SilentAngeli: Hello, and welcome to the second chapter of my story. I hope you enjoy it.


Charlie and the Chocolate Factory- The Loneliest Abyss

Chapter 2- Surprises, Hugs, and Presents (Part 1)


It was currently 9:00 a.m. and I had just arrived in the town that my family stayed in. I was tired, of course, and I probably should've waited until tomorrow to go visit. But, I wanted them to know that I was here as soon as possible. They'll be surprised and I am most certain of that.

"Hm…" I wondered looking around me. I was trying to see where Charlie's house was. I saw the chocolate factory that it was near, in all its semi-creepy glory, but I didn't see the house. So, turning around I looked around some more before spotting a tiny shack in the distance. I didn't notice it before in all this snow so, curiously, I began to trot my way towards it. I remembered that Charlie and his family lived in a shack but I wasn't sure of what it looked like. Was this the place?

"I feel horrible for them." I thought looking at the small house…if you want to call it that. I wasn't sure of what was inside, or who was inside, but I decided to give it a go. So, walking up to the door I slowly raised my fist before knocking on it. I waited for a second, maybe more, before the door opened. The person standing there was my Uncle Bucket. I smiled, relieved to have found the right place, before greeting him excitedly. I had only seen him in pictures which Is why I recognized him.

"Uncle Bucket, it's great to see you at last." I told him. He looked at me confused before asking "Who are you?" He questioned. I blinked forgetting that they hadn't seen me yet, except for in pictures. But those were of younger me, now I'm older.

"It's me, Isabella." I told him. He blinked for a moment before smiling "Isabella? Is that really you? Why I hadn't a clue." He said before ushering me in. "When did you arrive?" He questioned. I smiled and said "Well, I had arrived here at 3:00 this morning, but it took me about 6 hours to get here." I told him. "You must be tired! Why didn't you wait until tomorrow to come by?" He questioned.

"Because I wanted to see you guys as soon as possible. Speaking of you guys, where are Charlie and Aunt Bucket?" I questioned. He blinked "Well, Charlie is in school right about now, and your aunt is at the store." He said. I nodded "I guess I could return later…after I've gotten some rest, you know?" I said. He nodded "That would be the best idea" He said. I then stood up and walked over to the door.

"Don't tell anyone I came by. I want the rest of them to be surprised." I told him. He nodded "My lips are sealed, I'm glad you came to visit Isabella. Charlie's taken a liking to you lately." He stated. I smiled "Yeah, I'm glad I came too. Charlie's my favorite little cousin…despite the fact that we've never met." I said. He nodded "Have a nice rest. I'll see you later" He said before I left. When I looked up I saw the chocolate factory once again.

"How can something that makes something so delicious look so creepy?" I questioned myself before heading away from it. I was more than tired now and couldn't waste time by staring at a factory, never mind a chocolate one. I had to get to my temporary home before it got late. I still wanted to visit Charlie before the day was over with.


SilentAngeli: Well, there you have it, Isabella has arrived at *Insert whatever town Charlie stays in* and has met her uncle. The next chapter will show her meeting the others. Then the one after that will be when Grandpa Joe tells them the story of Mr. Wonka and Prince Pondicherry (What a funny name). I hope you enjoy them all. Review please!