Author's Note:
As to be expected I got more OCS than I thought I would get, you guys must really be interested in this story! I'm not sure exactly if I'll be using ALL of them or not but I know of a few OCS that were sent in early so I'll list those off along with the author's to which they belong to.
OC LIST: (author's name in italics)
Gideon Procella (Human)-Kuro Rakka Shimo
James Mag Raibhaigh (Row-be)- MagRaibhaigh848
Dusk-EverythingAtOnce
Tsurugi Joan (Tsurugi is her last name) - Karenkook
So that's pretty much the one's I've decided as of right now, oh and thanks to everyone who reviewed last chapter! I hope you enjoy this one!
Oh and here's Metal's bio, very simple x3
Name: Metal
Age: 16
Fur/hair color: A darker shade of gold with a lighter shade of tan on her belly and paws
Eye color: An odd blue-gold mix, sometimes they appear more of a light topaz blue in different lighting
Clothing: Mainly graphic t-shirts and a plain black shirt, she's known to be seen with headphones around her neck occasionally.
Power: Creating and manipulating fire; she also has some control of electricity but she has figured out how it works quiet yet
Personality: Shy around strangers but loud and kind of crazy when she gets to know someone. She cares a lot of people and creatures and will sometimes break down when given bad news.
Thoughts will be in italics.
Read on and enjoy! Also there will be a poll on my profile page, please check it out and vote!
The young man sighs as his hazel eyes gaze into the darkened shadows of the forest, the intercom had blared to life a moment ago , announcing to the residents to 'prepare for fire' whatever the hell that's supposed to mean.
A soft breeze glides through the open window, stirring the teen's bluish white hair, a faint trace of smoke burns his nostrils and he stands in one swift movement.
Placing a foot on the window sill the teen grasps the edge of the window and leans out to peer into the courtyard below, he narrows his eyes as fire flickers amongst the rosebushes growing wild against the outer wall.
The flames die down quickly, much too quickly for them to be a simply everyday fire.
"Gideon?" the teen turns at the sound of his name behind him, a dark furred chipmunk with striking green eyes stands in the doorway of his room, the rodent is dressed in a simple orange hoody.
"You heard the announcement right James?" Gideon questions the chipmunk who frowns and nods, "Yeah what about it?" Gideon gazes back at the rosebushes.
"I think I know why they said to be prepared for fire,"
Metal crouches within the safety of some rosebushes, her chest heaving as she tries to recover from the events that had just occurred back at the road.
Who was that!? The golden furred chipette releases a heavy sigh as she curls her tail around her hind paws; a slight breeze ruffles her fur sending a chill down her spine, she only had her fur protecting her at the moment, all her clothes were still in Miss Bleakly's car.
The fur along the back of her neck suddenly springs to life and she whips around in alarm, tree branches sway in the breeze, their dark outlines barely visible against the darker sky, her pupils dilate as the sound of a twig snapping sounds from her left, "h-hello?! Anyone out there?" she calls as she begins to back further into the bushes, ignoring the sharp thorns poking at her back.
Hushed whispers reach her ears and her heart beat spikes as a figure slinks forward out of the dark, "Stay away!" Metal screams in terror as she scrambles back in a desperate struggle to escape, the thorns tear at her skin leaving behind thin scratches.
Something grabs hold of her tail and a wave of pain shoots up her spine, she doesn't turn around as her tail catches flame; an alarmed shout comes from her attacker as they quickly release her.
Metal glances back at her panting heavily as the fire on her tail dies out, she can't let them see where she is, the chipette scrambles deeper into the bush her whole body stinging from the hundreds of cuts littering her body.
She glances over her shoulder again and screams, a hand clamps over her mouth muffling her cry of fear; she's dragged out quickly before she could burst into flames again.
"Don't scream," a voice orders in her ear, she struggles in the human's grasp, the human who's somehow the same size as her, "You can release her now Mind," a large hand wraps around her, this time in a flame proof glove.
The small human has whitish blue hair and hazel eyes, his head looks a little wide, he nods and suddenly melts into the larger hand.
Metal's gaze slides up the arm of the human to meet the dark hazel eyes of the tiny person's double, "W-what in the…" the chipette's body shudders and she passes out.
"You made her faint! She was so scared she fainted!" James cackles in amusement making Gideon's eyebrow twitch, "I'll crush you," he threatens the munk as he straightens up, holding the golden furred rodent firmly in his grasp.
"You've never made anyone faint before, have you?" James questions as Gideon starts walking towards the door leading into a large bricked building that oddly resembles a gothic castle, "No, you better not tell the others about this either or I WILL crush you," the teen threatens as the two walk into the cool interior of the castle.
Silence falls upon them as they make their way through the dimly lit halls, taking dozens of turns until they enter a small library.
