the Kyuubi for his deeds, and punish him they would! The mob wasn't just villagers though, some of the ninja wanted to avenge their comrades by killing the demon.
"Leave me alone! I didn't do anything, I swear!" Naruto yelled at the mob behind him. He didn't get it, why did all the villagers hate him this much. What had he done to deserve this? He weaved between buildings, rushing through alleys, trying to escape them. He couldn't outrun them though and then it happened; the worst thing possible. He ran into a dead-end.
Naruto turned around he could see and hear the mob coming. 'I need to get out of here! They're really mad at me this time and I didn't even do anything!' looking around frantically he could see the mob entering the alley. He didn't see an exit though and he was scared, scared for his life. The ninja at the front of the mob could see his movements, looking for an exit.
"Oh no you won't! You can't escape, demon-brat!" one of the Shinobi yelled. He threw four kunai at Naruto. Naruto, still looking for an exit, didn't see them coming so he was pinned against the wall, at the mercy of the villagers and Shinobi. They closed in on Naruto, ready to start the horrible torture. They stabbed him, burned him with katon jutsu, beat him until his lights went out. Not too long after Naruto went lost consciousness a shout of "Gatsuuga!" could be heard and the mob was forced to back away from Naruto. A huge tornado struck the ground before Naruto and when it stopped it showed Tsume Inuzuka, her partner Kuromaru and a ten-year-old girl.
"You'll leave him alone! Now leave! All of you!" Tsume yelled. She was furious that they'd do something like this to a child. The Inuzuka clan did lose a good number of members in the Kyuubi attack but they never blamed Naruto for it. They knew the difference between the kunai and the scroll. The little girl ran over to Naruto and pulled the kunai out of him. He then just slumped to the ground. Tsume came and put Naruto on Kuromaru's back and they returned to the Inuzuka clan compound.
Meanwhile in Naruto's mindscape
Naruto woke up hearing dripping noises. When he sat up he noticed he was in a place that looked like a sewer. "O man did they really have to dump me in the sewer?" he said to himself but then he heard breathing. "Hello, is anyone there? Anyone at all?" No one answered. Naruto decided to try to find the source of this breathing. He saw light at the end of the sewer tunnel he figured the breathing came from there. He cautiously walked towards the end of the tunnel, when he got there he entered a huge room with giant steel bars on the other end of the room. On the middle of these bars there was a small piece of paper with the kanji for seal. He walked closer to the cage hearing the breathing get louder. Suddenly two huge eyes appeared with blood-red pupils. Naruto was scared now, what did he get himself into?
"Hello kit. Finally decided to show me your face huh?"
"W-who are y-you?" stuttered Naruto.
"Oh but I am the great Kyuubi no Yoko!" laughed the fox.
"K-Kyuubi? But why are you here? Where am I?" Naruto asked.
"We're in your mindscape kit. I'm sealed inside of you by that damned Yondaime."
"Sealed? But the Yondaime killed you! Get out of my mind!" Naruto yelled.
"He didn't kill me kit. I'm a being of pure chakra I can't be killed. And as much as I'd like to get out of here, I can't. I'm sealed remember!" The fox said pointing one of his now visible tails at the seal on the bars.
"So it's your fault the villagers act like this towards me?" Naruto looked confused now. He finally knew the reasons for their abuse and those glares he got.
"Yes kit I am indeed the one responsible and for that I'm sorry. I truly am, I never meant to attack the village in the first place. But that's beside the point now. The reason you're in here is because of those villagers. They did some serious damage kit."
"The villagers? How bad is it?"
"Did you ever wonder why you never got sick or how it is you heal so fast?" Naruto nodded. "Well kit it's because of me. I can heal you a lot faster than you normally do with my youki. Well the problem is that right now you're beyond repairs without any side effects."
"Really it was you?" Kyuubi nodded. "Thanks I guess. But what do you mean side effects?"
"Well I mean you won't be fully human anymore. You'll become a Hanyou, a half-demon. The biggest drawback will be that you might gain some Kitsune traits. While you'll be a lot stronger and your chakra will change to youki. You might change physically as well. Youki is many times more potent than regular chakra and having your own youki will help your healing factor even further."
"Hmm… So it's either die or become a half-demon?" Kyuubi nodded "Well I guess I don't really have a choice then do I?"
"Kit it's the best choice for you. Believe me, you'll be stronger, smarter and better at pranking too! I'll even help you train your Kitsune abilities, you might not know too much about being a ninja but it'll make you a better ninja too."
"O-okay Kyuubi, I'll do it." 'It's not like I have too much of a choice.'
"All right kit. I'll see you later then. When you wake up you'll be healed and if you want to talk to me just think about me. Since you've visited here the mental link has been opened."
Okay chapter one's finished.
I don't really have a plan ready of this story but I figure I'll just go on and wing it since I wouldn't even know how to plan it anyway.
Leave a review if you want more or if you have any constructive criticism.
