Ok not much to say other then AznAltron you may suggest all you want in fact I encourage everyone to give me ideas, because its hard to think of stuff further on hence me being late on the Pain and Destruction story I'm halfway through I've just lost my muse for that story. This story is slightly easier I have a lot of other paths for this story. Well anyway I have a bad habit of getting off track, so about the Hayate and sword I'm all for it I was thinking of having it actually, but I'm afraid it would put out that Naruto will be to powerful. And If anyone was wondering the Akkiheki is similar to 'The Extreme Lotus' that Lee and Gai use it's a double-edged sword they both need celestial gates to use them but Naruto could use the Kyuubi's chakra. The only true difference is the power and stances Akkiheki is far more powerful hence the time limit is far shorted anyway on with the story Chapter 4 I believe.
Chapter 4
"Well you see when the fire came for any normal human it would have killed them, and I don't want to die" said the Kyuubi as he rested his head on one of his giant paws. "So I intervened and shielded you with my chakra but apparently that still hurt you, but nothing I can't heal" finished the Kyuubi.
"What do you mean? How did your chakra still hurt me but help me at the same time" asked a baffled Naruto.
"Simple you see I gave you a lot of chakra normally it wouldn't of hurt you, but I gave you to much and it ended up…" the Kyuubi paused trying to think of the right words "overloading your systems so to speak."
"What" asked Naruto.
"Kami, you truly are an idiot" sighed the Kyuubi "to put it simply you couldn't handle the vast power of my chakra given to you that fast" explained the Kyuubi.
"Oh and where am I right now" asked Naruto out of nowhere.
"Well you see you're in you, or to be more specific you're in the deepest darkest part of your soul" explained the Kyuubi.
"Ok first of all I thought you were dead, and second how are you in me" asked Naruto who was getting more and more confused be the minute.
"Well everyone should think I'm dead but from you're memory's I've noticed only you're generation doesn't know" said the Kyuubi as he saw Naruto ready to open his mouth he quickly interrupted. "But if things continue everyone will know that I'm trapped in you, and before you can say anything answer this do you know how the fourth defeated me….don't say anything just answer with a nod" Naruto paused for a moment then nodded "well that's good. Because that saves a lot of time except that he didn't kill me he sealed me into you so that when you die I die." Said Kyuubi with a regretful voice then he saw Naruto's face "Boy" said the Kyuubi and Naruto looked at him again. "If it means anything I'm sorry, nobody deserves my curse no one should have seen what you have seen this early in life…I'm sorry I'll let you think…..alone" and with that said He got up turned around and disappeared along with cage the, and the everything else the only thing left was darkness.
Naruto Didn't know what to feel he wanted to curl into a small ball and cry his eyes out but for some reason he couldn't so he just stood there thinking about everything that just happened in such a short amount of time.
With Genma
Genma was running with all the strength he had and then some. ' Naruto, you have to make it not only for me but for your dream and also to not lose don't let this village have the pride in knowing that they succeeded please be ok' thought Genma as he ran faster and soon saw the hospital within sight 'just a little more.' Within a few seconds after that Genma made it threw the doors and at the front desk "Quick I need help" yelled Genma to the nurse at the front desk.
"Don't we all" replied the nurse as she started to write some stuff down "name" she asked.
"I don't have time I have a child here who has second to third degree burns and possible chakra exhaustion.
The nurse looked up and saw Naruto and she sneered at the boy. "I'm sorry but you're going to have to wait over there with that demon" said the nurse pointing to the chairs on the wall at the side.
"You do not want to make me wait bitch" threatened Genma as he placed Naruto into his other arm and put his other hand onto the desk.
"Oh and why" asked the nurse as she looked back at her paper and started to write some more stuff down.
Genma started to gather a little chakra into his arm and quickly grabbed the nurse by the throat and slowly started to pick her up "because I can make you wish that you were in hell" yelled Genma.
"Let me go, I'll call the shinobi" the nurse gasped out as she started to lose consciousness.
"Go ahead" said Genma.
The nurse started to gasp for more air as she felt Genma's hold start to tighten "fine" the nurse wheezed out.
"Good" said Genma as he draped the Nurse who reached for the button to the intercom.
"We need a child doctor here A.S.A.P" said the nurse as she started to get back into her chair.
"Thank you very much" said Genma with a smirk.
A few seconds later a doctor came running into the waiting room "yes what's the problem" asked the doctor.
"My student got into the middle of a battle and has second to third degree burns." Answered Genma as he showed Naruto to the doctor.
"That's all" laughed the doctor then he saw the furry in Genma's eyes. "I am sorry it's just this child has had far worse and it always healed him, all the boy needs is some rest and heal be ok by tomorrow morning, do not worry" said the doctor as he started to turn around.
