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Chapter 8- new student in class 2-B
Last time
He stopped hugging me and nodded. He told me to follow him and to wait outside the class room and to wit for the signal. I got a guess thinking that he was also our homeroom teacher for this year. I was glad.
I couldn't wait to see the looks on Hyuuga's face when he sees me
I can't wait.
End recap
Normal POV
As Narumi entered the class room in a flamenco dress with castanets and a bun for a hairstyle, everyone's attention flew towards him. It's been a while since he dressed up like that. Ever since Mikan left, he's been depressed and hardly came into the class room. But there he was…dressing gaily and talking jubilantly.
Hotaru was in her seat smirking because she knows whats about to happen next. She looked towards Hyuuga and found him sitting with his legs on the table and a manga covering his face. There was a slut sitting on his lap while he was asleep.
"My little flowers I have good news! We have a new flower entering our garden patch" Narumi sand while dancing around "Come in little one" he continued
Signalling the girl outside the door, she entered
She reached the middle of the class room where every pair of eyes was following her…who could blame her. She was the epiphany of beauty. With her waist length brunette hair with curls on the end, her goddess likes figure and porcelain like features. Lively hazel eyes, silk skin, pink plump lips and a smile to die for.
Her uniform suited her well. The red plaid skirt was mid thigh length to show her long slender legs. The blazer fitted her perfectly showing her hourglass figure and button up polo leaving the top 2 undone showing her cleavage slightly.
All her pervious friends from 2 years were shocked to see her. Their eyes were shining with happiness apart from Hotaru who already knew she would arrive. They stared at her in awe and adoration
Snapping out from their revere from the sound of her angelic bell like voice they heard her introduction "Mikan sakura. I'm 15 years old, a special star and special or either dangerous ability. Nice to be back" she finished with another smile
With that Anna, Nonoko, Koko, Kitsuneme, Sumire, Yuu, Ruka and even Hotaru came up from their seats to give her huge bear hug. Asking all sorts of questions
The Hyuuga being disturbed from his nap woke up to see what the commotion was. He could only see a pile up of the old gang. He stood up dropping the unnamed slut and walked towards them. One by one they separated to reveal Mikan who Natsume did not notice at first glance.
Natsume's POV
Who is she? I thought. She looks like an angel or a goddess from heaven. I didn't realise I was staring and when I did she was staring back. Or more like glaring.
"Oi Hyuuga how long are you gonna keep staring at me?" the girl in question said.
I stared at her a bit more till realisation dawned on me.
She's Mikan…this angel IS Mikan…this goddess is MIKAN!
Lord Im screwed. If I knew she was gonna look this hot then I shouldn't have ever broken up with her.
"You know im over you know…I've learnt a lot of things while i was away, I grew up... I may look different from the last time you saw me but I'm the same on the inside. And…frankly to say…I hate your guts and I hope you die" she spat coldly.
Normally that wouldn't effect me but when she said that, it felt as if thousands of needled were poking holes in my heart…why is that?
"I told you before. You. Like. Her. Why cant you get that into your thick head?" Said the voice which I haven't heard from in a while
"I told you I don't. How many times do I have to say it." I replied
"I told you before, why didn't you dump her if you never liked her? She was the only girl who actually put up with your ego, teasing, glares and coldness. Where else are you going to find someone like that?" conscience said
I sighed. Maybe I do like her. She did stay with me through everything. And even risked her life for me when we were in elementary school from personas Alice!
I've thought about it all the time. She never did anything wrong! Maybe I only hated her because she's to perfect for me and I let her go. Damn it all. And now se hates me AND got over me.
I can only hope she stayed single.
(A/n I know Natsume changed a lot in this one POV but I don't know what else to write…if anyone is dissatisfied with this can you please help me on how to make it smother or better)
Normal POV
Everyone was crowding Mikan asking where she went or what she did during her training and who she met along other things
One by one she answered them.
"I went to the village of the leaves or konoha as they call it. I've been training my Alice as well as gaining some ninja skills and I've met some wonderful people who started as my teachers" she answered
During lunchtime Hotaru asked a question "You talk about Sasuke a lot, how about we all meet in your room and catch up?"
Everyone agreed to the idea and decided to meet up in Mikan's new room after school. You could practical see Anna and Nonoko jumping up and down in glee from a mile away.
Natsume who heard the conversation decided to sneak and eavesdrop and learn more about what she's done over the 2 years…and also about this 'Sasuke' person.
After school
One by one all of Mikan's old friends entered her room. First Hotaru joined by Anna and Nonoko followed by Koko and Kitsuneme lastly joined Yuu and Ruka. Natsume was just outside of their window away from their view
But Mikan being Mikan, with her new training, saw him but decided to keep quiet. This could be used make him irritated or annoyed. She smirked in silence.
"So mi-chan, what kind of people did you meet wile you were away" Anna and Nonoko asked in unison.
"Well I've met lots of really nice people. I've got presents from them but I haven't opened them yet. I'll explain them along the way as well as the teachers and adults, ne?" she answered
They all agreed so Mikan stood up and went to get the bag full of presents.
