Before the story...I got a review that made me and brother laugh. It made us realize that we created a very...hateable chrctr and most of the readers don't think he'll survive the journey. My dear friend Majia actually shares the same feelings as I do (I picture acting out the review: hissing and screaming-haha).
Here is the review:
O.k. suggestions Rioch must die, a slow, painful, and regretful death. HOW DARE HE PICK ON HINATA WITH SUCH PERVERTED INTENTIONS! KICK HIS ASS SASUKE! KICK HIS ASS! I'm still wandering where naruto dissapeared to. Thanks for updating Gio-san, for your first fic it wasn't bad at all.
Sincerely, Majia
Tell your sis to get well soon, we're all worried about herT.T
Thanks from the RCS siblings...Gio and Rosy (well Rosii but I don't like to spell it like that...looks too...heh.)...I am back. Well, I wasn't sick or anything bad...I was working and then on writter's block...haha, I guess that might be consider being sick...(my daydreaming starts: "YOu are soo Sick Mister...I-I mean MIss! How dare you leave your loyal readers without their chapters for a while? You sick, sick...person, if you can even be called that!" reviewer turns around and run away sobbing. shivers ...I-I...I am a sick person...sobs...I am sorry...sobs.) snaps out of the daydream Hehe, yeah, I guess that could also be consider sick. Well, I am better now from my writter's block and exhaustion...so thank you Majia. Thanks for that Review, it was great, just what I was thinking...but don't worry I'll let him live long enough to be torture, that he will wish to be dead.
I think my brother did good writting the fic but I actually was left with a big gap...Gasp!...what the...how will I...where do I go from here? So now I have to modify the story I already had in mind...although, how could I call my self an artist when I am not able to improvise.
About Naruto...I decided he was too much of an idiot (no offense...I still love him to death) to even noticed Rioch had gone to Hinata's room, likes her(it sounds more like lust...but lets go with like...yeah, likes.), and has bad intentions. So he will be nice to Rioch and a bastard to Sasuke-bastard for being a bastard to the other bastard. Sigh, all the male chrctrs in this fic are a bunch of pervs and bastards. Although the Bastard-trio interaction will be seen on the next chapter.
Thank you Majia-chan
Now The fic...must continue.
I do not own Naruto
Warning: Bad grammar and spelling.
What about me?
Chapt. 15
Hitting
Rioch reached her chin and started lifting it up slowly and gently, suddenly something or someone slapped his hand away. What the fuck? Who dared... For a momment Rioch feared that maybe it had been the Kazekage and looke up. His fearful face quickly changed to a frown. "What the hell is your problem? Can't you see I am...we are busy here?" Hinata turned to look at a very angry Uchiha whith glowing red eyes.
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Hinata could feel Sasuke's deep breathing, she could see his burning red face, his trembling body and got worried.
"Sasuke are you feeling O.K.? Gasp! You are sick, " She quickly got up and put a hand on his forhead, only to be slapped away.
"Don't...don't touch me!" Sasuke was furious that those two had been...flirting...ugh.
Rioch quickly got up and pulled Hinata away from Sasuke."What the hell is your problem! How dare you hit Hinata? Hitting a woman, hmph, how dare you call yourself a man. Men never hits a woman...unless...haha...they are gay? Are you gay?"
Rioch was trying to look and sound brave in front of Hinata, but little did he know that the more he talk the more his body would ache later. Sasuke brow started twitching, he couldn't stand this idiot! "Shut up!"
"Why should I? Well? Don't you know that a female like this should be treated like a rose?" He turned to look at a blushing Hinata, "with tender care and love...Yet you..." he turned once more to face Sasuke "you treat her with so much disrespect even when she is trying to help you out. A man should never hit a woman, YOU HEAR ME! A MAN SHOULD NEVER HIT A WO-"
Sasuke exploded and hit Rioch on the mouth. "MAN...a man is allowed to hit a man...right?" Sasuke let out a little chuckle before turning back to his grouchy self.
Rioch covered his sore mouth and moaned. "Why the HELL DID YOU HIT ME FOR? Its past 9 am and you are now officially my bodyguards! You CAN'T hit me!"
"Oh, really? I can't? Sure I can, all I have to do is lift my arm and wail at you...want me to demonstrate?" Sasuke said with an evil grin as he started lifting his arm. Although Hinata got in between the two to protect the already beat up Rioch.
"Sasuke, stop this nonsense at once!" Hinata gaved him an angry face which made him frown.
Rioch feeling a bit safe behind Hinata decided to speak. "Sure, you can hit me-" With this Sasuke gaved another evil grin and started lifting his right arm as he pushed aside Hinata with the other. "NO! LET ME FINISH! Now, now, you could...but you shouldn't hit me...because...you are suppose to protect me." Rioch tried to reason with Sasuke.
Sasuke narrowed his eyes and gave a low growl. He needed to find an excuse to hit him or otherwise the sand brat would think he could do anything he pleased. "You are not a woman. You are a man, I am a man, and men are only allowed to hit other man."
"What?" Rioch was taken back by what Sasuke said. He knew very well where this was leading to.
"You are a man...right?"
"Huh?" Rioch gave Sasuke a fake confuse look.
"Hmph, If you are a man then I am allowed to hit you...unless...you are a woman? Are you a woman?"
"..."
"I thought so. You know what that mea-"
"Sasuke-bastard! There you are! Where the hell have you been? I'v been looking for you everywhere you idiot!" Everyone turned at once to look at the arrival of the hyperactive-annoying-loudmouth-fool ninja.
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AN: OH, in case you didn't notice...there was a scene I used from The Simpsons for a part of my story. Where Homer tells the people destroying the brothel house (I think that is what it was...anywaaaays) he tells them to stop. Everyone stops then he tells them that they can destroy the place (then everyones starts destroying the place.), then seeing their reaction he stops them again. He tells them that they can but shouldn't destroy the place and Homer starts singing.
Oh, by the way...On July 23 its my bro's B-day along with Sasuke-bastard and Daniel Radcliffe(?spllng?). I will celebrate their birthday by posting new chapters to half of my fics...so please start voting on which fics you would like me post a new chapter (no matter the reviews). I will only allow each person to vote for only 5 of my fics. I will count the total and see which stories I will post a new Chpt on July 23rd. Love. RRCRS aka RCR.
Italy won! Yay! Yay!
