Okay. well I decided to do this for remembrance week. Sry I know its a bit late but here you go anyways.

Chapter one: Narrator pov

Beatrice watched as her brother, Celeb put his hand over the Erudite glass. Suddenly there was a blinding light. "What!" "Whoa!" "Help! I'm going blind." Were just some of the calls going through the audience? "Silence!" a voice yelled as the light died down. There stood a girl; she had tanned skin and dark brown hair.

She was about 18 years old. "Who are you?" Marcus yelled. "You will not talk to me like that Marcus. You will learn who I am in time. But for now I must tell you to read these pieces of paper. A lot of time has gone by in my time. Yes I said that correctly. I am a dauntless transfer from the year of 2028. This is the choosing ceremony of 2025 right?" The girl asked with a raised eyebrow. "Why do I have to listen to you?" Jeannie Mathews asked with a raised eyebrow. "Because of upcoming events many people will die. Respect has been given but we feel those of us who have come from 2028, that these people should be remembered more. So please read these. I must go back to my time now so please do as I say." With that the girl disappears.

All at once everyone started talking at once. "Quiet!" Marcus yells. "We will read." With that he walks down and goes to pick up the papers. "The title is in Remembrance." He starts. Everyone shares a look. "In remembrance of Albert, a dauntless transfer who had a lot going for him till he decided to be stupid and jump into a deadly chasm." There were gasps from Albert's family and Albert and everyone else felt out of place. The selfless went over and patted Albert's mother on the back.

"In remembrance of Will." Marcus yelled over the talking. Everyone shared a look. "Another Dauntless transfer." This time Cara, Will and everybody from that family started crying. "Someone who's death was caused by..." Marcus choked on the next words. "A faction leader." All at once everyone started yelling at the leaders.

"In remembrance of Eric, the dauntless leader." There were gasps. "What!" Eric yelled. Everyone was shocked. A dauntless leader dead? "Who finally decided to be good in the end…" The people whose kids transferred into dauntless shared a look. "Who are we kidding? He was rude, arrogant and an evil guy who laughed at the thought of torturing his initiates." Many of the parents started yelling at this. "Stop! You will not harm a leader." Jeannie yelled. All at once everything was quiet even though the parents were silently seething. Ignoring the outburst Marcus continued.

"In remembrance of Natalie Prior." Her family cried and hugged her. Beatrice the most. Caleb was crying silently. Now in Erudite he was sad for his mother. But he knew that being as the factions hated each other he forced himself quiet. Andrew looked horrified. "Someone who died a dauntless." "What does that mean?" Four wondered. That's what everyone was thinking. The Erudite the hardest. "Were you a dauntless before mom?" A voice from the smallest member of the Prior family asked. "Yes." Natalie hesitantly answered.

"In remembrance of Andrew Prior." Now the whole family was sad. Caleb was horrified that his mom and father were dead. What about Beatrice? "He who was so selfless in the end found the ultimate way to sacrifice." All was quiet for Andrew who was well known in the Abergation compound.

"In remembrance of Lynn. A dauntless born who was only bitter because a secret that kept her." All the Dauntless looked at their friend who was in tears. "Everyone who died is or died like a dauntless. Why?" Zeke asked the crowd. The Erudite were thinking over time and the amity were too sad. The Abergation were thinking the exact same thing. The Condor section sat quietly digesting the new information. For once, they didn't know what to say. "Let's continue…" Marcus cleared his voice.

"In remembrance of Marlene. A dauntless born who died simply because of the simulations." Everyone but the leaders the facations were left in the dark.

"In memory of Jeannine Mathews." "What!" Jeannine cried. Andrew went over to the girl and patted her back. "Someone who killed so many for no reason." At this everyone was asking questions. "Shut up!" Max yelled after having enough of the out bursts. "Really, how are we supposed to read and get on with this ceremony if you guys won't be quiet!" The amity were mad. You can't say shut up!

"In memory of Tori. A girl who works at the tattoo parlor for ht Dauntless. Someone who died thinking her brother as dead." "My brother's alive!" Tori shouted out. "No he isn't!" Marcus snapped surprised at the words. Jonathan Wu is dead. They had killed him. How is he alive?

"In remembrance of Uriah. A dauntless born." Zeke and Uriah's mother cried out at this. "No not him!" "Who died only because he was at the wrong place at the wrong time." "What does that mean!" Uriah yelled while getting hugged to death. "I didn't die in vain did i?" He calls. "Probably not." Marcus answers.

"In remembrance of Tris." There were questions at this. Who is Tris? Who? "A girl who only died so she could make the factions a better place." "What do you mean a safer place!" Cara yelled out. "Quiet. Let me continue." Marcus snarled at everyone. "A girl who gave up so much only to die. A girl who died for sacrifice. A girl who became dauntless and passed the rankings even when she was so underestimated." Marcus stops at the name knowing that there would be and outburst. "This girls full name is Beatrice Prior." All at once the Prior family bursts into tears. Caleb just hearing that soon he will be the last Prior. His baby sister though. For once Abergation was the one who needed comforting. A whole family from their sector gone. "Wait there is one more!" Marcus yelled.

Okay guys here you go chapter one. As for my other story a past...I am on a huge writers block. if you have any ideas please PM me!

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Dizzy Sun

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