Here is chapter 5
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Naruto - Ginta (Main hero's duh!)
Sakura - Dorothy (Both have pink hair and both are quick tempered)
Kakashi - Nanashi (…..Both use Lighting attacks…. And their names are almost the same, Kakashi, Nanashi)
Sasuke - Alviss (…..Do you need to ask for this one)
Hinata - Snow (Hinata's a water element, Snow had Ice/Water ARMs)
Shikamaru - Jack (Both want to reach the sky)
Gaara - Alan (Only thing I can think of)
Neji - Ed (Even though Neji can fight)
Chapter 5: Returning to Caldia
Babbo laughed at the red faced boy, Naruto kept glaring daggers at him as he laughed. Naruto then swore to himself 'That's it, Babbo is going to be put in Zipper for two weeks now…' he stopped glaring when he looked up to his friends, to the Hokage, and to his teachers. He rose and said "Did Kaulu leave already?" Tsunade's smile and thoughts of black mail stopped and she needed "Yes, two days ago she did…Naruto stopped and stared wide eyed, he then asked "Is that how long I've been out? Damn I must have used a lot more of my magic than I thought…"
Tsunade nodded but stopped when Sakura ran over and bonked him on the head yelling "Baka! You're a prince and you never told us! We your teammates and friends?!!" Naruto held his head and yelled out "Ow!! The pain!!" he held onto the rest of his body that was in pain too, when he stopped he said "I-I wanted to tell you but I would have broken a Taboo if it wasn't during a time of importance!"
Babbo nodded and said "Yes, you see to Caldian's breaking a Taboo can get you killed…." everyone stopped and Tsunade asked "What do you mean by that Babbo?" Naruto looked to the ground and said "If someone breaks a Taboo, our rules, it means death, Rule One, never betray your homeland and never tell of heritage unless its in a time of importance, Rule Two never kill the innocent, Rule Three never return the dead to the land of the living, Rule Four never steal our treasured ARMs, and Rule Five, the most important rule, never and I mean NEVER open the door to the Orb, for upon breaking this rule a member of your family or your friends must kill you, it doest matter what age you are, or who you are, commoner, or royal, you will die if this rule is broken…." everyone stared at the blonde and at Babbo in disbelief at the penalty of those rules.
Naruto then said, his eyes cold for a moment "Caldia Rules, are our Taboo's we break them, they can and will kill us….." Naruto then looked up and said "That's the way we live, we break our promises to our rules, we die, plan and simple…" Hinata gulped and so did a few others just by thinking of those rules.
Naruto smiled and said "But other than that, Caldia is a great place to live, we have some of the strongest magic user there…" he then said as he looked to Babbo "Do you guys want to hear the story of Team MAR?" everyone stopped and stared at the blonde who seemed to be excited about the story, Tsunade nodded wanting to hear the full story, she, Jiraiya, and a few others only heard the small tales of the world far away.
Naruto grinned and said "It all began when the first born princess of Caldia had opened the door to the Orb…."
(Meanwhile)
"I see…" said Dorothy as she looked at Kalulu, Kalulu nodded and rose from her bow, she then said "He is doing fine now, he has ordered me to bring the bodies of the dead so we may give them a hero's burial…" Dorothy nodded and said "How did the families take the news of their loved ones dead?" Kalulu stopped and looked to the floor, she then said "Badly, the husbands and wife's cried as their children did too, but once they heard they died protecting the prince and a village from the Chess Piece they still cried but understood, everyone in MAR remembers what the Chess Piece have done…"
Dorothy nodded before saying "I have sent the guards out to warn the villages and Kingdoms of the Chess Piece return, hopefully, this time we can save the lives of the innocent…" Kalulu nodded before hearing "I want my grandson home Kalulu, please, bring him back home…" she nodded and said "Yes My Lady, I understand, but can I ask, what of his friends and the Hokage? They care deeply for him and I don't believe they will give up on him…" Dorothy stared for a moment, she smiled softly and said "Tell them, I want to speak with their Hokage in a matters of a treaty, I mean I had one with the old Hokage, I need a new one with the new Hokage, do I not? Oh and also ask the boy Gaara, I had heard from Naruto's letters that he is the Kazekage of his village, might as well get a treaty with Suna too..." Kalulu paused and smiled before she nodded and disappeared.
