Chapter 8

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Chapter Songs:

"I Wanna Sex You Up" Color Me Badd

"Celebrate" Kool and the Gang

"Justify My Love" Madonna

"Come Inside" Intro

BPOV

I couldn't have heard Edward right. There was absolutely no way.

"What did you just say Edward?"

"Bella, I want you to audition to be in my movie." His green eyes stared pleadingly into mine.

I shook my head trying to clear my head. I looked at him and leaned in to whisper. "Are you drunk or just insane?"

He laughed at my question. "Neither, Bella." His reached and grabbed my hands in his. Edwards thumb stroked the back of my hand sending shockwaves of electricity all over my body. "I know you feel it too."

God, did I feel it. I felt it so much that had we not been in a crowded restaurant I would have laid myself on the table like a sacrifice for him. I nodded. "But I am not an actress, Edward. I'm a writer."

His thumb didn't relent with each stroke shooting heat straight to my core. I could feel the liquid pooling in my panties and the walls of my pussy began to clinch. I thought to myself that Edward gave great hand. I swear that he knew exactly what he was doing to me. My body had to be flushed with the heat filling my body.

"I know you are a writer, Bella. You also told me that you and Alice loved to act as a hobby."

"Yes, the key word being "hobby." We performed in tiny productions, Edward. I think our biggest crowd had maybe 50 people in attendance. I. Am. Not. An. Actress," I grumbled.

"I have been in this industry for many years, Bella. I've watched people come, and I've watched them go. I've seen people who thought they were God's gift to acting fall flat on their faces and make complete asses out of themselves. I have also seen others who didn't think they could act, and they went on to be extremely successful. One of those people even won an Academy Award."

"I understand that but—" Edward put his finger over my lips. The little devil whispered in my ear and before the angel could react, I opened my mouth and began to suck on his finger with my lips and tongue. The devil began doing a happy dance when Edward groaned, and his eyes dilated with passion. The black abyss of desire now hid the jade from his eyes. I gulped and closed my eyes trying to get my now racing pulse under control. I could see the angel shaking her fingers at the devil and me, chastising us for our actions.

"Bella, I think we better take this discussion back to my place," Edward's seductive voice mixed with the pressure of his thumb was almost enough to push me over the precipice.

I could only nod as he stood and took my hand in his to lead us to his waiting car. The angel was screaming her head off, telling me that I had been in this place two days ago which resulted in me doing the much-hated walk of shame. In contrast, the devil was doing somersaults, handsprings and fist pumps in excitement. I think I heard the devil began to sing as Edward opened the limo door to help me in.

I've been waiting all night

So just let me hold you close to me

'Cause I've been dyin' for you girl

To make love to me

… … … …

Girl, you just make me feel so good

I just wanna, I just wanna look at you

Don't say anything at all

Just lay back, and enjoy the ride, yeah

… … … …

Make sweet lovin' all night long

Feels so right it can't be wrong

… … … …

Oh, I wanna touch you in all the right places, baby

I wanna make love to you, yeah

All night, all night, yeah

Those lyrics were slowly chipping away at what little willpower I had left in me. I was pretty sure that there was no going back now. Edward would be sexing me up all night long. I was so fucked – well, I would be once we got back to his place. The angel hung her head in shame and went to the corner of my mind to sulk. The devil nodded and told me I most certainly would be fucked and fucked good. Suddenly the devil starting shaking its ass and crooning "Celebration" by Kool and the Gang.

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The drive to Edward's was so filled with sexual tension I was surprised that we didn't set the limo on fire. Unlike the last time I went home with him in a limo, we weren't touching each other everywhere. We were just holding hands. Fingers stroking fingers. Palms dancing together in a sultry rhythm, mimicking what was sure to happen when we got to our destination.

Never in my life did I imagine that handholding could be the most unexpected and incredible foreplay. I was so turned on that I was afraid that the leather seats in the limo would be ruined from my excitement.

After we pulled in front of his brownstone, Edward got out and extended his hand to me to help me out of the car. I was vibrating with tension. I couldn't fight it. This attraction, this connection, that I felt with Edward; I had never experienced anything like it. I had to be with him. The devil simply nodded and told me that it was never wrong. Our fingers were linked tightly together as he opened the door.

The moment the door clicked shut I pushed Edward against the wall and attacked him. I pulled his shirt out of his pants and used both hands to rip it open sending buttons clattering on the hardwood floor around us. He reached up and tore his tie off and threw it across the room. My fingers ran up his chest, flicking his nipples before wrapping my arms around his neck and pulling his mouth closer to mine.

