New chapter. yaaaay! I got bored and decided that I would upload the next one for you guys. I hope that everyone likes what I have done with this chapter. Before you judge, I have thought this through. Just read it and say what you think after.
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Previously.

"Bella. No!" he said simply.

I looked into his eyes and told him what I needed him to do.

"Change me!"

Bella's POV.

Edward looked at me, shocked by what I had just asked him to do. I didn't understand why. He knew this is what I wanted to happen. I had always wanted to be a vampire. But now it wasn't a case of me being selfish and only wanting this for me. I needed to become a vampire. I needed it to happen because I was going to make sure that Victoria was going to pay for what she had put me though.

"Bella. You cant ask me to do that to you. I wont do it!" he said angrily.

I was starting to get really angry with him now. Once he knew my reason for wanting to become like him. He couldn't refuse. Could he?

"Edward. I need this to happen. I need to become like you so that I can finish Victoria off myself. I need you to do this so that we can find our daughter." I said as I crossed the room to where he was standing.

He didn't say anything to me. He just stood there breathing in and out deeply.

" I'm not going to do it Bella. Even if I did. You would be out for 3 days before you would be able to do anything. And you will be a newborn, the only thought that you will have will be blood. Not your daughter." he told me sternly, but also in a way in that he was trying to calm me down.

I was seriously angry now. I walked over to him and hit him on the chest with my fists. I know I did no damage to him, but I needed to get my anger out of me.

"Edward. I have had enough of this. I need my daughter back and this is the only way that I can see of doing it and getting rid of Victoria at the same time. Edward, if you love me you will do this for me" I was practically begging now.

"Bella, if I did this to you. it would do the exact opposite of showing you how much I love you. I will be killing you Bella. I cant do that to you." he said as he took my hands from where they were on his chest and held them tightly.

"Fine. You now have two choices. Change me or loose me." I told him looking him right in his eyes.

"What are you talking about Bella?" he asked as he back away from me yet again.

"You either change me now and in 3 days I will find Victoria and kill her and finish this forever. Or I walk out of this house right now, find Victoria and probably die. Your choice." I all but yelled at him.

I knew it was harsh, but I needed him to change me and I wasn't afraid of pushing some boundaries to get what I wanted.

Edward looked at me with anger in his eyes.

Oh crap. Ive done it now!

I thought to myself as Edward just continued to glare at me.

"Bella. You are trying hurt me? Because that is exactly what you are doing. I am not going to change you because I don't want to put you through that kind of pain not because I don't love you. I wont do that to you because I love you too much!" he shouted back at me. Most of what he said came out as I growl.

Edward had never shouted at me like that. it was quite scary. I could feel tears building up in my eyes.

"Fine!" I said as I walked past Edward and went to open the door.

"Where are you going?" Edward asked as he grabbed my arm to stop me from opening the door.

"You made your choice. Now you have to live with it. Now let me go, so I can go find out daughter." I said trying to pull my arm free from his grip.

"Bella, you cant do this. Victoria will kill you if you find her." Edward was pleading with me now.

"Well you know what you have to do to stop me from doing this. Edward please. I don't only need this to happen. I want this to happen. If you change me we can be like this forever. We can be a family for eternity." Tears were now rolling down my face as I pleaded with him.

The wrist that Edward was holding in his hand, he brought up so that it was behind his neck. Bringing his lips down so that they met mine before I could realise what was happening. My other hand went automatically into his hair, as I grabbed fits full's of it. The kiss became very passionate very quickly.

My and Edwards lips moved in sync as he continued to deepen the kiss. All too soon he pulled away and started to trail kisses down the side of my throat while I was gasping for air over his shoulder.

"Are you positive you want this?" he asked in my ear.

I nodded my head frantically letting him know that this was what I needed.

"I'm so sorry Bella. I love you." he whispered in my ear, before he brought his lips down to the side of my throat and bit me.

As soon as his teeth and sunk into my skin, I could feel the fire and heat rip through my body from the neck down. I lost control of my arms, and I let go of Edward's neck and let my arms fall to my side.

The last thing I remember before I blacked out was Edward's golden eyes looking at me as he mouthed the word's "Forgive me!"

Edward's POV

What have I done? I have damned the love of my life to a world of darkness and pain. How could I have done this to here.