(Later with Naruto)
"And that's why I'm here, I'm looking for the lost ARMs…" Naruto said with a grin, he looked at their faces and everyone but the Hokage was staring at him in disbelief, Naruto then said as he looked at them "By now I bet my grandmother is worried sick, I swear she worries to much about me, she's as bad as The Old Hag …" at that comment Naruto was bonked on the head by the same old hag.
Everyone laughed for a moment before it died away, they stared at Naruto who held his head. Naruto smiled softly before hearing Babbo say "Naruto, I sense Kalulu is coming back…" Naruto stared at Babbo and looked to the halls of the hospital, just as he said those words Kalulu came out of thin air, everyone stared wide eyed when she said.
She was smiling softly as she said "Naruto-San… I have a message from your grandmother…" Naruto took a breath and said "What did she say?…" Kalulu then spoke as she said "Your grandmother wishes to have a treaty with Konoha and Suna, the one she already has is far to old and she needs a new one, she also wishes to become friends with Suna, she has asked if Tsunade-Sama and Gaara-Sama, and some of their ninjas would like to travel to Caldia. In hopes for this treaty to come in full few, she has also asked for you to return home for the time being…" Naruto smiled before his eyes traveled to Tsunade and Gaara who smirked at this. They all knew what was happening, a treaty with Caldia was something the elders would never pass up, so they knew they would allow it.
Tsunade then said "We'll see, as for now lets have some rest." Kalulu nodded and said as she passed Naruto a ARM, she then said "Your grandmother wants you home soon, please do not keep her waiting…" Naruto smiled and nodded…
(Next Morning)
"So, they wish for a few weapons of Caldia? Sorry but we cant do that…" Naruto said as he stared at Tsunade how nodded, Naruto then said "We can offer our knowledge for far better corps and cleaner water, maybe even a few lessens on magic but I know for sure that the elders won't give their weapons, not after what the Chess Piece and all. My people don't want a repeat on what happened, because of the Chess Piece, many innocent lives and villages were lost, some are still trying to rebuild their home after what happened…"
Naruto looked to the elders who had asked for the weapons, they seemed surprised and angry at Naruto but didn't want to do anything to anger the Prince, they knew that already they were deep water since they treated Naruto in a bad manner and knew whatever Naruto would say to the Queen of the most powerful Kingdom on the other side of their world, would depend on what they say now.
One elder rose and said "B-But if we have the weapons we can defend ourselves from the Chess Piece…" Naruto took a breath and glared for a moment and the man shuted up, Naruto then said "This village is strong without the ARMs, its just that the Chess Piece are known to be underhanded and tricky, so please think about the cost of what might happen in the future…."
The elders stopped and spoke among themselves for a moment, they talked and talked as Gaara just stared and Tsunade rolled her eyes, they both sat next to Naruto who sighed again. Once the elders got done one said "I believe we can come to a understanding, magic lessons, better corps, cleaner water, and maybe even have some Caldian's come to Konoha…." Naruto stared before saying "I believe that might happen…Now if you excuse me I must get ready to leave…" and with that Naruto disappeared into thin air, Tsunade smirked at the elders who were fearing.
Gaara only shook his head for the moment…
(Later)
Naruto waited at the gates for Tsunade and Gaara, he and Babbo talked as some villagers stared, some people had to the nerve to even come near him like they were friends, Babbo would glare at the people who lied about always being kind to Naruto and such, and each time a girl around his age would come by, she would try to flirt with him, Naruto sighed again before hearing footsteps, he looked up and smiled.
He saw his friends, the Hokage and the Kazekage coming his way, he walked over and said "Ready to go?" he held the ARM in his hand, it was a strange looking ring, everyone nodded and Naruto said "Okay lets get going, Dimension ARM, Andata! Take us to the Borderline!" and in a flash they disappeared leaving freaked out villagers…
(In A Forest)
Naruto landed with Babbo next to him, Naruto turned back as heard the oomph sound from behind him, he laughed to himself as he saw his friends on the ground from the landing. Sakura was able to push those on top of her off and yelled out "N-Naruto what was that for?!"
