This chapter begins with Max waiting outside the police station in the morning. After a few minutes of waiting, Zet walks out of the police station with a few papers given to him by Officer Jenny about their first target who is Nevel Potter. Because of the fact that there were a few people coming in and out of the police station, Max and Zet decide to go to the park where they had been sleeping at to discuss their next move in capturing their first target together.
ZET: (showing Max the paper of the dude while holding it in his hands) This one goes by the name Nevel Potter.
ZET: (showing Max the paper of the dude while holding it in his hands) Apparently, this dude gets his kicks from stealing other people's pokemon and causing a scene with chaos.
MAX: (looking at the picture of Nevel Potter) This dude is so nerdy looking with those big old glasses.
MAX: (looking at the picture of Nevel Potter) He reminds me of team rocket, only a lot uglier and even i want to give him a wedgie.
Zet stops showing Max the paper picture of Nevel Potter.
ZET: Make no mistake Max, Nevel may look weak, but he's so smart it's scary.
ZET: By the way, who's team rocket any way?
MAX: Back in the Hoenn region, they were 3 low life idiots who tried to steal Ash's, May's, Brock's, and other people's pokemon.
ZET: Sounds to me like i made the right choice about asking you to work with me.
ZET: You clearly have had experience when it comes to dealing with criminals.
MAX: Yeah, even though team rocket wasn't much of a big threat.
ZET: Ha Ha Ha!
ZET: Anyway, Nevel has been seen in this park a few times this past year and has almost always caused a scene.
ZET: What has me worried is that recently, he has become more organized and quiet when it comes to stealing people's pokemon here in this park and else where.
MAX: That loser probably has those stolen pokemon at his house.
ZET: That reminds me, half of the pokemon he has stolen have some how managed to escape and find their way back to their owners from where ever it is they were being held.
MAX: How much is the reward money for the capture of this criminal?
ZET: 1200 big ones.
MAX: (over joyed) YES YES YES!
ZET: Max he could be watching us as we speak.
MAX: I shouldn't have yelled like that.
ZET: It's okay since that's some thing to be happy about.
MAX: I forgot to tell you that one of the team rocket members was a talking meowth.
ZET: (shocked with disbelief) NO WAY.
MAX: I don't blame you for not really trusting what i just said, but it's the truth.
ZET: (shocked) INCREDIBLE!
MAX: I was shocked too when i first saw it walking and talking like a human.
ZET: (shocked) I believe you since you're a very level headed dude.
ZET: (shocked) How did it learn how to speak in the first place?
MAX: That part i don't know.
MAX: One thing i do know is that i dislike meowths and cat pokemon.
MAX: Even though they're cute.
ZET: You and that evil walking talking meowth must've really hated each other.
MAX: You could say that.
MAX: (shaking) I still have nightmares about that evil cat.
ZET: (laughing out loud) HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA!
MAX: It's not funny.
ZET: Sorry!
ZET: (laughing out loud) HA HA HA!
MAX: In the mean time, since it's morning and since i have begun a fresh start, i'd like for us to bike to the nearest clothes store in Kassing so i can get some new clothes.
ZET: Lets go and i'll lead the way.
MAX: Lead on dude.
After riding their bikes for 19 minutes, Max and Zet get to the only clothes store in town. After shopping for an hour, Max gets 3 pairs of clothes, a hat, and some boots. The first pair was a blue short sleves shirt with short black jeans, the second pair was a gray short sleves night shirt with green short night pants, and the third pair of clothes were black boots, long black pants, a black shirt with long sleves, a black hat, and a slightly long black coat that reaches slightly below his knees.
ZET: You sure know how to pull off the goth look.
MAX: (wearing his new blue shirt, black jeans, and black boots) I'm not goth, but yes, i do.
MAX: I'm glad i threw away my old clothes and glasses.
MAX: I feel like a new dude.
MAX: Is there a way you can dye my hair a brighter shade of blue and make it look like your spiky hair?
ZET: No, but i know a guy who can.
ZET: Henry the chopper is the only dude in town who could give you the dude take over you're asking for.
MAX: Please take me to him and what's a dude take over?
ZET: You'll see and just so you know, he's my hair dude.
MAX: I'm going to enjoy this.
Max and Zet then bike over to Henry's hair place to give Max a dude take over. They walk inside to see the place empty with Henry watching a soccer game. He was really into it. Even so, his concentration is still top notch.
HENRY: Nice to see you again Zet and it seems you brought company with you.
ZET: Henry i would like for you to meet Max, who happens to be my new partner in crime against crime.
HENRY: Nice to meet you Max and congratulations.
MAX: Thank you and like wise my fellow gentle man friend.
HENRY: So what can i do for you boys today?
MAX: I would like for you to make my hair as spiky as Zet's and to dye it a brighter blue.
HENRY: (laughing out loud) HA HA HA HA HA!
MAX: I must've missed the joke.
HENRY: Sorry, it's just that i've never had a dude walk in here with such an out of this world request.