As I sunk my teeth into her neck, I relished in the feeling of her blood running down my throat. She tasted amazing. So sweet. Delicious. I removed my teeth from her throat just so that I wouldn't loose control and drain her body of the intoxicating liquid that was running down my throat.

When I pulled away, Bella gasped. He arms fell from around my neck and they fell to the side of her body.

Just before Bella's eyes closed, I looked at her and asked her to forgive me.

As soon as Bella's eyes were closed, I picked her up bridal style and carried her into out room.

When I got there, I lay her on the bed and looked at her. she wasn't moving. She wasn't screaming. I was sure that by now the flames would be burning through her body.

I sat on the side of the bed and held Bella's hand. She was so beautiful. What was I thinking? How could I have done this to her? I know it was what she wanted, but that still didn't stop me from feeling like the worst kind of monster on the planet.

I had only been sitting by the side of her bed for about 10 minutes before someone came into the room. I didn't look at the door to see who had come in.

I felt someone put their hand on my shoulder and began to rub circles with their hand.

I looked up too see Alice standing next to me, looking directly at me.

"You did the right thing Edward. This is what she wanted to happen." Alice told me still rubbing circles on my shoulder.

"That doesn't matter Alice. How could I have let myself do this to her? she is never going to forgive me" I said, still not taking my eyes off Bella.

"Edward, there will be nothing to forgive. This is what Bella wanted. If she is going to do anything she is going to thank you" Alice said as she put her cheek onto the top of my head.

"You know everyone is going to stick by you through this." She told me.

I knew that my family would be with me through Bella's transformation, but that still didn't dwindle the feeling of guilt that was still wracking through my whole body.

Alice then had a vision of what Bella was going to look like when she woke up. Her hair was a richer colour than it had been, her facial structure had changed so that her cheek bones were slightly higher and more defined, her lips were red and full. Her body looked very similar to what it did now. Her waistline had become more pronounced so that she had more of a hour glass figure now. Bella's eyes were now her most dominant feature. Her eyes that were once brown were now crimson. I would never be able to see that shade of brown in her eyes again. The vision of Bella as one of us was beyond words. She was beautiful.

"She is going to look amazing. I think she is even going to give rose a run for her money" Alice said as she kissed the top of my head before going over to sit on the bed next to Bella, the other side to me.

"She always has been amazing Alice. You know that as well as me." I told my sister. She looked at me and smiled.

"Hey, you go downstairs, ill sit with her for a bit. Elizabeth has been winging for about 20 minutes now. I think Jasper is getting a little wound up." Alice told me as she started to stroke Bella's Hair.

I didn't want to leave her like this. Alice obviously saw that feeling on my face.

"Edward. get downstairs and help your brother with your daughter. If Bella does anything I will call you. ok." She said as she got up and pushed me out the door.

I walked down stairs, I could hear Elizabeth starting to cry downstairs. I walked into the living room to see Jasper lying on the floor with the baby propped up against his legs.

Jasper heard me coming into the room because he picked Elizabeth up and handed her to me.

"She is getting really winy now and I cant seem to settle her down. How is Bella?" he asked obviously concerned about Bella. How did he know though, I hadn't told anyone that I had changed her.

"I don't know, she is very quiet and still. How do you know about that?" I asked holding Elizabeth close to my chest.

"Well it was difficult not to listen to all the shouting upstairs. Also Alice saw this happening this morning. Sorry man." He said hitting me on the arm as he walked past me.

I looked around the living room to see that it was empty. Emmett and Rose were still out looking for Naomi. Carlisle and Esme had come home from work and they were out looking for Naomi as well. Jasper had left the room and had gone upstairs to see Alice. I knew that he was anxious to see Bella as well.

I looked down at Elizabeth who was lying in my arms. She did not smile, she just looked at me with her face looking concerned. I knew that she knew there was something going on that she didn't like.

"It's going to be ok" I cooed at her. her expressions didn't change and she drifted off into a sleep. I put her down in her bouncer and watched as she fell into a deep sleep. Once she was fast asleep, I sat down on the sofa and pinched the bridge of my nose with my fingers. The house was silent until I heard screaming coming from upstairs.

Bella's POV.

