Welcome to different beginning, different future. The pairings might be naruto, tenten
Summary: when naruto is saved form a mob beating by gai, neji, and tenten, they become best friends.
What will the future hold for naruto, lee, neji, tenten, naruto, and gai, the first ever 5 member genin team.
Authors note: first things first. The reason I made neji so oblivious to naruto holding the kyuubi was because there still eight. So sorry if I made some neji fans hate me a little second here's a review someone left me:
I'm sorry... but just reading the part where Kakashi wanted to kill Naruto was enough to ruin this story for me. I would have liked it a lot better if Gai had indeed saved Naruto, but that Kakashi would have been involved in the story a different way. I don't like the idea of Kakashi being so evil towards Naruto.
But well... this is your story and we all have different ideas. I read year other reviews and noticed that a lot of people like your story, so keep writing for them.
First, thanks for respecting my ideas. Second, the reason I did this was because I wanted for Kakashi to start out as a bad guy then turn to a good guy like in this chapter.
P.S remember this is still my first story
"Hi" normal speech
"Yelling"
"Loud thoughts"
"Normal thoughts"
"Inner sakura, kyuubi"
Also I have opened a poll asking if you want references form other anime added to this story. The choices are:
Bleach
Yuyu hakusho
Rurouni Kenshin
Inuyasha
Please vote and tell me which one you would want.
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With Naruto, tenten, neji, and gai
"HEY THERE HE IS"
"GET HIM"
"KILL THE DEMON"
"Gai, what's going on" said a nervous tenten
"It's the villagers. They formed a mob and are 6 buildings away" said neji as he activated his byakugan
"We have to get naruto out of here" yelled gai
"NOT SO FAST"
"TENTEN, GAI ABOVE YOU" neji yelled
"WHAT. What are you doing" gai said as he was forced to the ground by the shinobi that tackled him and tenten from above
"Were making sure you don't interfere while we kill the demon" said the shinobi holding gai to the ground, who was a jonin
"NEJI, HELP US" yelled a frantic Tenten
"On my way" said neji as he dashed at the jonin holding Gai
"Oh no you don't brat. Shadow Clone Jutsu" The shinobi, who was a chuunin, who was on top of tenten said as a clone appeared behind neji and knocked him out.
"NEJI" yelled Gai as he tried to get up
"You're not getting away that easily. Shadow Clone Jutsu" said the jonin as three more clones appeared on top of Gai
"Dammit, they sure went put in a lot of effort to stop us from stopping them from trying to kill naruto" Thought Gai
With Naruto And The Villagers
"AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH" yelled naruto as he ran from the mob behind. Unfortunately for him, most of the mob was made of chunnin's and jonin's
"No where to go demon scum. EARTH STYLE: MUD WALL" Performed a random jonin
Right in front of naruto a wall of mud appeared cutting of his only escape route.
"Koza, you can stop making the wall. We got the demon right were we want him"
"Al right, whatever you say Tora" said the now- named Koza
"What are you g-g-going to do with me" said a frantic naruto
"Were Going to torture you then kill you. But it won't go fast. It will last a long time and trust me, I'm going to enjoy every second of it" said Tora "NOW LET'S BEGIN. FIRE STYLE: GRAND FIREBALL TECHNIQUE."
"AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH" yelled naruto as his skin was being burned by the intense flames
"My turn. EARTH STYLE: EARTH SPIKE" said Koza as four spikes came out of the ground and stabbed naruto, 1 at each arm and 1 at each leg "Sora, You're turn"
"Thanks for pinning him." Said sora, a chuunin who had ANBU level jutsu's "Riku, let's do our combination"
"Right" "NOW"
"WIND STYLE: WIND BULLET"
"LIGHTING STYLE: LIGHTING BOLT FANG"
Out of Sora's mouth came a ball of concentrated chakra, while Riku's Jutsu brought down lighting from the now forming storm.
"AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH" Yelled naruto as the wind bullet exploded as soon as it hit naruto and when the smoke cleared the lightning bolt hit him right at his back, sending electricity throughout his body
"THAT'S RIGHT, YOU DEMON BRAT. FEEL THE PAIN THAT YOU MADE US FEEL WHEN YOU MADE THE MISTAKE OF ATTACKING KONOHA. SHADOW CLONE JUTSU" Yelled out a random chuunin as 7 clones appeared and all of them charged and attached themselves at naruto "NOW TAKE THIS. SHADOW CLONE EXPLOSION"
"AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH"
"IT'S NOT OVER YET." Said another random chuunin as he threw 5 kunai , 5 shuriken, and 5 senbon " come on Eric, if you're going to help kill it them make you're attack something strong" said Koza " Who said I was done. SHADOW SHURIKEN JUTSU, SHADOW KUNAI JUTSU, SHADOW SENBON JUTSU" finished Eric as the 15 weapons became 150 weapons all heading toward naruto
"AAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHH" yelled naruto "at least this one wasn't as bad as the others."