Edward's hands moved from my face, down my neck, shoulders, grazing my breasts, and I shivered in excitement.

I felt him gather my dress in his fists and helped him lift it over my head, leaving me in my matching royal blue bra and thong. The bra was shear, and Edward licked his lips when he saw my nipples had already hardened and were begging for his hands, lips, tongue, teeth, whatever he wanted to use to pleasure them. He reached behind me and unclasped my bra. His hands began massaging my breasts as we kissed heatedly. I began to pull his shirt off his arms but the buttons on the ends of his sleeves hampered my efforts.

Our bare chests were rubbing against each other as I continued to hold Edward captive against the wall. We laced our hands together and moved them over his head. Our naked torsos rubbing against each other felt undeniably fantastic, but it wasn't enough.

Edward startled me when he switched our positions leaving my back against the cold stone wall. He jerked the shirt off and pulled me against him. I wrapped my legs and arms around him tightly as our lips found purchase again. Edward's hands cupped my bare ass and pulled me into his erection as he carried me up the stairs to his bedroom.

Edward laid me on the bed and stepped back to consume me with his eyes. He leaned over me kissing my lips as he pushed my breasts together, squeezing them tightly. I squirmed anxiously as he nipped and licked at my erect nipples.

It was one of the most erotic experiences of my life as he never broke contact with my eyes while he worshipped my body. I kissed his forehead and used my hands to massage his scalp, slowly moving them to his nape.

Edward pulled me so I was sitting up, and my legs wrapped tightly around his waist. He continued his sweet torment on my breasts. Biting. Nipping. Sucking. Licking. Squeezing. Pinching. He pushed my breasts together again as one hand massaged my breast and his other hand wrapped around my back holding me tightly in place.

Our clothing covered hips were undulating into each other forcefully as I felt my legs begin to quiver as an orgasm surprisingly hit me. How could I have forgotten the magic that this amazing man could work on my body, especially my breasts? Our last encounter proved that Edward Cullen was most definitely a breast man.

He pulled my underwear off and laid me back on the bed. The next thing I knew Edward pulled me forward on top of him, and he attached his mouth to my drenched pussy. He pulled me to a sitting position on top of him while using his hands to put my core even closer to his magical lips. I had never been in this position before, on top of a man, me basically sitting on his face.

Torturously Edward tormented me with his tongue moving up and down my slit as he pulled my clit into his mouth with his teeth. While lying flat on his back below me, he used his hands to hold me in place forcing my arms behind my back. While I was dying to find release again, Edward had basically put me in a pussy death grip. It was like he never wanted my pussy to ever be separate from his mouth. It was like I was his most favorite thing to eat in the entire world.

I needed to touch him and give him pleasure like he was giving me. Each lick to my core caused me to arch my back further and further, getting me closer and closer to his glorious cock. I worked my arms out of his grasp and reached behind mewhile he was having dessert à la Bella. I unbuckled his belt and threw it to the side of the bed. My hand cupped the bulge in his pants, stroking forcefully as my fingers begin to slowly pull down the zipper.

I slid my hand inside his boxers and cupped his cock as he continued to devour me. I pushed his pants and boxers as far down as I could, and Edward quickly kicked them off his legs. I stroked his cock as he ate and ate like I was the last meal he would ever consume.

He was huge. Since I was leaning backwards, almost laying my back on top of his front, his erection hit my ass each time Edward took a bite of my pussy. I moved my hand to my mouth and licked my palm to provide some lubrication for Edward's penis, and I continued to stroke his firm length.

My fingernails gently grazed his length as I moved my hand along his shaft causing him to groan into my clit. The vibrations against my clit bought me another orgasm, and I threw my head back in ecstasy.

I thought that Edward was ready to get to the main event of the evening, but he wasn't finished with me yet. As I leaned back to stroke him, his hand reached up to caress my side and cup my face in the palm of his hand. His mouth still latched to my pussy.

I felt him smile at my center, and I couldn't help but smile too. I added a second hand as I sat up to get a better grip and stroked him with abandon. He licked and bit my core harder and faster as my strokes against his length picked up the same rhythm as his mouth.

He looked me in the eye with a hooded gaze as his hand pinched and fondled my breasts. His fingernails pushed almost painfully into my sensitized flesh. Edward threw me on my back spreading my legs wide apart with my knees pushed up towards my face.