Naruto smiled again and said "Sorry but Andata is one of the more easier ways to get around MAR…." Naruto watched them stared at him before he said "Oh, welcome to the Borderline of my home…"
Sakura rose and looked around, they were in a strange deep forest, Sasuke raised an eyebrow not really getting it, Kakashi shrugged it off and read his book again, Gaara got up not really caring, Temari took a glance around as she help Kankuro up, Neji and Tenten looked at the woods, Ino, Shikamaru, and Choji looked around also, Kiba and Akamaru smelt for anything different, Shino wondered if there was any different bugs around, Lee started to go off about something being youthful or something like that. Tsunade sent a glare to Naruto for a moment for the no warning of the landing, Hinata stared as she got up herself up.
She looked before hearing Tsunade say "Okay why are we here and not in Caldia?" Naruto stared before saying "Oh, well you see my people set a magic barrier so those who want to come near Caldia have to stop here, then they have to be inside the barrier to travel to the gates of Caldia, once they get inside the gates they can travel around Caldia…. The reason why was because before had this up, the Chess Piece came and killed many of our people…."
Tsunade blinked as she saw Naruto look to the ground, she nodded before getting up, Naruto then said "Come on, its going to take us a mile before we reach the barrier line…" everyone nodded and walked with Naruto through the dense woods, they would talk to Naruto and Babbo for a while, Naruto told them all he knew about Caldia and how great it looked.
Lee seemed pumped up about seeing such a great place, Sakura and Ino couldn't wait to see what type of clothing they wore, Tenten wondered what type of weapons they use, Temari, Kankuro, Neji, Sasuke, and Gaara wondered if they could fight anyone strong, Shikamaru wondered if anyone played GO, Choji wondered how the food was, Kakashi and Tsunade just wondered how the Queen would look, Hinata smiled as Naruto told her about his home.
Naruto kept smiling until he said "So I kept running until bam, I ran right into Kalulu who was pissed off, she was mad because I got her really good with my prank…" Babbo snickered before saying "And then the brat was forced to wear some stupid fo-" Naruto cut Babbo up with a kick.
Naruto and Babbo then got into another fight, everyone sighed as the dust fight raged on and on. That was until they heard "Hey, are you two fighting again?" Naruto stopped and so did Babbo and they stared up, they saw Kalulu standing there, her arms folded as she sat on a huge rock near the road they were taking…
Naruto smiled and said "Kalulu! You here?" Kalulu nodded and said "Yup, your grandmother wanted me to come and watch over you for a while, up I figured that you're a grown boy now, you don't always need me to watch over you so I waited here at the barrier line…" Naruto blinked and nodded for a moment, Naruto then said to the others "So, you guys ready? Were at the barrier line, so you better be ready this time…."
They nodded this time ready for what was happening, Naruto smiled big and Babbo said "Hold onto your hats ladies and gentlemen!" Naruto held onto the ARM and said "I bring these people home!" and then in another flash they disspeared.
(Caldia)
Naruto landed on the ground again with Babbo at his side, he turned back and saw his friends had landed on the ground too, this time on their feet, he smiled now that they understood how to land right. He watched their faces turn to surprise as they saw the place in front of them, in front of them was a great opened field of trees that they were above, and coming from the ground was huge cliffs and a floating Castle, the huge towers loomed over them.
Naruto looked back and said "The place we need to go is the floating Castle, there is were m grandmother is waiting for us… Come on, we need to get to the gates…"
An hour went by as they traveled to the gates of Caldia, he could hear his friends stare in awe at the floating castle and the huge cliffs. Naruto laughed to himself before finding himself in front a huge gate, two guards stood there and stared at the newcomers.
They stared before one said "P-Prince Naruto?! Its true! You've come back home!" Naruto smiled to the man and said "Yes, but can you let me and my friends in, my grandmother and elders are waiting… I bring the leaders of Konoha and Suna with me, in hopes with a treaty with them…" the guards nodded and went to open the gates, they knew how their Prince got sometimes if no one listens to him, his temper and payback was worse then their Queens sometimes.
As the gates opened Naruto turned back and said "Welcome to Caldia, guys…"
The others eyes widened as Kalulu smiled softly at their faces…
…. Eh…. Not my best chapter but whatever…..
-Sigh- I think I might stop writing for this story, its not going the way I want it to… but of course all stories hit road blocks… Hopefully the next chapter might be better then this one…. If there is a next chapter….
Anyway review if you like it and if you don't like it then please leave and never return….
