So, I'm sorry for my slight craziness and lack of self confidence in my writing...
I have made my decision on the story, and I really think that this will make it how I originally intended it...
I am keeping chapter 5 how it is. However, I am re-typing chapter 6. Some of the same ideas may stay, others will emerge.
I have a plan on how I'd like this story to spin itself, and chapter 6 is where I need to start.
I am very sorry to those of you who enjoyed chapter 6- please stick with this new chapter 6, because later on in the story, some similarities will appear; I promise!
And a HUGE thank you to all of you who continued to believe in my story plot and offered to give me ideas! The ideas have ALL been taken into consideration, and I'll use the ones that can fit in best with what I already have planned!
I'll reconstruct chapter 6... but I'll keep the original one in case you really liked it, I'll just change the title on the little scroll down thingie so that the original chapter 6 reads something like "unused plot twist" or "re-imagining of plot"
I dunno. I'll make it work out somehow.
Thank you all for sticking with this story while it is in it's little rebellious stage! I appreciate all of your help/opinions!