I was so open, so vulnerable to him in this moment, and I loved the feeling of anticipation as his eyes raked up and down my flushed body. Edward kept his hands on the back of my knees holding me in place as he licked from my opening to my clit over and over again.

I had never had someone go down on me like this. Edward was definitely the most unselfish lover on the planet. I had no idea that something like this could turn me on to the point that I thought I might black out from the pleasure of it. I began to stroke my breasts and pinch my nipples as he delved his tongue so deep into my depths that I could swear that he almost reached my g-spot.

Edward's powerful hands pushed down on my lower abdomen, and I wrapped my legs around his back as I thrust my pussy harder against his mouth. The twisting and turning of his tongue inside me was almost more than I could bear.

My breathing was ragged as I gripped the sheets trying to hold on before I exploded into a billion pieces. I screamed his name as I reached another orgasm. How could it be possible to cum this many times and he hadn't even put his cock inside me yet? I was almost certain headlines in tomorrow's paper would read, "Bella Swan died of massive orgasm overdose."

He pushed my knees up again and his lips crashed into my mouth. My taste on his lips should have grossed me out, but it made me even hotter. I craved him more than I ever thought possible. As his tongue battled with mine for supremacy, he thrust his cock into my drenched pussy.

Edward turned slightly to the side and cupped my ass while he impaled me masterfully thrust after thrust. Every time he pulled almost all the way out and entered me again I could feel his balls brush against me. Each thrust reached deeper and deeper inside of me. He pushed my hips up at an angle so his cock hit my g-spot perfectly when he entered me.

Those jade green eyes never left mine as his hand gripped my hair forcing me to keep my eyes locked on him. My hand stroked Edward's chiseled six-pack running over each groove of his muscled stomach. I reached my hand up and pinched his nipples. Edward threw his head back in pleasure as I had my turn pinching his nipples into hardened nubs. The nails of my thumb and forefinger scraped and pulled at them.

Edward's mouth found mine again as he decided it was his turn to fondle my breasts. His hand plucked at my hardened peaks again and again. His mouth moved down my neck to my chest where he tugged on my nipples and painfully bit them pulling them deep into his mouth. Edward's tongue laved it to soothe the pleasurable love bites he placed upon my breasts. He moved to the other breast to repeat the sweet agony.

Both of our bodies were drenched in sweat, and the room was filled with moan after moan of pleasure and the sound of our flesh moving together in perfect tandem. When I thought his thrusts couldn't get any faster or deeper, they did. His nails bit deeply into the flesh of my ass as my nails scratched at his chest leaving red welts in their wake. Suddenly my vision darkened as I came with a scream and the most earth-shattering orgasm I had ever felt.

Edward's movements became jerky and uneven, and he pulled me tightly to him as he delivered his hardest and deepest thrust yet. I felt him reach his orgasm as he pulsed so deeply inside of me I was sure we had become one. His thrusts slowed but he kept his still semi-erect cock moving inside of me.

The walls of my pussy continued to pulse tightly around his cock holding him in the depths of my body. As we both came down from our glorious highs, he kissed my forehead, my nose, each cheek, and then placed his soft lips on mine with a delightful lingering kiss as his arms held us tightly together. He sucked my bottom lip into his mouth and bit at it gently before our tongues began to slowly circle each other. I sighed into his mouth.

His fingers brushed the damp hair from my brow as he kissed my forehead again.

"I don't think I will ever get enough of you, love. You are the most amazing woman I've ever met."

I ran my fingers down his stubbled cheek and then his beautiful swollen lips. "I've never experienced anything like that before, Edward. I swear I thought I was going to pass out," I giggled playfully as his hands lovingly stroked my body. I loved it that he was still inside of me. It just solidified this undeniable connection that we have.

Edward tried to move away from me, but my hands gripped him tightly to hold him in place.

"Bella, I'm too heavy for you. I don't want to hurt you."

I rubbed my hands up and down his taut back muscles, and I smiled when I felt him shiver under my palms. "You could never hurt me. Stay, please," I whispered. "I love how you feel against me, inside of me," I sighed and kissed his forehead and then rubbed my nose against his. "This moment, right now, is perfect. You're perfect," I kissed his lips softly as he wrapped me in his warm embrace.

"I'll stay here as long as you want me to," Edward said contentedly.

I felt my heart skip a beat as I realized that I wanted Edward to stay right here...forever.

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