I tried updating this sooner but couldn't… Sorry… so to make up for it I put two chapters in this one…
Enjoy
Warning: This contains Yoai aka BOYXBOY you don't like it? Then don't read it, it is rated M for a reason this contains Sexual themes, Harsh Language and terrible grammar YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED!
Disclaimer: I do not own Naruto or anything else for that matter! That's that!
One more thing I have a poll I desperately want you guys to look at cause I want to know your guys opinion it will be up till the end of 2011 or until enough of you vote so please help me out oh and for the holidays I am writing a nice Drarry fic I think it's gonna be a one-shot, though Iam not positive yet I might just write a one-shot series where I add the next one-shot on holidays or something it might even be a drabble all I know for sure is it will be a romance angsty thing with Draco Malfoy and The Boy Who Lived XD I just might add another poll to see what you guys think or you can just hit the review button and tell me there J so enough of rambles
Now on to the story
'Beta or friend'
"me talking in the middle of the story"
"mystery person talking"
'Dreaming'
"Thinking"
Normal
"Oh shit, shit, SHIT! I am so dead!" Naruto yelled inside his head as Pain sat by him giving him the same look Sasuke had given him that day…
"WHAT THE HELL IS WITH PEOPLE DAMNIT!" he screamed in his head. Naruto tried to scoot farther away from the man above him but it was futile he couldn't get far enough away. Pain just laughed at his wasted efforts, Naruto wouldn't get away unless someone beat Pain but that wasn't going to happen.
"Oh Kyuu don't try to run from me, we are destined" Pain whispered in Naruto's ear while moving his hand about the smaller mans body, Naruto squirmed trying to get away but Pain took it as a sign of pleasure. He moved his lips to Naruto's tanned shoulder and bit it harshly causing Naruto to hiss in pain, the blonde tried to knee Pain in the gut but the older man dodged it easily he just sat up and frowned at Naruto.
"I am not this Kyuu person!" Naruto yelled glaring at Pain who leaned down to get a better look at Naruto's Sky Blue eyes, they sat there face to face Pain smirking while Naruto was glaring.
"But aren't you?" Pain asked Naruto leaning closer to him, Naruto could feel Pains breath on his cheek, Pain leaned in closer and grazed his teeth against Naruto's ear making the smaller man wince slightly, Pain kept smirking.
"In your body is contained the nine-tailed beast, and from what I have read his name is Kyuubi am I right?" Pain asked licking Naruto's chin, Naruto moved his head and kept glaring at Pain, he knew he was done for but he really hoped that someone would help him.
"Hey kit can you hear me?" a deep familiar voice rang through Naruto's head, the blonde looked around searching for the source of the voice.
"hnn?" Naruto responded confused, a sudden pressure on his crotch brought his attention back to the matters at hand though, it seemed Pain took the hnn as a hmm, that bastard actually thought he was enjoying this.
"ummm yea voice in my head I can hear you… that is if you really are a voice in my head… what do you say to helping me get out of here?… if you exist that is… GOD DAMNIT I AM SO CONFUSED!" Naruto thought silently praying as well, but no one answered and he grimaced when the pressure on his crotch grew worse. Naruto was just about to give up hope when the body hovering over him was thrown across the room, Naruto's eyes widened at what he saw.
"hmmm I say tea break… Oh wait I don't like tea… THEN HOW ABOUT COFFEE! Yep, yep so who do you guys think it is? Huh? Well you will have to wait till I stop my ramblings which will usually end in mid sentence due to my friends cutting me off, but this will happen once every chapter or so it wont be to long though… So do you guys agree with me that my friends are.
'Gomen! Back to the story!'
"Who? Who are you?" Naruto asked the beautiful red headed man in front of him, his hair was to his lower back his eyes seemed to be a darker red than his hair which matched the color of blood. The man smiled and walked over to Naruto.
"You know who I am kit" the man's smile grew wider when he looked at his hands, the man wasn't particularly tan nor was he extremely pale he had a perfect complexion in between, his clothes were ordinary though except for the color it was a deeper red than even his eyes not quite black but close enough to black that it could be mistaken if one was far away. Naruto caught movement from the corner of his eyes from were Pain was thrown, who was this man and why did he think Naruto knew him?
In Konoha
The ninja in front of Tsunade were all clad in black no one could see their faces but they all knew who the other was, one person stepped forward.
"Yamato you will be the leader with Shikamaru as the co leader if something were to happen to you" Tsunade stated easily looking at the man in the middle of the group she could barely see his sandy hair but it was in deed Yamato she smiled a little before making a flip motion of her wrist dismissing them, the twelve man team set off in the direction of the sound village hoping to get to Naruto and the others before all hope was lost.
