One of my friends, who asked to remain nameless and who reads a lot of my writing, asked me to drop the first person thing. Truthfully, I'm with him. Making first person is harder than third, so yeah.

Disclaimer: I don't own Naruto, but I do own Jose and Miyu in the story.


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Jose made a run for it away from Miyu. The white-eyed ninja kept close behind, as if he knew where Jose would go. Jose jumped onto one of the buildings near by and focused his chakra on his chest. "Fire style: fire ball jutsu!" The sudden stream of fire made the other ninja halt and cover his eyes. Without hesitation, Jose hopped off the building and rushed inside. Jose fell to the ground exhausted. A minute later, the door burst of its hinges. In its place stood the white-eyed ninja. "How?"

"I can see your chakra!" The ninja then stepped forward. Still on the floor, Jose sent another fireball to his opponent. This time, the ninja leaned to the left, inches away from the heat. His right eye, the one closer to the fire, blinked a couple of times. Maybe I can still get away. As if sensing what Jose was thinking, the ninja grabbed Jose's wrists and held them firmly. In a swift motion, Jose was thrown against a coffee table, now shattered. The ninja took a weird stance in front of Jose. "Try using your fire now." Jose instantly brought his hands together and winced in pain. "I stopped the flow of chakra to your wrists. And your whole body is next. Eight trigrams sixty-four palm!" The ninja began by striking Jose on two spots. Now off balance, Jose was hit twice more, then four, then eight, until the ninja screamed sixty four.

Barely audible, Jose whispered, "No..."

"This is only the beginning of your punishment for the crimes you've done."

That last comment sent a spark of fury inside Jose. "C-Crimes!" The anger in Jose was beginning to build up, and the pain surrounding him wasn't making it better. Jose was shaking at this point. "I only... not her fault..." The words just wouldn't come out right. Sweat was rolling down Jose's face and his veins were overflowing with blood. The ninja took a step back, but was too late. All the built up chakra

inside of Jose exploded out, burning the shirt off of him. The ninja gave a yelled of pain and fell to the ground, covering his eyes. Calmed and out of chakra, Jose realized what he had done. He rushed to the collapsed ninja and knelt down. He was unconscious. Jose gently took his hands away from his face and was relived to see he had covered them in time. Feeling weak enough to die, Jose made his way to Miyu.

Meanwhile in Konoha's Hospital. Kiba's room

Kiba, now healed and in bed, woke up to a soft barking. He sat up and noticed it was Akamaru." Hey boy, I missed you!" A fist came crashing on Kiba's head. "Ah! Who the... Mom!"

Tsume, Kiba's mom, looked down at Kiba and growled. " I take Akamaru for a check up with your sister and this is what happens?" A frightened Kiba explained what had happened. Tsume gave Kiba a quick hug before adding. "I'm glad your okay. C'mon Tsunade told me to fetch you." Tsume chuckled at her joke.

Minutes later at the Hokage's office.

"I see you are better now Kiba." Tsume pushed Kiba forward. Kakashi, Iruka, Shino, and his father, Shibi, were also in the room. "Since our first attempt at capturing Jose and the girl failed, I have brought you all here in order to find and capture them for sure this time. I sent Shikamaru to investigate, but we need people searching for him now." Everyone, except Iruka, agreed. "I know it's hard, but think of what could happen if we let them escape." Iruka seemed to consider this and nodded. "Now then, you all have been informed of Jose's techniques and power. Do not give him any chance to escape. Also..."

At that moment, Lee jumped through the window. "Lady Tsunade, I just found Neji unconscious and injured by the library."

"What!"

"I took him to the hospital already."

"Were the surroundings warm in any way."

This question caught Lee by surprise. "It was kind of chilly when I found him."

"Lee, you will join the new search group. Who knows where Jose could be by now."


I know it's short, but I think somethings got cleared up. At least the suspense is starting to rise!