Okay, this is the first poem of mine that doesn't, I repeat doesn't rhyme… it was kinda hard since I'm so used to rhymin' well, I think its kinda horrible, the only reason I posted this is… well… no reason at all… if you all don't like this I can simply remove it! It's gonna be no problem, but I wanna know what all of you think first, kay? uuhhh… read and enjoy…? I think… flames accepted…
The chain that holds me backI am alone
Waiting to die so that my pain will end
Awaiting the day that all my suffering will soon come to a halt
The moment when all my tears will finally stop flowing, as it slowly dries on my bloody face
In this black tunnel of darkness, I shall soon see a light
That will lead me out, and send me to true happiness and freedom
Where I can spread my wings and take flight
Where I can finally be liberated
All I have to do is stay here, and wait for my time to come
For death to sweep me away
For immortals to take my soul from me
As I drift onto the great unknown
I am going to die
I will be freed
But I am going to die alone
And how that hurts me…
Although I want to be liberated
I'm held back by loneliness
The chain that keeps me from giving up
Loneliness is what makes me hold on…
okay, i think that this poem actually sucks...