"May I ask you something" asked Genma as he started to look at Naruto more closely to see all the burns slowly disappearing.
The doctor stopped and turned around "yes" was all he said.
"What do you see when you look at Naruto" asked Genma in a serious voice.
"To tell you the truth at first I saw what everyone else saw, a monster with no heart, I took joy in his pain" Genma was getting angrier by the second and was about to yell at the man before the doctor continued "My father was a medicnin in that battle and my mother was a Chunin they both died, the only memories I have of them are of them helping people. That's why I myself became a medicnin to help those in need. After about the third time Naruto came in I was told to watch him to make sure he was ok over night, I planned on killing him but this sick looking ninja was watching me be order of the Hokage. I thought he was one of the many who hated him so I asked him what he thought of the demon, man I regret those words more now then ever, right after I finished the sentence the man came at me faster then I thought he could and had me pinned to the wall with his sword. He yelled at me to look at Naruto and asked me what I saw was it truly a demon or a boy hurt for something he had no control over. I looked at him and saw what my parents were trying to prevent their whole lives. And now to answer your question I see a boy who needs help more then anyone in this hell hole of a village. If you have any more problems that require medical attention ask for doctor Joshu." And with that the doctor walked away and Genma was happy that not everyone was blind.
Genma looked down at Naruto and smiled as he walked out of the hospital "well today was interesting wasn't it Naruto just wait till your better we'll train ten times as hard so you can learn the Tenbatsu." Genma continued to walk until he reached his house and set Naruto down on his couch and sat on an arm chair to watch over him.
In Naruto's mind
'Why' Naruto kept on saying to himself why him why this curse why are human blind. He couldn't stand it he wanted to hurt everything around him he wanted to break everything he hated it all.
Real World
Naruto slowly woke up and quickly realized that he was not in his own home he quickly shot up and looked around to see Genma asleep on an arm chair near him. Naruto quickly relaxed and slowly got up and snuck around him to the door.
"Were do you think your going Naruto" asked Genma without turning to look at Naruto.
"I need to go out for a little bit to think" answered Naruto.
Genma could hear the sorrow in the blonds voice and didn't dear to look at him. "Ok be careful please" said Genma.
"Don't worry I will" said Naruto as he walked out.
A few minutes later we see Naruto sitting on the fourths head "I hate you" Naruto kept on saying to him self as let his tears fall. "Why me you BASTARD" Naruto yelled the last part not caring who heard him.
Down on the ground below we see Gai and Lee running their morning laps "Gai-sensei is that not Naruto-kun I see their"
"Oh so it is…" Gai paused as he looked harder and then he felt a drop of water hit his face, and he knew what Naruto was doing up there. "Lee let us go" said Gai in a serious voice.
"Why do we not go to him and offer him to run with us Gai-sensei" asked Lee surprised at his sensei's sudden change in attitude.
"No, Lee he need some time alone" said Gai with a voice that said no more arguments and they continued to run.
A few minutes later Tenten and Neji were running to catch up with their teammate and sensei.
"Neji-kun look is that Naruto" asked a panting Tenten.
Neji looked up and automatically the blond and just glared then left.
"Yep that's Naruto alright no one else can make Neji that pissed, it looks likes something's wrong I'll go look" and with that Tenten jumped from house roof to house roof until she mad it up to the fourths head. "Hey you ok?"
Naruto froze when he heard Tentens' voice and quickly wiped the tears away and put up his mask. "Yea everything's I was just…just admiring the view of the sun rise" said Naruto in a hurry.
"Please don't do that" said Tenten in a serious voice.
"Do what watch the sun rise" laughed Naruto.
"No, don't put up a mask I hate it when people do that to keep others from worrying" Tenten's voice got louder near the end.
Naruto lost his mask and looked at Tenten directly into the eyes and Tenten was beyond surprised at what she saw. His eye's showed true pain a pain that nobody should know. His once warm blue eyes were now that of ice. It's was the eye's you only see a on a person who saw hell and then some.
"Kami" was all Tenten could say.
"I just can't stand it anymore" said Naruto as he fell to his knees "I can't stand this hell hole I call home." And then the tears started to fall again "this man cursed me" said Naruto to low for Tenten to hear as he punched the fourths head.
Tenten couldn't think about what to do so she just walked up to Naruto and cradled his head "it's ok" was all she could say.
"Why" was all Naruto could say as he hugged Tenten "I hate this curse" said Naruto without knowing it.
"What curse" asked Tenten now confused.
END
Do me a favor don't ask why this one is late lets leave it at life problems.