"If you think that was the end of my attack, then you're wrong. Look at the end of those kunai's that are attached to you." Said Eric with a sadistic grin
"Huh? What is he talking abou--- SHIT!!!!! PAPERBOMBS!!!!" cursed naruto in his head
"those are special paper bombs, that when they explode, they not only cause serious damage, they also surge 10,000 volts of electricity throughout your body every time you take a hit even after the first wave of electricity is gone for fifteen minutes. There are about 10 to 20 paper bombs on you, so you're going to feel either about 100,000 or 200,000 volts of electricity" said Eric as his fellow tortures cheered when they heard this effect would stay fifteen minutes
"SSSHHHIIITTT!!!" thought naruto
"BBBBOOOOOOOOMMMM"
"AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH"
"NARUTO" Yelled a scared to death tenten and Gai
"GET OFF OF ME, GODDAMMIT. I GOT TO GO HELP NARUTO" Said Gai As He Started to get up
"oh no you don't. you're staying right here and enjoy the show. Shadow Clone Jutsu." Once again 3 more clones appeared on top of gai to hold him down, making a total of seven people on gai's back. Did I mention they each weighted 300 pounds(50 pounds of it muscle)
"AAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH. Damm lardo, get off of me" said a really irritated gai
"We're about done here. As soon as we are, were taking this demons body and show it to the hokage. He'll reward us for freeing him from the demon's hold on him" said Koza
"Alright Tora, let's end this." Said Koza as he pulled a kunai knife from his pocket "Tora, hold his head straight"
"Yes sir"
"w-w-what are you doing" said a barely alive naruto. If it weren't for the fox, he would be dead right now
"You'll see. Well actually, when were done here you'll never see again." Said Koza as he grabbed on of the kunai knives' that was still stuck on his body and rammed both kunai into naruto's eyes
"AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH"
"NNNNNNNAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRUUUUUUUUUTTTTTTTTTTTTTOOOOOOOOO" yelled Gai and Tenten
"That's it" said Gai as he started to gather his chakra "GATE OF OPENING, OPEN" Yelled Gai as massive amount of chakra came of Gai. So much that it destroyed lardo's clone's and completely obliterated the original lardo
"2 PALMS" said one of the chunnin's who happened to be a hyuuga, who hit one of his chakra points. "4 PALMS, 8 PALMS, 16 PALMS, 32 PALMS, 64 PALMS!!!" finished the hyuuga as he slammed his palm against Gai's chest.
"Dammit" said gai before he was knocked out
"GAI- SENSIE" Yelled tenten, as she was the only one still conscious, beside's naruto
"NOW YOU DIE DEMON" Yelled Koza as He drew a katana that was strapped to his back and began running chakra through it
"NARUTO" yelled a helpless tenten as she saw Koza bring down the katana towards naruto's head
"LIGHTING BLADE"
"WHAT"
Was the last words Koza ever said as Kakashi appeared decapitating Koza with his only original move
"KAKASHI. HOW DARE YOU BETRAYE YOUR FELLOW SHINOBI. THE PUNISHMENT FOR ATTACKING A FELLOW LEAF SHINOBI IS DEATH" Said Tora as he and the rest of the mob went after Kakashi
"THIS IS THE END" Yelled Kakashi as he went through a series of handsigns "SUMMONING JUTSU: LIGHTING DRAGON!!!" Yelled Kakashi as he slammed his lighting blade against the ground. A large dragon appeared from the place Kakashi hit, and obliterated the entire mob
"What power. It's a good thing this time he fought to protect naruto rather than to kill him" thought tenten as she was standing up " Oh shit, I forgot" "Naruto"
Tenten ran to naruto's side to check if he was still alive. Thankfully he was…… barely
"Kakashi we need to get naruto to the hospital NOW"
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There you go. Will naruto survive? Will he ever be able to become a ninja with no eyes( don't worry he'll be getting eyes. Better than the old one's)
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