Thankyou for reading my story!I just finished the whole thing, and it's a total of 28 chapters long, which I will post as soon as get the chance. Also, I'm writing a sequel to it, so if you could just comment please and tell me whether you like it or not that way I know if I should post the sequel or not. Thank you, I really aprreciate it and I hope you like it! :)
~25~
I had finally done it. I had finally shown Remy how much I cared about her and I told her I loved her. The night couldn't get any better for me, and as she made her way back to the pavilion to grab her purse, I stood on the bridge watching her petite figure leave. I didn't want her to go alone, but she told me it would be faster if she just went and she would be right back.
I leaned on the bridge, looking up at all the stars lighting up and the sky and smiling at the memory of Remy's lips on mine. We were finally in the spot I had always dreamed our relationship would be in, but she would always be foremost my best friend whom I could entrust my whole life in.
I heard the bushes ruffle, and I thought that maybe Remy was back already. I turned to see a flash of bright orange flash in front of my eyes, and then Marney was standing on the other side of the bridge, smiling at me.
"What are you doing out here?" I called to her.
She smiled seductively at me. She was behaving in an entirely different manner. She was always so sweet and innocent, but now she was behaving evil and seductive. I had hoped she wasn't too upset about me taking Remy to the dance instead of her.
"Looking for you," she said, her beauty enchanting.
"Oh, well that's nice of you," I was getting nervous now. I didn't know what she wanted.
She stepped closer toward me, and I noticed something different about her. The emerald eyes that used to draw me close to her were now replaced by piercing red eyes.
"What happened to you eyes? Why are they bright red?" I stuttered. I was scared for my life of this girl now.
She came a foot away from me, tilting her head to my cheek, as if she wanted to kiss me. She pulled back and seemed hypnotized, "Oh, Aiden," she mumbled musically, "So good, Aiden. Just like him."
"Like who," I said stepping back.
She tilted her head back and laughed her bell chime laugh, although now, there were hints of evil in it, "Like your father, silly."
I stared at her in utter confusion, "How do you know my father?"
She smiled menacingly, inching her body closer to me, "Oh we go way back. I followed him around for weeks, enchanted by his scent. I couldn't leave, not until I had him."
"What do you mean have him?" I asked scared. Who was this and what happened to Marney?
"Oh, do you know nothing Aiden. Until I had him for myself and killed him!"
I glared at this monster set in front of me, as she was getting closer. "You killed my father?" I said in shock.
She tilted her head back and laughed her evil laugh again, "Of course I did. He was too good to waste. And when he cried for you as I was sucking the life out of him, I knew it would be just as rewarding to have you too. So before I left his comfy little home, I found pictures of you sitting on his desk as well as your phone number, so from there it was quite easy to track you down."
I felt the lump come to my throat and the tears bud in my eyes as I stood in front of a monster. What was she and why did she want to kill me like she did to my father?
I couldn't let her have me like she did my father; I wouldn't give in to her beauty, and with that, I jumped off the bridge and bolted out of the stream and onto the grassy bank. She caught up with me only too easily, and stopped me from going further.
"I wouldn't do that," she said, the evil smile making up her whole face. The rain began to fall again, and I tried to push her out of my way, and throw her to the ground, but she was like a stone. She threw me back up against a tree, with little effort.
My head smashed against the tree, and I felt blood gushing out from somewhere. My body crumpled to the ground, and I tried with all my force to stand up again, but she only ran up to me, and threw me against the stone bridge with full force. I landed in the foot deep water face first, at least one of my legs and arms broken. I could barely move and she knelt down beside me laughing in hysterics, "Silly Aiden, why would you ever try to go up against me. If you only let me get it over with before, you would have felt nothing but pleasure, but now you'll only feel nothing but pain!"
I looked up into the eyes of the girl who I thought understood me so well, but turns out, Remy had been right all along. She wasn't sweet and innocent, she was malicious and evil.
"AIDEN!" I heard the sweet angel voice coming from the girl I loved standing on the edge of the path. Her chestnut brown eyes were swimming with terror and fear and her hair and dress were soaked from the rain.
"Remy, get out of here!" I managed to shout to her, and with that, Marney picked my crippled body up again and flung me against a tree several feet away. I watched her eyes light up as she saw the blood covering my body. As my body hit the tree, I slipped into the dark and in a state of unconsciousness, crying out in my head for Remy and praying that this bloodthirsty creature wouldn't hurt her.
P.s.- This is in Aiden's point of view if you didn't catch on, but the rest will be back to Renesmee's ;)