Okay, I'm back. I actually wrote 90 of this chapter while in math class at college, but after looking up the lyrics for this song online, I wrote a bit more to fill in the spots. Anyway, this is my first ever attempt at a song-fic, but it's not like any other song-fics I've ever read. Please enjoy, and review when you're done. I appreciate it.
Key:
Anything with '' marks is from a song, but there are some parts where Naruto is both shouting for himself, and the song shouts at the same time, so I'm not sure how to identify those parts.
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Disclaimer: I don't own Naruto, and the day I do will be the day yaoi fanfics are outlawed (don't hate me yaoi fans, I'm just grossed out by that stuff). I also don't own Drowning Pool, but I do love their songs.
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Well, here I am.
It's time for some well-deserved fun.
Let the bodies hit the floor.
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I heard that from a song once.
What a great song, it's like they know exactly what's going through my head when I'm tearing people apart.
Heh, that, and the mental image of a gigantic fox demon jumping into a mosh pit is pretty good too.
heh, heh, heh…
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Beaten, why for?
Can't take much more.
Here we go,
Here we go,
Here we go now.
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The feel of blood on my hands
'One,
Nothing wrong with me!'
Screams echo in my ears
'Two,
Nothing wrong with me!'
The smell of death all around
'Three,
Nothing wrong with me!'
An eager smile upon my face.
'Four,
Nothing wrong with me!'
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'One,
Something's got to give!'
Red claws sprout out of my hands.
'Two,
Something's got to give!'
My voice lost in primal roars.
'Three,
Something's got to give!'
My eyes crimson, my pupil's slits.
NOW!
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'Let the bodies hit the floor,'
Let their blood soak in the ground.
'Let the bodies hit the floor,'
Let their lives end in agony.
'Let the bodies hit the floor,'
Let them scream without a sound.
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'Let the bodies hit the floor,'
The smell of death, so very sweet.
'Let the bodies hit the floor,'
Screams echo in the night.
'Let the bodies hit the floor,'
The taste of flesh, a bloody treat.
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'Push me again'
'This is the end'
'Here we go,'
'Here we go,'
'Here we go now!'
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'One,
Nothing
wrong with me'
Silence reigns over decay.
'Two,
Nothing
wrong with me'
My rage, nowhere near all spent.
'Three,
Nothing wrong with me'
More blood will spill with another day.
'Four,
Nothing wrong with me'
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'One,
Something's got to give'
Fire burning, without light.
'Two,
Something's got to give'
Pulls flesh from bone, deliciously.
'Three,
Something's got to give'
A perfect way to end the night.
Now!
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'Let the
bodies hit the floor,'
Let them flee but
never hide.
'Let the bodies hit the floor,'
Let the ground taste their insides.
'Let the
bodies hit the floor!'
Let hearts be torn, open, wide.
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'Let the
bodies hit the floor,'
Let my roars echo forth.
'Let the
bodies hit the floor,'
Let them grovel on the ground.
'Let the
bodies hit the floor,'
Let my claws judge
them, their worth.
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'Skin against
skin, blood and bone
You're all by yourself, but you're not
alone
You wanted in, and now your here
Driven by hate, consumed
by fear'
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'Let the
bodies hit the floor,'
Nothing like ending a life.
'Let the
bodies hit the floor,'
Putting wretched souls to rest.
'Let the
bodies hit the floor,'
Ending misery and strife.
'Let the
bodies hit the floor!'
…
Fuck yeah!
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Hmmmmmm…
Since when was I so fucking eloquent?
I thought Mitarashi would be the first one to make up a poem about killing people.
Kyuubi must be rubbing off on me, the twisted bastard.
…
Heh, heh, Kyuubi in a mosh pit.
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Author's Notes: This is the second version of chapter 14 (Naruto 3). I originally had multiple ideas on how to do it, but this idea and the original chapter I posted are my favorites, so those are the ones I'm gonna post.
Anyway, I know this isn't really the full song, but all I took out was the last repeat of the chorus. Since I had some weird obligation to write some poetic stuff in between the lyrics, it was getting to be too much of a strain on me.
The poetic verses in this though, are all my writing, but it was fairly hard since I very rarely write poems like this.
Figures, eh?
Anyway, if anyone's got any questions about something in here, please send me a pm, and I'll try to contact you.
Oh, and if you're lucky enough to be like me, and have an Xbox 360, and want to chat and/or play together, my gamertag is "Faxy150" (do not ask where that came from!)
Anyway, so I'm planning Shizune's chapter next, but I don't know how long it will take, since I have to spend some time looking up her personality.
Major thanks to everyone who's reviewed so far, and I wish I could go into detail, but I am actually really late for class right now as it is.
Until next time,
Ja ne!