Mikan came back with a huge blue bag and dumped the contents of the bag on the floor creating a huge pile up
Mika picked the parcel on the top. It was brown wrapping paper covered in chips. Mikan sweat dropped
(a/n this is all one dialogue…there will be some parts where I will describe the wrapping paper)
"I guess this is from Chouji. He's kind of plump but he's really fun to be with. He has brown spiky hair that's split in 2. I suggest not calling him fat because that's his taboo word" she opened the present to see differen kinds of chips...guessing some from his collection
She then picked up a small present with white wrapping paper with a gold bow. She opened it to see vouchers for shopping…she knew who exactly it came from." This is from Ino. She had long blonde hair that covers one eye. She's really lively and loves shopping"
She then saw a present with clouds on the paper and knew it came from Shikamaru. "This one is from Shikamaru or Shika for short. He had a pineapple sort of hair style tied in a pony tail. He's really lazy but really he's a genius. He's the youngest but also the best strategist in the village" she opened the present which showed a pillow that says sleep well. How thoughtful she mused
"Their teacher is Kazuma who likes to smoke a lot. They are I team 10. He was going out with Kurenai sensei before he died on a mission" she continued sadly
She then saw an oddly shaped present and started unwrapping it showing a cute Akamaru plush toy "Awww its Akamaru-chan" Mikan cutely said
"Excuse me but who's Akamaru-chan" Yuu asked
"He's Kiba's dog. Kiba is a guy from the Inuzuka clan who specialty is dogs. They usually go on mission with their dogs and have developed their body to be dog-like. They could walk on all fours and have senses like a dog which is good for tracking people. He has 2 red triangles on his cheeks ad spiky brown hair" She explained
She then saw a rectangular present. She opened it to see a picture frame showing all of them in a group photo. "This might be Hinata's present. She's to shy to think of something personal so it's a good guess. She's the heir to the Hyuuga clan, no relation the Hyuuga Natsume, and has one of the best eye sights in the village. She and her family have a lineage called the Byakugan who can see 360 degrees. She's also on the same team as kiba and has pale pupil less eyes and long purplish hair"
She then picked up a black wrapped present and opened it to see a book about bugs. Guess its Shino's she thought. "This is Shino's present. He's mostly related to bugs. His family is one of the strongest bug users in the whole ninja world. He has black hair and usually wears sunglasses and a thick coat despite it being warm. He's in the same team as Hinata and kiba"
"Their teacher is Kurenai and their team is team 8. They're the best tracking team with Kiba's senses, Shino's bugs and Hinata's Byakugan. Kurenai had black wavy hair and red bloodshot eyes" she continued before taking a big breath
"Team nine has Neji who's Hinata's cousin. He has long brunette hair which is why he's often mistaken as a girl…he has lots of fan girls as well though…in a way he's kind of like Ruka-pyon" looking at Ruka who blushed at the old nickname. She opened his present to see hair shampoos and conditioners…she laughed out loud seeing what he bought…soon after that everyone joined in to
"Tenten who's I the same team is known as the weapons mistress. She can handle almost any weapon from shuriken to kunai. She has twin buns and dresses in Chinese clothes. Se also has a huge scroll on her back which is where all her weapons are. There are almost 5000 weapons of all sorts all over the world on there." Se opened her present to see a smaller version of her scroll as well as a weapons kit
"And lee that has a bowl cut hairstyle and green leotards with orange leg warmers. He's the most energetic…heck even more than me! he took after guy sensei who looks like him but older. Oh they also have REALLY bushy eyebrows. They like to compete with each other." The present opened showed exactly what she described…orange leg and arm warmers with a green spandex suit which she put straight to the bin.
Returning from the bin there was only few present left. A pink one, an orange one, a red one, a brownish one, a crème one and a silver one were left.
The silver one was a mouth like bandana. She guessed it was from Kakashi sensei. It was white with sakura blossoms along one corner. The brownish one was an hourglass which she guessed was from Gaara. The crème one was medical scrolls and ointments which were probably from Tsunade. The red one was of a book called ichi ichi paradise which she threw out the window. The orange one was a personalised hitai. It had the normal metal plaque but had purple and pink strap. Finally the pink one was Sakura's. It was a box full of accessories.
"The bandana was from Kakashi sensei whose face is covered with a blue mask… you could only see one eye and his silver hair. He's quite the perve but is still really powerful. He also teaches team 7 who I was with. Gaara is one of the leaders in the ninja world. He's the kazekage from Suna which is a village in the dessert. He's one of my best friends actually. He has red hair and a tattoo on the corner of his forehead. Tsunade is the leader from konoha and she's over 50 but uses a jutsu which makes her look younger. She has blonde hair put in two low pig tails and big boobs…the pervy sage was the one who sent the book. He has long white hair and a mole on his face…he's Naruto's personal sensei. He teaches him Justus's from the previous hokage which is what the leader of our village is called. Sakura is a medical ninja and her personal teacher is Tsunade. She's one of the best medic nins in the village. She had short pink hair, green eyes and a pale complexion. Naruto had blonde spiky hair and lines on his face which looks like whiskers…he has a tanned complexion." She spoke. Taking another breath she said "I already opened Sasuke's present and must I say I love it!" jumping up and down which showed her locket.
Everyone crowded her again asking to show her the locket…she complied and showed them…and since they were covering her Natsume couldn't see.
"Ahhh he looks hot...you look soo cute mi-chan...you make such a cute couple" Sumire gushed...natsume didnt hear the last part about her being a couple though.
Natsume was jealous that she met soo many men during her leave and wondered what if she was with one of them...he was also thinking alot about this Sasuke guy they keep talking about so much
Suddenly the computer unnoticed started to make a noise and a box appeared on the screen…on the screen was a picture of 12 teenagers with a raven haired lad in the front.
Chapter end!
Another cliff hanger yay so what basically happened was while Mikan was opening her presents she was describing the person who sent them to her. The last part was when a video chat box opened and all of her konoha friends were showed, Sasuke being at the front
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