How was the first chapter? I thought it was pretty good, but it won't be my opinion that won't count, it'll be your opinion that matters most.
Ok, well here we go.
Strike Out
Chapter 2: What Does She Want Now?
Shun's P.O.V
I looked at Amber. She surely changed. Her hair grew longer than before. Before, it was up to the bottom of her ears, and now it's up to her shoulders.
"What do you want now," I asked, about to get up.
She looked down and gasped. I believe it was my ankle she was looking at.
She put her hand on it. I flinched at the pain but didn't look away. My eyes were filling up with tears because of the pain, but I refuse to let them fall. She moved up my leg. I was really starting to get angry and uncomfortable, but trying to make that not show.
She removed her hand. "What has the wretched girl do to you," She asked, anger boiling inside her. Her hands were in fists and her eyes furrowed. Her eye twitched some.
"Who," I said weakly and harsh, to put some affect on it, I did it metallic like.
"Alice," She whispered, and left the room.
I was furious. Why'd that… that… that accuser come back? Whatever the reason, she isn't going home alive anytime.
I whipped out my phone and called Dan.
He picked up and said, "Dan Kuso here, what do ya need?"
"Hey Dan, its Shun. I'm good, but a little fly won't leave me alone." I said.
"I'll bring the flyswatter." Dan said.
I did a rare laugh, but it was time to get serious, "not that kind of fly. I mean the fly that wants Alice gone."
Dan hushed and listened.
"This is what I want you to do Dan, because you're the only one that can."
Alice's P.O.V
The next day was absolutely peaceful. The days got warmer and the nights have grown shorter. I was jogging with Runo and Julie.
"Hey guys, how 'bout we head to the mall, I hear that there was going to be a huge brawl there against some of the jocks?" Julie asked. Typical Julie, she doesn't like to work but when the word mall comes up, she's peppy and ready. I think Julie got her muscles by lift heavy shopping bags.
"Yeah, that'll be good. I heard that same thing from Dan," Runo recalled.
"Yeah, but why at the mall," I asked wondering.
"Maybe to get girls attentions, I heard this guy named Mike Loan Ryx is very talented," Julie said.
"Wait, is that the same Mike Loan Ryx that Real was talking about," I asked, "The older brother of Am- I mean, Lynn."
"You know you're right. But the guy's a cutie, why doesn't Amber like him?" Julie said.
"How do you know Julie," Runo asked suddenly.
"Here's a picture," Julie replied by handing us a photo.
We looked at it. Real did say that he was related to Klaus, and then them.
The boy we were staring at had light blue hair and a blue jaded jacket. The shirt underneath had diamonds and a ruby was in the center of the circle. His pants where knee high and was a deep ocean blue. His leggings though were light sky blue. His shoes were basic tennis shoes with blue soles, and light blue laces. The guy was skinny, but Julie was right, the guy was cute. He had a kind of baby face to him.
"Ha, he's cute enough to bite," Runo said, "but I bet he lacks battling experience, unlike Dan and Shun."
"You got that right," I said, handing the picture back.
"Hey didn't you hear what I said, he's talented." Julie whined.
"In what exactly," Runo stated plainly.
"In fighting, duh," Julie screeched.
We were silent until we got to the mall.
Some boys did some wolf whistles, mostly for Julie…-hopefully!
"I'm gonna text Dan to see where he is," Runo said.
"I'm gonna text Billy," Julie replayed.
"I'll text Shun," I announced pretty plainly.
I whipped out my phone and started:
Alice: at mall w/ Runo and Julie, do u need anything while I'm here? :)
Shun: Not at the moment, but revenge on Amber :(
Alice: Okay, 1 her name is Lynn, 2 she's gone, 3 for what? :(
Shun: 1 I don't care what we call her, 2 she is not gone, and 3 SHE JUST VISITED ME A COUPLE HOURS AGO! :(
Alice: WHAT! :(
I couldn't believe what I was reading. Lynn is back, but how?
I caught up to Runo and Julie.
"Ugh, guys we got some serious issues," I stated.
"You're telling me. Dan's in front of the Mall and by the way things are I can't SEE the front of the Mall." Runo said, obviously strict.
"Yeah, and Billy's hard to find also," Julie added.
"No, not them," I said getting in front of them. "I mean that Lynn Amour Striker returned."
"WHAT," was their only answer to this.
I've explained it to them.
"UGH, THAT LITTLE ACCUSER IS GONNA PAY," Runo yelled.
Dan heard this yell and ran toward them, "ok, now what's the matter, anybody giving you trouble?"
"NO IT'S THAT LYNN IS BACK," Runo yelled again, making it clear yes, not gonna be quiet until it's over, big N-O!
"Yeah, I heard. Shun called me after it happened. He wanted me to do something to her." Dan said, after calming Runo's temperament down.
"Like what," I asked.
"You'll see as soon as she walks out of the mall, that's why it was moved to here. YO MIKE, OVER HERE!" Dan said, ending the sentence with a shout to Mike.
Mike walked; more like ran, over here. He was just like the one in the picture.
"Ya Dan," He asked in a German accent.
"Remember the plan," Dan asked.
"You know it, I wouldn't forget one this devious, you sure Shun won't mind," he said.
"Yeah, he won't mind, it is his plan," Dan recalled.
"Ok then… ALL EYES ON THE DOORS, LYNN WILL CAME THROUGH THE DOORS IN 5… 4… 3… 2… 1… 0." He yelled, counting down.
When 0 came there was a blast. And a very angry scream.
'Am- I mean Lynn by no means,' I thought.
HOW DO YOU GUYS LIKE IT SO FAR?
I know that this is just the beginning, but this story will be longer and less romantic, just full course action and humor. I want all of you who read, to tell me what you think and what I can to make it all better. Tell me my mistakes and don't forget to read the next chapter when it's out!
Mason: Cause if you don't, I just might have to kill you!
Ventus [me]: MASON!
Mason: What, it's true.
Ventus: *Slaps forehead in annoyance* R&R my friends!