I could feel the flames attack my body from the neck down. The hottest part on my body was at the point where Edward ad bitten me. It felt like someone had taken a branding iron to my throat and was holding it there as it brunt through my skin and flesh.

My mind was telling me to move and to try and make the pain go away, but my body didn't move. I just had to stay where I was and just go through the pain. I tried to keep my mind concentrating on my family.

My brothers, my sisters, my parents, my two little girls and the love of my life. I don't know how long I was looking through my head, but they seemed to be distracting me from the pain that was going through my body.

Suddenly, a huge wave of heat went through my whole body from the centre of my chest right down to the tips of my fingers and toes. I had kept my mouth shut through the first onslaught of flames, but the second wave was just to much.

"OH…MY…GOD…IT…BURNS…MAKE…IT…STOP…PLEASE!" I screamed.

I opened my eyes and I saw someone's face in front of my, stroking my face. The hands that were stroking my face were small and cold. It must have been Alice. But if Alice was the one who was sitting next to me, then where was Edward.

I thrashed my body from side to side my eyes still wide open. I realised from the blurred images that I could see through my eyes, I realised that I was in Edward's room.

Alice continued to try and calm me by stroking my hair and talking to me which I couldn't hear because my screaming echoed through the room.

I felt a small wave and calm come towards me and I realised that Jasper must be in the room as well. I cant believe that this was going to last 3 days!

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It could have been days even weeks later and the pain still did not subside. I had lost track of time, so I didn't know how long I had been this pain.

Bella I love you I'm so sorry. I could hear Edwards voice. So he was here with me.

As a listened out further to see what else I was able to hear, I could hear my baby downstairs crying. Elizabeth: my little baby. She needed me and I couldn't do anything to comfort her. The faces of my family that were still going around in my head suddenly stopped and stuck on one face.

Naomi. I wondered where my baby was. I needed her back. It wasn't desire to have her back. I needed her to come home. She was the reason why I had put myself through this was so that I could get my little girl back and so that I would be able to kill the bitch that had taken my baby away from me.

Because of the anger that I had built up in my body I screamed again. But this scream wasn't from pain, it was from pure rage. Vaguely in the room I could hear Jasper growl. I assumed it was because of the anger that I was feeling. I had found that I was able to distinguish the differences between the people in the room with me. I could tell if Edward moved from one side of the room to the other. I could tell if Alice moved on the bed.

Suddenly, I could feel different emotions go through my body, but they didn't feel like my emotions. I tried to think about happy things like getting my daughter back, the family that I now had forever ect, trying to make the moods that I was feeling go away. I didn't like all these different emotions at one go. The pain was starting to fade now. I was sure it was because of Jasper being in the room with me.

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The pain had completely gone from my body now, the burning had gone away. But my body was still un able to move. From what I had heard about the transformation from being a human to a vampire, you would feel like you had been burning right from the beginning until the very end. But I had not felt any pain now for a good hour. Since the pain had gone I had got my sense of time back. I could hear clocks that were scattered around the house, ticking, allowing me to count each second.

3630,3631,3632,3633.

The seconds went by quickly since the pain had stopped.

3634,3635,3636,3637.

Images started to flash up in my mind. The clearest one was of Naomi, but they didn't look like what I had been picturing in my head.

Naomi was crouching in the corner of a dark room. It looked like warehouse. Naomi's eyes were black with thirst and fear. What was making my daughter act like this.

A door opened and Victoria walked into the room. Naomi hissed at the women as she walked into the room, backing her self even further into the corner of the room.

Victoria walked closer to her and grabbed the tops of her arms and dragged her off the ground.

How dare she touch my daughter. She was going to die!

I felt the angry built up my chest at the sight of that women grabbing my daughter.

I suddenly opened my eyes for the first time since the pain had stopped. I sat bolt upright and felt a growl come out from between my lips. I looked around the room to see my family watching me as I breathed in and out deeply.

Don't hate me! Soo what did you think. Like I said before, I have thought this through and it does work out, trust me. I have all but finished this story, I am currently working on the last 2 chapters. But you will have to wait and see because it could be a while before you lot see them. There may be a few grammatical errors in there, tell me if you spot any. That is the reason why I have never been a good writer. My grammar is terrible!!

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