HENRY: I'll be able to pull it off in 4 hours if you want the color to last for the rest of your life.
MAX: I do.
HENRY: (laughing out loud) HA HA HA HA HA!
HENRY: Lets get started and that'll be 429 green papers if you catch my drift.
MAX: (handing him the money from his wallet) Here you go Henry.
For the next 4 hours, Max under went a dude take over that would make him look like a cool dude instead of a nerd. Zet spent those 4 hours watching recorded soccer matches on Henry's 13 inch TV. Max got his hair cut, washed, reshaped, and dyed. The whole 4 hours, Zet had his back turned to the TV, not wanting to see how Max looked until it was over. It was now 3:00 pm and Max and Zet were amazed.
HENRY: (handing Max a mirror) Well Max, what do you think?
MAX: (happy and impressed by who and what he saw in the mirror) AWESOME!
MAX: (happy and impressed by who and what he saw in the mirror) YOU ARE AN ARTIST GENIUS, HENRY THE CHOPPER.
HENRY: I perfer if you call me Henry and you're welcome.
ZET: Dude you look awesome, but won't you have a hard time seeing since you threw away your glasses?
Max puts down the mirror.
MAX: I feel awesome too and yeah i'll have a little trouble at first, but i'll train my eyes to be more sharper with out glasses, quickly.
MAX: What is a dude take over any way?
MAX: You never told me.
ZET and HENRY: It's like a make over, only the exact opposite.
ZET and HENRY: It's the male version of a make over.
MAX: You 2 dudes are too cool.
ZET: Well we should get going.
MAX: Bye Henry and thanks for the dude take over.
HENRY: You're welcome and congrats on your new life.
MAX: (walking out the door with Zet) Thank you.
ZET: Lets head over to the bakery for some donuts.
MAX: You read my stomach.
After riding their bikes for 10 minutes, Both Max and Zet walk into the bakery to find Nevel trying to steal the baker's politoed while the baker held on to the frog pokemon. The 2 boys stood in shock for about 18 seconds. Then they confronted Nevel.
ZET: You better let go of that politoed if you know what's good for you.
MAX: (grabbing his 19 inch steel bar out of his back pack) Because if you don't, we have other means of making you cooperate.
NEVEL: (letting go of the politoed) Oh i'm real scared now.
MAX: You'll have to come with us so we can take you to Officer Jenny.
NEVEL: You 2 are Bad Dude Bounty Hunters.
NEVEL: So Zet, i see you got a side kick.
NEVEL: He's an interesting new partner.
NEVEL: (running past Max and Zet out of the diner) You'll never catch me alive dudes.
MAX: (grabbing hold of him) Don't make me hurt you.
NEVEL: (trying to get on his motorcycle outside the bakery) Try it you little freak.
After those exchange of words, things really get ugly between Max and Nevel. After that, Max hits Nevel's left knee with his 19 inch steel bar and causes him to fall hard at the side of his motorcycle.
NEVEL: You broke my knee you violent little brat.
MAX: (ominously walking around Nevel while he's on the ground) You seem to love calling me little.
Zet watches in shock and amazement.
NEVEL: (getting up quickly, painfully running back into the bakery, and putting a chair to the door) He's scary.
BAKER: You leave me and my politode alone thief!
NEVEL: Now that i look at it, i got my knee slighly dislocated and not broken.
NEVEL: With that being said, i'm not leaving here empty handed.
ZET: (walking over to the pay phone a few feet away from the bakery) I'm going to go call Officer Jenny and tell her where Nevel is at while you try to barge in there.
MAX: I'm on it.
MAX: (banging on the bakery door) NEVEL, YOU GET OUT HERE SO I CAN KICK YOUR BUTT HARD!
MAX: (turning slightly red) RIGHT NOW, BEFORE I GET MAD!
NEVEL: YOU NEED TO TAKE SOME ANGER MANAGEMENT CLASSES.
MAX: (furious) IF YOU DON'T GET OUT HERE, I MIGHT BREAK YOUR OTHER KNEE.
NEVEL: You're crazy kid.
MAX: (walking slowly over to Nevel's motorcycle with his 19 inch steel bar in his hand) Lets see what your motorcycle has to say about that.
NEVEL: (looking out the bakery window) PLEASE KID, DON'T DO IT!
BAM BAM BAM!
Max smashes out his front light, left light, and almost his seat with his 19 inch steel bar.
MAX: (holding his 19 inch steel bar) This hurts you motorcycle more than it hurts me.
NEVEL: NO NO NO NO NO!
BAM BAM BAM BAM!
Max smashes out both of the wheels with his 19 inch steel bar.
MAX: (holding his 19 inch steel bar) A part of me really didn't like doing that, but he had to turn it into a hostage situation.
MAX: (running backwards and then forwards, head first through the bakery glass door and chair) Man that hurt.
BAKER: YOU'RE CRAZY KID.
