Okay so just to let you guys know, I am going to be trying to finish this and my other story for remembrance:)

here is chapter two!

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Chapter two: Narrator pov

"Divergent" There were gasps at this. The leaders were confused. why were they reading a book about those types of people.

A net. A net is at the bottom of the hole. "Of what?" Some people who didn't know asked. I look at the building and laugh, half relieved and half hysterical. I just jumped off a roof. A man's hand gabs onto mines. "Thank you." I say. "Can't believe it!" A voice says behind me. I turn around. A girl stands behind me. She smirks. "A Stiff, the first to jump? Un heard of." Many people were shocked.

"There is a reason she left Lauren." "Hey that's me!" Lauren smiled. He says. His voice is deep and rumbles. "What's you name?" "Um.." I don't know why I hesitated, but "Beatrice" just isn't right anymore. "Think about it." He says. You don't get to pick again. A new place and new name. I can be remade here. "Tris." I say firmly. "Tris." Lauren repeats grinning. "Make an announcement Four." The -boy- Four -looks over his shoulder and shouts. "First Jumper-Tris!" Everyone cheers. "Welcome to Dauntless." "Wait hold up. This is from my point of view?!" Beatrice half yells. "So it seems Honey." Natalie smiles. then the other factions started talking at once.

"Quiet please!" Marcus shouts interrupting the conversations. "We will talk about this after I am done reading." There were some mumbles in agreement so Marcus continues.

"Abnergation and Dauntless are bother broken, their numbers scattered. "What happened?!" Dauntless and Abnergation yelled out. All the leaders showed a dark look.

We are like the factionless now." Again with the gasps. What happened? "I do not know what life will be like. Separated from a faction-it feels disendagaged, like a leaf divided from the tree that gives us sustenance. We are creatures of loss; we have left everything behind. I have no home,no path, and no certainty. I am no longer Tris the selfless or Tris the brave. I suppose that now, I must become more than either. "That's the end of that page. but I have a question to ask before we all go." Marcus announces. "Beatrice, Tris are you divergent?" All at once everyone turned to face the 16 year old teenager. Caleb gasped. His sister a Divergent. Natalie and Andrew looked at they youngest who refused to look at anyone. If only they knew...

"Yes I am. My test results were Abnergation, Dauntless and Erudite." She stated in a confident voice. "We must get rid of her!" Jeanine yelled. "No. She will be a big part in whatever is going on. She dies anyways. We might as well just let her live." Marcus says. The Condor and Amity leaders agreed. the dauntless were to shocked about the amount of deaths from their factions to talk about any of it.

Suddenly a bright light erupted. A boy stepped out who looked surprisingly like Four. "Who are you?" Marcus asked. "Well. You especially should know who I am father." There were gasps at this. "Tobias?" Marcus choked. The boy nodded. Four was shocked. This was his older self? "You will not harm Beatrice in any way. She is important for you future. IF you kill her do you know how many other people would have died?" Jeanine and Marcus nodded. "I am going to read with you guys. Christina is mourning right now over her um.. boyfriend." "Christina? The other girl is my older self?" Little Christina asked. Tobias stiffly nodded. "Any ways lets continue." With that marcus started reading even with a bunch of things on his mind.

"Insurgent" Marcus says.

"No!" I scream. "Tori don't!" I throw myself at Tori. I shove the gun forward and it slides away from us. Why didn't you grab it, you idiot?! "Wait what's happening? IS Tori my enemy?" Beatrice glares at the person who did the aptitude tests. "No no. You guys are close." Tobias answers waving his hand around. He couldn't bare look at his dead girlfriend. It hurts to much.

Tori's fist connects with the side of my throat. I choke. She lets go and get the gun. Jeanine is slumped against the wall, blood shocking her leg. "Wait is this where I die?!" Jeanine asks frantic for information. Tobias nods.

I punch down in Tori's rib cage. She goans but that doesn't stop her. She sinks her teeth into my hand. I scream. "You bit me?!"Screeches Beatrice. "apparently." Tori replied.

