Hello readers,
Quite honestly, I wouldn't be surprised if no one reads this because the first chapter would not exactly make me want to continue with this story. I am the author's sister, and I am trying to help her stop making a fool of herself. I don't read Alex Rider and I wanted to read some of her fan fiction so I begged her to continue this story. However, we then re-discovered how awful this is.
We have decided to take the same idea and many of the same characters and write a completely new story rather than try to salvage this one. She will be more time period correct (no cell phones) and more canon (with Hogwarts in Scotland where it is supposed to be). I am helping her keep within JKR's world and will be editing everything before she posts it to prevent the text message language. I am sure you will enjoy the transformed story idea; I am very excited to get it posted and see your responses.
Thank you, from the author's older sister and a true fan fiction addict.