In the Akatsuki cell
Quick note I was planning on ending it here but I said two chapters in one right? Right now back to the story
"Damn I can't see anything" Sai thought to himself as he stood up, he looked around again barely able to see the various outlines of bodies, he was trying to remember how this happened but he was having issues
"hmmm lets see last thing I remember was… Naruto…"
Flashback
Kakashi tried to get up but it was useless he just laid on the ground looking at the rest of us, Sasuke was next Pain landed a kick on Sasuke's head smashing him to the floor not even the Sharingan could see this Pain lifted him up and threw him behind him, Sasuke wasn't moving, Suigetsu charged forward and managed to slice a little cut on Pains face before he was down. Sai had moved to Sakura, who was unconscious Sai crouched in a fighting stance in front of her. Karin and Jugo attacked at the same time trying to get him but that didn't work, they to were down and unable to move. Pain slowly walked towards Sakura and Sai, the usually emotionless man had an air of anger around him, but he too didn't stand a chance against the man.
End of flashback
"Damnit!" Sai clenched his fists, this wasn't happening the way he thought it would. Someone hugging him brought Sai back to reality the person was definitely shorter and a girl, he blushed slightly.
"Sakura?" he whispered just before a soft yet intoxicating kiss was brought upon his lips, it started out soft and unsure, then a strong fire seemed to ignite between the two and the kiss became more heated. Sai put his hands around the pink girls waist drawing her closer, and she clasped her hands tightly behind his neck. The raven haired boy gently licked Sakura's bottom lip begging for entrance, they were both so new to the feelings raging between them. The couple was to engulfed in each other to notice that a torch was lit and all eyes were on them. Sai heard a faint clearing of ones throat and reluctantly moved away from Sakura to glare at Kakashi, who was giving them a look that said 'about damn time' Sakura was blushing and looking at the floor nervously twisting her hands and with a close eye you could see the slight pout to her lips. Sai noticed his glare wasn't even phasing the team captain, so he took time to notice how everyone else was positioned. Sasuke was kneeling next to a silver haired man who had rolled in on himself clutching his stomach, Sakura noticed and walked over to them offering to try and heal him. Not far from them was a red haired woman with a look of indifference on her face next to her was a man grimacing and looking at Sasuke. Of course there was Kakashi just standing there but something was different when Sai looked back at the ninja a look of confusion, anger, hurt, worry and maybe even a speck of insanity all thrown across his face so fast Sai almost didn't believe that the man 'lost his cool' as people normally state in a situation like this, slowly as if not to disturb the man Sai walked up to him. They were nearly the same height Kakashi still a bit taller though, Sai flicked the mans nose to get his attention and when Kakashi jumped he raised a thin eyebrow in question.
"What's wrong Sai?" The silver ninja asked rubbing the back of his neck nervously the kid knew something was up but he was still trying to be indifferent. Raven just gave him a look saying 'spill now' Kakashi started fidgeting even more, and he was just about to tell the young boy when a scream and loud crash resounded from the small cell. Sai instantly moved to Sakura and Sasuke clung to Suigetsu, Karin and Jugo moved closer to Sasuke and Kakashi was right behind Sai and Sakura….
*hides* cliffy? Why would I do this? Okie don't ask me why the hell I decided to do this cause honestly I don't know :P so what do you guys think of the mysterious new character? Can you guys figure out who it is? If you review and guess right you can claim one of three things, first person to guess right though can have all three things if they want it. Now the prizes are:
A Story or chapter dedicated to you
A character of your choice for a guest showing in any story of your choosing that is mine (I have more on the way not just this one and exile and they aren't all Naruto either I have a few Harry potter and Twilight ones as well)
And/Or a guest showing of you and/or your friends in "talk between Characters, Friends and me"
Well those are your prize options.
Okie you all know that school is starting soon if it hasn't already started for you so that means updates are gonna be even more delayed especially since I am playing volley ball -_- so please hang in there and don't be too mad… good thing is after this chapter I gonna make all chapters considerably longer… I hope so yea
Now before we end this and my rants check out my profile for a poll on a Gaara and Naruto story it gonna be a Cinderella parody but I want to know who you guys think should be "Cinderella" and who should be the handsome prince so visit my profile to have a say. Anyway on to talk between Characters, friends and of course me!
Naruto: RAEEEEEEE! IZ LOVEZ YOOOUUUZZZZZZ! *clings to Rae*
Shizune: Ummm Naruto that probably isn't a good idea…
Naruto: Whyz tha hellz not?
Rae: Who the fuck gave Naruto alcohol are you all fucking morons? *goes on rampage*
Naruto and Shizune: AAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHH
Gaara: Calm down Rae
Rae: hmmm? EEEEEEK GAAAAARRRRRAAAA! *hugs Gaara*
Itachi: R&R
Tsunade: Tune in next time
Rae: I think I am crazy
Lexie: You probably are girlie