I have not come this far to let Tori shoot Jeanine before I have gotten what I need. What am I looking for?" Beatrice answers. "Something." Tobias replies. Four was thinking about his older self's actions.

"I didn't take you as a traitor Tris." Tori snarls. "I'm not. I can't explain not. She knows the location of something important that I need. "That's right." Jeanine says. "Its on that computer, Beatrice, only I can locate it. If you don't help me with this it will die with me." Everyone stares at Jeanine. Tori takes a knife from her pocket and lunges at Jeanine's stomach. Her eyes turn to glass. "You killed me you idiot of a girl!" Jeanine yells. "You killed my brother." Tori replies not bothering to remind everyone that the pages told her that he is not dead. "Stop fighting this instant!" Tobias roared. Four had to admit it but he was loud in the future. "Continue reading Marcus. And stop fighting people. Fight after if you must." Everyone nodded.

"Allegiant." Marcus read. Tobias clenched his fists. now he gets to see how she died.

"Celab." I say. "I love you." His eyes gleam with tears. "I love you to Beatrice." "If I don't survive tell Tobias that I didn't want to leave him." Everyone turned to star at the teen/young adult. "Is this where I die?" Beatrice asks hugging her mom for support. "Yes." Tobias replies not looking at anyone. Caleb clench's his fists. if only he could be there with them.

The death serum smells like smoke and spice. Everyone gasps. "Death serum. Is that how I died?" Beatrice asks as her father and mother hug her. "No." Tobias says shortly. All the leaders share looks. Surviving the death serum?

I crumple to my knees. I want to be awake. The burning desire to live. The tread tugs harder, and I stoke the flame with names: Tobias. Celab. Christina. Matthew. Cara. Zeke. Uriah. I slowly get up. I am there. I am not alone though. "Where?!" Erudite yell.

"My mother wasn't a fool." I say. Natalie hugged her daughter who smiled.

"She understood something you didn't. That it's not a sacrifice if your giving up someone else's life your giving away, it's just evil." "She taught me about real sacrifices. That it should be done with love. Not misplaced disgust for another person's genetics." I shake my head. "I didn't come to steal anything, David." I twist and lunge toward the device. The gun goes off. once, twice again and again. The Prior family had a look of horror on their face.

I start to fall .I slam my hand on the key pad. A light turns on behind the green button. I feel something warm on my neck and on my cheek. Red. Blood is a strage color. Dark. I slide to the floor. Andrew gasps and hugs his wife. Caleb would be a fool if he said he didn't miss his family right now. "Go." An older girl says. Caleb looks at her. "I know that they are your family Stiff. GO or stay but make up your mind." Caleb get up and walks over to his family and they welcome him into their group.

From the corner of my eye I see my mother walking out from a slumped over David. She is dressed like the last time, in the same cloths she wore the last time I saw her. "Hello Beatrice." She smiles. "Am I done yet?" I ask. "Yes." She says. "My dear child you have done so well." "What about the others. Tobias, Caleb, my friends?" Said the people who smiled. Even if Four didn't know his relationship to the girl. Tobias was happy. He finally got to see Tris's point of view. She didn't want to leave him.

"They will take care for each other. That's what people do." My mom says. I close my eyes.

Can I be forgiven for all the things I have done to get here? "Obviously." Caleb snorts. Beatrice smiles happy to hug her brother one last time.

I want to be.

I can.
I can believe it. "That's it." Marcus says. "Okay. Please to change everything please close down that serum. All of it. I don't care if its past the fence. Shut it down. You have no idea what will happen if not. Factions separated. People dead. Amity not so peaceful. Everything gone wrong." Tobias says in almost a pleading voice. "Please." All the Leaders share a look. Shut down the serum? Is he kidding? "Look think over it. Please. Change it…" He trails off as he disappears. It was silent for the longest moment. "We have to talk." Max says to the other leaders.

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