BAKER: THAT WAS MY DOOR.
NEVEL: I got to give it to you kid.
NEVEL: I've never seen any dude bang his head against the wall as hard as you do.
MAX: (getting up slowly from the floor) Yeah well, i'm not your typical 8 year old boy.
NEVEL: You and i should join forces even though i'm mad at you for DESTORYING MY MOTORCYCLE.
NEVEL: With my brains and your bron, we could steal hundreds of pokemon, you and i.
NEVEL: So what do you say little fella?
MAX: (running up to Nevel and smashing his last good knee with his 19 inch steel bar) NO THANKS.
ZET: (watching from the door way) TAKE IT TO HIM HARD MAX.
NEVEL: WHAT'S THE MATTER WITH YOU, YOU EVIL BRAT?
MAX: THAT WAS THE THIRD TIME YOU CALLED ME LITTLE YOU GEEKY NERD.
BAKER: (thoroughly scared) Take it easy kid.
BAKER: (thoroughly scared) I think he's learned his lesson.
While Max is distracted by the baker, Nevel gets up on his knees, lifts up a little chair, and throws it on Max's head.
NEVEL: Take that.
MAX: (talking with an evil smile on his face) I think now i'll work on your arms with my 19 inch steel bar.
NEVEL: (thoroughly scared) SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY!
After 3 minutes of intense fighting, Max wins and Nevel has a few broken bones. The bakery has a few broken chairs and tables. Zet was absolutely amazed by Max's physical strength, even though Nevel was a weak tall dude. Nevel may have been twice Max's size, but he was half as strong as Max. Officer Jenny finally shows up.
JENNY: (walking into the bakery) Wasn't there a door here?
ZET: Officer Jenny, arrest this man!
JENNY: (putting hand cuffs on Nevel) You're under arrest for kidnapping, breaking and entering, and disturbing the peace.
NEVEL: (pointing to Max a few feet away from him) That kid with the blue hair is the one that's peacefully challenged.
JENNY: Tell it to the judge.
NEVEL: Please just send me to a jail in another region away from that little blue haired monster!
MAX: I'M NOT LITTLE, I NEVER WANT TO SEE YOU AGAIN, AND GET THE HECK OUT OF HERE!
He throws a jelly donut at Nevel's face.
JENNY: (walking out of the bakery with Nevel) Max, please calm down and come with us to the station to tell me what happened!
JENNY: You too Zet.
Both Max and Zet get into the car with Jenny and Nevel, to the police station to tell how it all went down. It's 6 pm and after a doctor patches Nevel up, all 3 tell the same exact story from different points of views since they were in different positions at the time of the show down in the bakery. Nevel is then carried off by another officer down in the holding cells of the police station.
JENNY: Max, can you please go outside the police station and wait while i talk to Zet!
MAX: (walking away) Sure thing copper lady.
JENNY: Thanks to you 2 boys, Nevel has been brought to justice and apparently a few of my men raided his home and found all the stolen pokemon he had.
ZET: All in a day's work Officer Jenny.
JENNY: (handing him the money and the papers for his and Max's next bounty head) Here's the 12 dollar reward money and yours' and Max's next doomed victim.
ZET: (holding the money and papers in his hands) You said that Nevel was a 1200 dollar target.
ZET: (holding the money and papers in his hands) How is this happening?
JENNY: Well lets see, the repair bill for that motorcycle Max recked, the damage for the bakery he trashed, and the medical bill for the criminal he maimed left you 2 with this much.
ZET: (talking sarcastically) Gee i can't wait to tell Max the good news.
ZET: (walking away with the 12 dollars in his pocket and papers in his hands) Thanks Officer Jenny.
JENNY: (jokingly and seriously) I HOPE YOUR PARTNER LEARNS THE VALUE OF A DOLLAR LIKE YOU HAVE.
ZET: Me too.
Zet walks up to Max outside of the police station.
MAX: So when do i get my half of the reward money?
ZET: Oh you'll get the tiny amount once we get to Teyawana soon.
ZET: It's the next stop closest to this town and it has our next target.
MAX: Alright and now that we completed our first mission, lets go to that diner and have a buffet on me.
ZET: That makes me feel a lot better.
ZET: Even though you blead a little from the head, you only have a few bloody scratches on you from that fight.
MAX: I'm a genius and a bone breaker.
ZET: A mad one.
After they ate a big meal the size of breakfast, lunch, and dinner combined, Max and Zet bike to the super market, where Zet tells Max to stay outside since he wanted to get some secret ingredients for food he wanted to cook for himself and Max. After the shopping was over, they went to the park to set up camp and go to sleep. They agree to bike towards Teyawana tomorrow after a good night's sleep.
Well i hope you liked this one. Max sure did show his dark side in this one. I hope you all read chapters 1,2, and 3 before reading this 4th good chapter. Please type up your reviews for what you thought about it! Be sure to read chapter 5 and all the others i will make! Stay curious my friends!