Sitting upon a wooden table is a fiery auburn furred chipette with dark wavy red hair pulled back in a fishtail, her bangs curve across her forehead to the right and she's dressed in a mini black jacket over a deep maroon t-shirt, fingerless gloves adorn her tiny paws, and a black skirt with a chain around her waist that acts like a belt.
"Hey Jo, studying?" James teases as he jumps up onto the table beside, laid out in front of the chipette is a map of the surrounding woods and the castle itself, "Haha nice one," the chipette mutters with a role of her amber eyes as one of her paws rests on the Kama at her sides, James' ears flick back at the move.
"Don't fight you two, we have a guest," Gideon says as he slides a chair out from the table and sets down the unconscious chipette on its surface, "You killed her!?" Jo yelps as she moves the map aside to peer at the newest resident.
"You guys do know I can hear you from down the hall right?" the three turn to see a white furred chipette standing in the open doorway, her fur is a little oddly colored, it's white with silver tips at the end of each hair, her hair is wavy and falls to the middle of her back the edges fading into a glistening black. She's dressed in a flowing loose dress that starts out a soft white and fades into a midnight blue, over her dress sits a leather jacket and a sparkly silver belt sits around her waist, a pair of sunglasses hang from the front of her dress.
"Dusk quickly close the door," James ushers waving the cerulean blue eyed chipette inside, Dusk nods and hurries inside after shutting the door silently behind her, she easily hops up onto the table top.
"Whoa, who's this?" Dusk questions gesturing to Metal, "We don't know," Gideon answers scratching at the corner of a white mask that covers his mouth, no one is sure why he only wears it over his mouth.
"Why isn't she moving?"
"Gideon made her faint,"
"That's it I'm crushing you, put your head under my foot,"
Metal groans softly, her eyelids fluttering open as her ears twitch at the sound of voices, her eyes widen as her gaze settles on four strangers, three rodents like her and the human.
Dusk glances at the chipette and meets her frightened blue-gold gaze, "S-she's awake," the others look to Metal and fall silent immediately.
Swallowing thickly Metal's gaze travels over them slowly, unsure what to do she scoots back a little and curls her legs up against her chest, "W-where am I, who are you?" she questions her voice strong and loud even though on the inside she was a trembling mess.
James speaks up first, his voice holding a soft edge to it, "This is Insanity, it's made out to be an academy for gifted teenagers of any species," he explains watching as Metal's eyes widen slightly.
"I-I was on my way here but we got in a car crash,"
"We?" Jo asks frowning slightly, Metal nods quickly, "My owner Miss Bleakly, she was driving me here when this man stepped out in front of us and-,"
Gideon cuts her off, "Man? Was he dressed in all black with a big hat?" he questions as Metal's wide eyes train on him and she nods, "Y-yeah that's him, who is he?"
The others exchange quiet glances before they return their gaze back to the golden furred rodent, "We don't know," Gideon confesses softly.
Metal frowns, her eyebrows pinching together as she looks down in thought, "Are you hungry?" she raises her head to peer into Dusk's kind bright blue eyes, "Y-yes," Metal answers as Dusk helps her to stand, "You're hurt," Jo notices making the golden furred chipette look down at her body.
"Oh yeah, the rose bush had some nasty thorns," the chipette laughs lightly; now that the scratches were pointed out to her they began to sting like crazy making her tempted to scratch at them.
"Let's get her cleaned up and fed, then we can discuss the castle," Gideon suggests heading for the door just as a buzz fills the air, static rippling around them in an eerie tone.
Bleakly's voice crackles throughout the room, "Where am I!? Who are you, let me go!"
"Miss Bleakly!" Metal cries out as a pang of fear ripples through her, a broken laugh reaches their ears, everyone except Metal tenses in horror, "That's not how this place works Bleakly, I can't simply TELL you where you are, that'd ruin the run wouldn't it?" a cold maniacal voice plays through the room smoothly as if the owner were standing in the shadows a few feet away.
"P-please let me go! I-I'll pay you, I'll do anything you want!" Bleakly's voice breaks as a sob hitches in her throat, "I don't want anything expect to watch you squirm," the intercom blares as Bleakly screams in pure terror, the sound of a machine whirring in the background.
"Welcome to Insanity, Metal," the intercom shuts off, leaving behind static that fills the now silent room, everyone has gone deathly pale, but none could match the hue of Metal's ghost white skin.
I was in a very evil mood today, I hope I got everyone's OCs right and I hope to see more reviews and suggestions!
Oh and I'm thinking of a theme song for this story right now the only one that comes to mind for me is Make a Move by Icon for Hire, go check it out and tell me what you think.
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I hope to see you again my fluffies.
MM