Thanks to all the people who reviewed my first poem! I'm feeling fine now, just to let you guys know…I was so touched… anyway, I used my imagination in this poem, but I don't know why I wrote this… I think this poem also sucks, I'm not really confident in some of the things I write… flames are welcome…

Lost…

A loner in the dark

Searching for a clue

Doesn't know where she is

Doesn't know what to do

Walking in the hallway

Looking for her long lost dreams

Feeling blindly every where

But suddenly hears a scream

She rushes to the sound

But just finds a light-filled room

With bloody writings on the wall

That warned her for her doom

As she left the bedroom

She found her self in her childhood home

Where her whole family was murdered

And she was the survivor, all alone

She went back in the room

Disappointed with what she found

Her parent's lifeless bodies

Were left to bleed on the ground

Her eyes swelled up with tears

As her knees fell to the floor

She was lost in her surroundings

This was not her home anymore

It was a house of dead people

Exactly like a grave

She noticed something in her pocket

It was a blood, covered blade

Her eyes widened in shock

As tears fell down from her eyes

She killed her whole family

She screamed out loud in her surprise

She gazed at the blade on her hand

While staring at it she cried

She stabbed herself in her heart

She has committed suicide

But what she saw was a nightmare

A nightmare of her past

She killed herself in her sleep

Her good luck didn't last

She escaped her fault before

But remember the writing in the room

The bloody writings on the wall

That warned her for her doom

She regretted what she did

Yet she still told a lie

Now her mind played a trick on her

That made her, bleed and die

Until this very day

In the house you still hear cries

The cries of the girl

And her family that have died

"In that house

Stays a lonely ghost

The spirit of that girl

That will forever be lost…"

Try looking at it this way: "terra is the girl in this poem, and her family that died in this poem are her friends. She betrayed them, she was lying to them all along, and she escaped her fault once but at the second time, she died trying to save them; that's when this girl committed suicide. She stabbed them in the back with her hidden blade, which made the trust in them die. But even if she sacrificed herself for them, the trust that died in her friends will never come back again. That's why you can still hear cries, because they were hurt by someone they thought who was their friend, and terra still cries because she had a lot of regrets, and no matter how many times she says sorry, the trust can never be regained. She hurt them and killed the trust inside them, karma found its way around and back to terra; that's why she remains a lost ghost..." Well, if you don't understand this, just to let you know the moral of this poem is: "if you do bad things to people, it will always come back to you." In other words… "Karma"...