Author's Note:
Alright, first off, I've had an idea for a story brewing in my mind for some time now, and I'm finally glad to show it off. This is my firs story here on , and the more constructive criticism I get, the better. But for now, enjoy the story!
…Drip Drip
The noise continued.
…Drip Drip
The cave was dark. The only noise that could be heard was the steady rhythm the water made as it repeatedly hit a red and white sphere top a boulder.
…Drip Drip
For years, the cave existed in darkness and silence. The steady dripping of water arose just recently. Just moments ago.
…Drip Drip… CLANK!
The red and white sphere now gently started rolling off the boulder on which it rested. The steady drip of water was now accompanied by a bright flash of light. Quickly, the bright flash of light dissipated, and was now replaced by a flickering orange light.
A clank could be heard as the now-empty sphere hit the ground. Standing over it was a small, orange creature, with short claws, and a flame on is tail.
"Huh," said the confused Charmander.
The Charmander frantically looked around. He had no idea where he was… Or who he was.
Author's Note:
So, what do you think? What did I do good? What should I work on? Do you think this story has a future? Your reviews are appreciated!